The Night of the Party...

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Mahi, Smita and I cooked our own story based on the supposed party between the awesome threesome of our show...ie...Shraman and the third wheel Champak!

We are indeed a hopeless lot...persevering endlessly to sit tight till Shraman happen! So here goes the story of our dreams..."The Night of the Party"!

Shravan, Suman and Adi in a disco.

Shravan: Sumo! Come on! Tum dance kyun nahi kar rahi?
Adi: Yes, Suman, tum khush toh ho naa?

Sumo: I think I'm too tired. Mujhe ghar jaana chahiye (absolutely pissed)
She turns but he catches hold of her hand

Shravan: Suman, aisa bhi kya kar rahi ho! Naacho naa! Aditya bhi toh yahin hain
Sumo: Shravan mera haath chodo please, dard ho raha hain

Aditya: Bro, haath chodo uska. I think tumne kuch zyadaa hi pee li hain!

He pulls her hand and drags her out from there...pushes her against the wall and says...

Shravan: Kyon chodoon Sumo? Sach bolo kya tum chahti ho mein hath chod doon?? Bolo Sumo

And she remains tongue tied as she sees Aditya approaching. Aditya tries to pull Shavan back.

Adi: Shravan dekho tum limit cross kar rahe ho...

Shravan leaves her hand and turns to him. Adi is scared.

Shravan: Bhagwan ke liye ab toh chup raho! Main aur Sumo baat kar rahein hain

Adi: Woh meri hone waali biwi hai

Shravan: Like I care a damn! Sabse pehli woh meri Sumo hai, meri Sumo! Samjhe chomu?

He turns to her and pins her again.

Shravan: Sumo bolo...answer my question...chod doon tumhe...is that what you want?

He goes closer to her and whispers...

Shravan: Bolo sumo tum meri sumo ho na...then inches even closer to her ears...his lips were now touching her ears...Sumo bolo!

To take control of the situation...Sumo jerks Shravan aside and says

Sumo: Leave me Shravan...because you are not in your senses!

Shravan: Par you are in your senses...so answer me! Coz if you keep your mouth shut...I know how to open them with mine...in front of everyone...including your future husband!

Aditya loses his cool...and tries to pry Shraman apart again! In the midst of all this...Sumo gets hurt...and blood starts to gush out from her hands...and Shravan gets all worked up! Aditya at last realizes that these two aren't simply "just friends". As Shravan is lost with Sumo's bruised arm...Aditya retracts from the scene...feeling lost and helpless.

Sumo calms Shravan down and asks him why he got drunk and behaved like this when he was the one to break their relationship! Hearing this Shravan completely breaks down and at the top of his voice says...Sumo because I love you more than myself and everybody else! Sumo slowly whispers in his ears...then don't leave my hand...and unable to control her feelings continues to whisper...haan mein tumhari sumo hoon...mere Shravan ki Sumo! She first looks in to his eyes and then lowers her glance towards his lips...shuts her eyes...and kisses Shravan...opening him to a world filled with love, care and trust!

Kamini manages to capture this scene and create a kaand of sorts in front of Tiwari family and bhaisaab!




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Puja, Mahi, Smita...
Bravo!!!
Kya pakaya yaar.. Mazza aa gaya.. Now if only they show anything close to this.. Mazza dugna ho jaye...
But you girls are awesome...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haha! Thanks Puja for compiling this
We rock😎
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Roshni2015

Puja, Mahi, Smita...

Bravo!!!
Kya pakaya yaar.. Mazza aa gaya.. Now if only they show anything close to this.. Mazza dugna ho jaye...
But you girls are awesome...



Yaar...forget it...nothing even remotely close to this will be shown...I am dead sure! Maybe in the midst of another bickering session...Kamini will click a photo...and create a ruckus! Coz I do think Kamini will do something of this sort!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just love aab forum mein sab party kaand stories post hogi and cvs will do a big popat of us...pure party mein shraman baat bhi nahi karenge and they will show chomu dancing with sumo...and shravan jaling
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's really good 😊 enjoyed it !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Joyness

Just love aab forum mein sab party kaand stories post hogi and cvs will do a big popat of us...pure party mein shraman baat bhi nahi karenge and they will show chomu dancing with sumo...and shravan jaling



Yaar don't underestimate our Shraman...ek fight toh banti hai...party ka mahol hai!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome now if only the CVs take a cue from this... But it's going to be phooti kismat as usual for us
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nith125

It's really good 😊 enjoyed it !



😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fernweh

Awesome now if only the CVs take a cue from this... But it's going to be phooti kismat as usual for us



CVs only take cues from neighboring shows apparently! 😆😆

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