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Flibbertigibbet

@Flibbertigibbet

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Wow! This is spectacular!

The last line especially!

Reminded me of "the way gatsby looked at daisy". <3

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Awesome.
Loved the whole thing.

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Anupriya

@shinegirl100

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

It was a beautiful piece of work. Loved it yaa... anazing. It was vry interesting to read also. Write more and pm me for your future works.

With lots of love

-anupriya

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Again a masterpiece 👏
Their story from unknown's perspective
Mind blowing... 👍🏼

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...-Riya-...

@...-Riya-...

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Aww this was lovely as always.
I hope we get to see their wedding before the show ends.

Thanks for the PM.

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Hello, Fluff Queen! 🤗

Very beautiful narrative from an outsider's perspective, retaining the essence of ShraMan and the beauty of their relationship.

Your pieces are always so simple, yet so, so mesmerizing! It is always a treat to read your work.

P.S: I think I have a couple of yours OS' to catch up on. Hopefully, soon!

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Riya

@Ri21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

U KNOW WHAT???

U ARE AMAZING

LIKE THIS IS YOUR BEST WRITING TILL DATE

I HAVE NO WORDS WHAT TO SAY

LIKE WHEN I FINISHED READING IT I HAD FEW TEARS IN MY EYES AND A SMILE

I REALLY WANTED TO READ SOMETHING LIKE THIS

LIKE THEIR STORY FROM SOMEONE ELSE'S EYES
AND THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL

LIKE I HAVE NO WORDS
GOSH

LOVE U ALOT FOR THIS
❤️

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astonm

@astonm

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: crazy_vaish
Amazing third person POV 👏. I wish I could tell you how much I'd loved this piece of work but I'm very bad with words. Its sooo beautiful. I think this would be my personal favourite of your works till now. It stirred my heart and feels like I'm actually watching it happening in front of my eyes especially the marriage scene. Feeling bad for the narrator of this story😭. This is going to stay with me close to my heart for a long time❤️. Would love to read more from you. Please continue.

PS: I have a wish that you write a SS or FF on the current track after the Shravan-Nirmala face-off. Would definitely love to read your take on the track. Please accept my request.

Thank youuu! :D

@bold: I think I want to watch how the CVs play the track out, with this show I feel like I won't be disappointed with their version, and I only write track spinoffs when I am pissed at how the show handled it hahaha. Plus, I don't want the commitment of a SS/FF right now due to time constraints, I would hate to start something and then have to leave it floating around the internet when I am on a time crunch. So I guess we'll see!

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Anjali, it's so beautiful I have tears in my eyes..

Don't have words to express how beautiful it is.

Shraman's story from a complete stranger's eyes is something totally different. Loved how their love was obvious to everyone except for themselves

And I just hope the story follows the same path as your story.

It really can't get better than this😳

P.S.: Thanks a ton for posting it today..

Nau june is here and we need all the positivity that we can possibly get😆

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thefangirllife

@thefangirllife

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

You are killing me with this, i read this on the bus this morning and i was trying so hard to not smile like an idiot!! it's soo cute and even though i don't want to i feel sorry for the woman who's narrating! Loved the ending, you should totally elaborate on the proposal...or what happened in the office, pretty please!!

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