CAUGHT - A SHRAMAN TS - PART ONE - Page 4

Originally posted by: pratikshaa100

Good indeed
New concept.
Zoya , u have lovely writing skill. Do write more and often.
Would love to read ur stories.


Lots of love ~
Pratikshaa ❤️


PS:Thanks 4 the pm.

Originally posted by: Eeshaal

Zoya 🤗 jaani superb I was laughing during the whole thing , such a beautifully written piece so funny yet sweet I so want these things to happen in the soap CVS take notes . Love it girl u r hella talented

🤣it was tooo hilarious... was it ur first time... lagta toh nhi h... u writes very welll... i was laughing sometimes giggling coz it was tooo gud...

Zoya 🤗 Such a light hearted , Cute , hilarious os. I sooo want to see this on show. Cuteness overloaded

It's amazing 👍🏼

zoya - this was epic! please no one should catch them - please! i love chup chup ke pyaar

Zoya🤗
Itni Der tak kar kya rahi thi Tum?😡
Pata nahi kitne achchhe shot mil jaate humein agar tujhe Khud se Tera Talent maloom hota?😭
Koi Nahi Der Aaye Durust aaye😆
Ab likhti Rehna😛

Wohoo That was brilliant Piece🥳
Total ShraManish😉
I hate Tears PUSHPA🤣
6 ft 4 inch Thing on bed🤣🤣
"Chuha" 6.4 ka😆
Iss bande ki toh lag gayi🤣

I m waiting For ur next piece...

You write amazingly Zoya🤗

Super hilarious it was.😆

A perfect mood lifter.

I absolutely loved it. You should consider writing more often.

Originally posted by: orion23

Thank you Ritu🤗

I'm glad you liked it!

🤗

Originally posted by: shinegirl100

🤣it was tooo hilarious... was it ur first time... lagta toh nhi h... u writes very welll... i was laughing sometimes giggling coz it was tooo gud...

naak tod deti meri abhi... 🤣awww

Samjhte kya ho tum apne aap ko?"Shravan coolly replied, " Tumhara aashiq" this one was like amazing 🤣

the part where he comes close to her and wo chillati h... omg... kaan phaad dogi mere 🤣maza maza aaya maza🤣

the way she tries to hide him... was hilarious... idhar chupa.. yaa udhar chupa... jaane kahan main kidhar chupa 🤣

"ab kya bolun"... yahi tha na... pagal h ye ladki sach mein

.. 🤣

and dont roll ur eyes 🤣... he is too crazy

itis like when they had a convo here... it was full of crazinesss... bomb explode hua aaj craziness ka... reallly loved it... do write more... wanna tead more craziness

🤣

with loadsss of love

anupriya❤️