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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Loved the concept
Love story from a third eye
I could so imagina shravan looking with all the love at suman
They are just the cutest and most adorable ppl
Awesome os

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alltheway

@alltheway

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

amazingly written. loved every bit of it. keep writing. Looking forward to reading more of your stories and thanks for the pm.

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indranigupta

@indranigupta

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Your name is Anjali, rite

This is awesome... seen from an outsider's perspective yet never reducing the love of these two characters. Awesome... take a bow lady👏

And hank you for the pm

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Anjali🤗

You awesome girl!!

I loved this one!! No words befitting to praise this piece!

It was their perfect happy ending..

I love how you used third person narrative, made it all the more beautiful👏

Thanks for the PM😃

Can't wait to read your next!!

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alie333

@alie333

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

This was super awesome. I like this version of their chemistry. Beautifully written

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-BeYourSelf-

@-BeYourSelf-

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

I loved nd enjoyed reading their journey from 3rd POV..

So beautifully written..

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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Beautifully written Anjali ...lovely ending

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

OMG!

This a such a beautiful OS.

You wrote it all. From the very beginning of what we saw to the very end we will probably see and that too from a third person. The words you used,the contrast you used were perfect.

I always look forward to your stories and they never leave a chance to surprise me.

You are a way too good writer.

I wish you could write a novel one day.

Write more soon.

Thanks for the pm

-Mitali❤️