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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

A third person POV is actually one of my favs to read...to see how the someone else sees Shravan and Sumo. I liked how you started with the current track and then played it into your own special Anjali..it was absolutely perfect :)

- Reya <3

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

It was So beautiful ! Loving your works since BI days , love your writing !

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Shah Sair Hassan

@ShahSAIR

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

pehley laga It's Sumo jo shravan ko patana chahti hai bt dheerey dheerey

concept clear huwa..

i love this whole picture..

it was like i ma wathing it..

thanx for pm

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 51

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

This one was as if I'm actually narrating this on my own!

I walked out of that wedding hoping that one day I would find a man that looked at me like Shravan Malhotra looked at his wife.

YES YES YES! ❤️

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 9 years ago

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Ishq-high

@Ishq-high

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Wow just wow

You have left me speechless

I feel like I have all the adjectives I could possibly use on all ur works.

This is just plain awesome...loved it

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bigddfan1

@bigddfan1

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

lovely awesome and beautifully written. ur version of first person very good

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

I am sitting with hope that one day we will get to see this in the show. Just the way yoy described the engagement and wedding.

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chestha5931

@chestha5931

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Completely blown away darling...
A huge hug from me to you, for writing such an awesome piece on ShraMan.. .
Hugs hugs hugs :)

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Sh518obi

@Sh518obi

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Anjali...how do you do it? You are so talented. You make me fall in love with your stories.

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eleutheromania

@eleutheromania

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

This is SO creative. I am in awe of your writing. This idea is so unique and so well written out that I felt sorry for this girl even though I support ShraMan. Great piece yet again!

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