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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Wow!!!...just wow!!!
First of all thanks for the PM!!
The way you write anjali...it's brilliant...I sooo love it!!!👏
It is one of the most brilliant one shot I have read!!
Loads of thanks to you for writing!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

It's a masterpiece!!!!

Loved it to the core!!!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
First Thing when I logged into IF And Show OS by Anjali,Smile just made a way to My Face🤗
No Need to even Open PM😉
What I just Read was Wonderful
Leave Me Awestruck
ShraMan's Journey From 3rd Person's POV is as much Beautiful as By Their Own Perspective
Aww You made everything Sooo Much Beautiful, Just Re joyed Ek Duje Ke Vaaste.

And That End you gave to The Story
I would love to Say,The way You Described Their Confession and after Story was Just Flawless, Heavenly Beautiful
Awww This Part
"Sometimes you could see her feet on top of his while they stood in his office, it was when they were hugging or kissing, he seemed to pick her up when they hugged and if you listened closely you could hear a little squeal of happiness from her whenever her feet were lifted off the ground. He always walked her to the car and kissed her forehead before she left."☺️

Yesterday's Episode & Your Os is just like Cherry on The Cake🤪🥳

Comeback ASAP with another #ShraManlicious writing🤗❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Amazing third person POV 👏. I wish I could tell you how much I'd loved this piece of work but I'm very bad with words. Its sooo beautiful. I think this would be my personal favourite of your works till now. It stirred my heart and feels like I'm actually watching it happening in front of my eyes especially the marriage scene. Feeling bad for the narrator of this story😭. This is going to stay with me close to my heart for a long time❤️. Would love to read more from you. Please continue.

PS: I have a wish that you write a SS or FF on the current track after the Shravan-Nirmala face-off. Would definitely love to read your take on the track. Please accept my request.
Edited by crazy_vaish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
OMG
I will Neva get tired of saying what a brilliant writer you are.
Amazing. Evry time I read your os I go like it's my fav and then when I read next one I go like this one is my fav. I enjoy every line of your stories and it keeps me hook more than a thriller novel where you r about to find out the secret you were reading about.
Always look forward for your stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
This was yet another brilliant writeup of urs❤️
jus loved reading abt shraman frm a third persons pov😳
well written anjali lovedd ttt❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haww that was so cute, n even much cuter in the third person POV. It was like a dream ❤️

Fabulous that was 👍🏼

Fanx 4 pm dr n hpe that the writers' block disapper quickly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Yay you are back! Beautiful os Anjali!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Wow..it was beautiful, loved it ❤️
Thanks for d pm, keep writing😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
It was spellbinding, so dreamy
I really loved the story in third person pov ❤️
Whenever i read ur stories i get transported to diffferent world, ur stories are pure magic 👏
Their journey from best friends to soulmates is so beautifully penned , i was lost in it
Thank u anjali for a lovely os ...u made my day ❤️
Thanks a lot for pm

Take care
Priyam

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