TOGETHER FOREVER - A SHRAMAN OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: Ana_mika

Thoroughly enjoyed reading the shramanlicious OS. Thank You, Priyam for this beautiful treat.🤗

The confession was just as real and blends so well with their character. I would love to see something like this. And, the seven vows were very moving

Originally posted by: orion23

OMG! Priyam ! Your OS!

And kya likha hai!

To be very honest, I was grinning throughout and during the vows I tore up!

You have written the vows with sheer beauty and simplicity!

It was perfect!

This is exactly how I want them to get married!

❤️

Loved it!

You have outdone yourself👏

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

Master piece👏

The way of your writing is mindblowing..like seriously how beautifully you blended shraman past nd childhood with seven vows and time voiceovering their journey...thats really unique..

Fabulous pritam..you are awesome writer🤗

Originally posted by: Eeshaal

Priyam 🤗 you are amazing what a beautifully written story , short simple and sweet the flow of words were effortless and I literally imagine Shraman taking pheras in same manner . Just superb keep writing my friend

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Zoya *hugs*
Seriously i wasnt expecting this kind of reaction.
I really suck in writing emotional stuffs. But your comment made my day. Thanks for the encouragement.. Thank u once again my friend

Originally posted by: shinegirl100

awww... it was tooo gud... aaaj main lamaba wala comment karoongi... i loved it

"You must be wondering who am I?? Lemme introduce myself..I am DESTINY. Cursing me already *smirks* , well stop it coz its story time. Shhh...no chitchat. Lets begin..."

i love ur way of writing... and the reactions u write are always true... i noticed this with me... and i was like... are u future reaction teller🤣

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" To bola kyun nhi lambu...court me kitna kuch bolte ho, ek I Love you bolne me itna time laga diya. Ab kuch bologe bhi ya yun hi but banke baithe rhoge??. Chhodo main hi bol deti hu. Shravan Malhotra I'm deeply, madly in love with you. Kya tum mujhe jindagi bhar jhelne ke liye taiyar ho? Soch lo abhi mauka hai..fir nhi bhaag sakte."

u know this is one of my fav part of the os... her dialogues... omg.. they were awesome... they made giggle... too cute yrr... lambu... 🤣... soch lo abhi mauka h🤣... beautifully penned down...

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the next part i will copy paste it... it was the phere part... the way u described each phera with their convos was totally amazing... tooo gud...hats offf to u... u r an amazing writer... ❤️

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next part... pushku and sharavu convo... teri shaadi hogi tab puchunga🤣ohh my they r tooo cute... teasing parts r too gud

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there is a lot more to say... bt zyada lamba ho jaayega 🤣

loved it reaaalllyyy very much... 🤗.. maine aadha comment mein toh aapki story copy kari h... sorry for that... bt i wanted to explain it welll...

with loadsss of love

anupriya❤️

Originally posted by: sneha_17

I think Confession in the show would happen the same way probably

Ramanath will tell Sumo that Sharvan doing everything out of Guilt, Sharvan and Sumo confront each other and finally Sharvan burst out😊

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Amazingly written
Especially their hatke confession
Love the way you describe their scenes with Sanath vacchans
It was like they were already married
Destiny always has a way to unite them forever

Originally posted by: orion23

Oh it was amazing!

You are damn good at this!

I loved it!

I'll repeat! The pheras❤️