ShraMan FF [AU]: Coming Home [Update: C12, Pg 68, Oct 28th] - Page 38

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Posted: 8 years ago
Anjali.. You are simply AMAZING! You are so gifted and I absolutely love everthying about the update.

The way you've taken the original Episode and made your tweaks as per the story is wow! 👏 The mommies are having their share of fun teasing the couple and they are so much in love.. ❤️

The confession on the terrace and that kiss... GAH! ☺️ The way you've shown Shravan to be so needy is actually so adorable! 😳 I love this Shravan way more than the one in the show. ❤️

Him spraining his ankle and whining at home when Sumo came was ubberly cute.. 😳

"But I missed you." He mumbled. <<< I could actually picture him sitting on the sofa looking like a kid who's chocolates have been taken from him. 😆

"Why are you so needy?" She teased.
"7 years Sumo." He groaned looking down at her causing her to sigh, whenever he mentioned that her heart just swelled up.
^Awwwiiieee..

Loved loved loved everything.. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter! 😳

Love you.. 🤗 ❤️

~ Mrina <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
I am going to wait until this story is done and re-read it and comment thoroughly, I adore this story so much and waiting for chapters kills me.
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Posted: 8 years ago
I'm extremely late...so sorry Anjali 😔
Read last 3 chapters in a go!!
N i fell in love with your Shraman❤️
The preeti bhoj scene, the terrace scene, the proposal everything is breathtakingly beautiful!!
I wish things in the show wud have been this way ...sigh!!
Loved it to core ❤️
Thanks for the pm 😛

P.s.-Like button is not working so couldnt like your posts ...but i loved them 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
I loved this chapter Anjali!
Hahaha at the note! It was cute!

Sumo convincing Vandy bhabhi for them not being able to perform was sweet. And the scene after that was ☺️

Preeti is super duper smart man! And she leaves them alone! Unlike the 2 guys keeping on pestering them😳😆 Clearly I am liking the secrecy more!

Her not looking at him because she knows him so well!! Their moment was so cute with Shravan being jealous. I usually don't like it when guys are made jealous (like Sumo tried in the show, I HATED that!) But it was cute here! I love how you use dialogues from the previous chapters!

Seems like the two guys are catching up, I hope they don't anytime soon.
I like ShraMan as they are atm hence the above comment😳

Thank you so much for the PM!
Update soon please! You've left me as well as Sumo in suspense about the surprise...😳😉😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh and keep going with the chapters! I love this story, so the more they are, the better😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
absolutely brilliant
continue soon
superb
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Posted: 8 years ago
Anjali I loved how Pushkar was becoming a crush for Shravan..Gurl I really wish to the bromance all over again...Ugghhh damn it!!!!

I so knew you could never make it the Barjatya type,as in there is always gonna be a WILD element and there you go hahah

Luv it...Shravan's a cutesy baby and Sumo is amazing and Pushkar-Aditya are crazy friends who really enjoy teasing Shravan so much!!!!Thanks Anji!!!!

Cheers,
Jassie
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Posted: 8 years ago
I read all your Stories. I don't know how to express the feelings while and after reading them.

You express Shraman and their love very beautifully

Keep writing, let keep our Shraman alive

You are an excellent writer and you are a ⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally...
I was so much waiting for update!!

Cute chapter..
For the first time I liked Preeti, she's not a bimbo here.

And Aditya too...not a jerk here! Pushkar is bae as always❤️
ShraMan parts were hot😳

Please continue soon & don't ever stop writing on ShraMan😊

Thanks for the PM!

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