CAUGHT - A SHRAMAN TS - PART ONE

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Adeeba

@Aadee04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Hey bud .
You write so well .
This was a hilarious one though .

Do keep writing .
-God bless

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Divya

@DivI10

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Super cool one.. I really want something like this on show..

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-rhythm-

@-rhythm-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

oh zoya what a piece of writing.enjoyed .

Normally i dont read ffs or ss, but wanted to read yours piece of work.and loved it.thx

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

OREO🤗

What a brilliant piece it was.

Such an OS can only be expected out of you.

You gave me a hearty laugh.

This OS outlined the real character of Suman and Shravan really very well.

I can read it umpeeth times and still not get bored of it.

Beautiful concept and Beautifully written.

Loved it.

Do write more!

Thank You for the PM😃

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever
Res!

Unress

Meri Zoya ka OS🥳
Time to party Bro!🥳

Oh my my!! Its for me
Haaaye
Love you Jaan 🤗🤗❤️

Thank you dearie !😳

My reactions:

*ROFL* IS THE WORD!!!🤣🤣🤣
WHAT A CLASSIC MOOD LIGHTENING PIECE!
YOU CAN JUDGE MY EXCITEMENT AND PLEASURE BY NOTICING THESE CAPS!!

HILARIOUSLY FANTASTIC!!
And you say you don't know how to write! Such an outright Liar!

AH! IT'S SO EPIC, I HARDLY HAVE WORDS
So I'll give reactions to this:😉

SUMO TRYING TO FIT A 6"4' SOMETHING EVERYWHERE🤣🤣

SHRAVAN BEING LEAST BOTHERED😎😎

SUMO HYPERVENTILATING 😆😆
SHRAVAN LOOKING AT SUMO'S POPPING ROLLING EYES😆😆😳

CHUHAA DEFENCE
SHRAVAN BANGING HIS HEAD😳🤓
SUMO SHOUTING AT HIM FOR COMING OUT

SHRAVAN ADMIRING A FREAKING SUMO☺️

AND LASTLY, SUMO FORGETTING TO CLOSE THE LATCH 🤪

SUMO CRYING TO KEEP IT UNDER WRAPS🥺🥺🤣

AFTER BABBLING SO MUCH, I DON'T THINK I NEED TO ASK YOU TO CONTINUE THIS
ALREADY ROFLING AT THE RUCKUS TO BE CREATED🤣☺️🤣

Continue Soon

Loads of ROFLING Love and Appreciation 🤣🤗

Hahaha! Mahi you're a darling!

You're being very nice to me😆

I can't tell you how happy I am you approved!!! 🥳

I was not expecting any one to like this.. I stand corrected😉

Yey! You liked it

Thank you so much hon!

I didn't think of continuing this, but chalo il give it a thought😆

Love you too🤗

Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago

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kennashreign

@kennashreign

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

This was so good. I hope this happens on the show. It's such a mood uplifter! You just write more often. Cheers!

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: --fero--
Res

Omg Fero!!

You won't believe it, when I posted this I was feeling bad that you won't be here to read it! I wanted to know what you think...

And would you look at my luck!

You're here🤗

Even if you don't unres this, I'm in a happy place

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Maisha59

@Maisha59

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Good indeed
New concept.
Zoya , u have lovely writing skill. Do write more and often.
Would love to read ur stories.

Lots of love ~
Pratikshaa ❤️

PS:Thanks 4 the pm.

Edited by pratikshaa100 - 9 years ago