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Eeshaal

@Eeshaal

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Priyam 🤗 you are amazing what a beautifully written story , short simple and sweet the flow of words were effortless and I literally imagine Shraman taking pheras in same manner . Just superb keep writing my friend

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Anupriya

@shinegirl100

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

awww... it was tooo gud... aaaj main lamaba wala comment karoongi... i loved it

"You must be wondering who am I?? Lemme introduce myself..I am DESTINY. Cursing me already *smirks* , well stop it coz its story time. Shhh...no chitchat. Lets begin..."

i love ur way of writing... and the reactions u write are always true... i noticed this with me... and i was like... are u future reaction teller🤣

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" To bola kyun nhi lambu...court me kitna kuch bolte ho, ek I Love you bolne me itna time laga diya. Ab kuch bologe bhi ya yun hi but banke baithe rhoge??. Chhodo main hi bol deti hu. Shravan Malhotra I'm deeply, madly in love with you. Kya tum mujhe jindagi bhar jhelne ke liye taiyar ho? Soch lo abhi mauka hai..fir nhi bhaag sakte."

u know this is one of my fav part of the os... her dialogues... omg.. they were awesome... they made giggle... too cute yrr... lambu... 🤣... soch lo abhi mauka h🤣... beautifully penned down...

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the next part i will copy paste it... it was the phere part... the way u described each phera with their convos was totally amazing... tooo gud...hats offf to u... u r an amazing writer... ❤️

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next part... pushku and sharavu convo... teri shaadi hogi tab puchunga🤣ohh my they r tooo cute... teasing parts r too gud

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there is a lot more to say... bt zyada lamba ho jaayega 🤣

loved it reaaalllyyy very much... 🤗.. maine aadha comment mein toh aapki story copy kari h... sorry for that... bt i wanted to explain it welll...

with loadsss of love

anupriya❤️

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sneha

@sneha_17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

I think Confession in the show would happen the same way probably

Ramanath will tell Sumo that Sharvan doing everything out of Guilt, Sharvan and Sumo confront each other and finally Sharvan burst out 😊

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
Very well written. I liked how you related those instances between them with saath vachan. I for one thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

Thanks a lot dear. Glad you liked it

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Hhkfw
👏👏👏

Thanks dear

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Unress

Priyam Doc! This was so amazing <3
Destiny POV was so different!😛

Such a blend of emotions...
The confession was totally practical. I can see that happening already *dreamy face*😳

The Seven Vows were very touching
The best one the Kids one *blushing*😆

I loved this!!!

Love and appreciation🤗

Mahi now I'm Priyam doc:-).
U liked it ...thank u sooo much darling. This means a lot to me *hugs*

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: mineforever
Really loved it Priyam 👏
Especially the seven steps and how u gave justification for each.. 😳
When r v going to get anywhere near confession in the show...

Thank u sooo much ayesha *hugs*
I wish we get a confession soon...cvs are u listening?

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: manisha771
This is so damn beautiful👏

Thanks a lot dear.

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ---awe10some---
Superb
Amazingly written 👍🏼

Thanks a lot Siddhi

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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Priyam di 🤗
It is fantabulous beautiful their confession in hatke style was cute and last part seven vows you had used fbs wonderfully overall it's fab👏 ❤️

Edited by Zenab78 - 9 years ago

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