* You And Me -- Its Us * : A ShraMan SS (Complete Pg 14)

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: MittuArsha

And as soon as I posted this you updated.
This update was superb! Glad that you did not show the immediate reunion!

Thanks a lot again! You understood it well😛

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renjini263

@renjini263

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Mahiii 🤗

Lovely update.. Just read all the three parts.. U r an amazing writer..

Shravan decides to confess and he gets the biggest shock. he meets his mom. Sumo tries to explain bt all in vain. Glad Nirmala atleast stood for Sumo I mean defended her. I hope today also she does😆

Ramnath understood that Shravan had gone to tiwari villa and he goes there too..

And they started to argue. Glad Shravan listened everything. Finally Ramnath accepted his fault..

I feel very bad for Shravan. Sumo tells them to give Shravan some tym.

waiting for the next part.. Please update soon :)

and yup loved those paragraphs about understanding and ego one's :)

Take care. Stay blessed :)

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Jamina Mohammed

@Snowflakes.

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Just loved it!!! Mahi

And now I'm reading ur DevAskhi Stories. You are awesome Girl!! 👏

Edited by -Jamina - 9 years ago

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Mahi ur updates are always a delight to read 😳
I still dont like ramnath
Poor shravan is hurting so much 😭
Super duper chapter 👏 👏

P.s.- right now this track was more imp than what u promised me.. but dont forget in the next chapter 😉
Thanks for a super quick update ❤️

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Sidhi

@ArtThouTheBest

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Fabulous 👍🏼 👍🏼. Thats all i can say

Looking forward to nxt update

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kennashreign

@kennashreign

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Woah! This is amazing!! I love the way you've revealed the truth to Shravan. You're a really good writer. Continue soon!

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Anupriya

@shinegirl100

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Loved it very much. It is amazing. Cant even guess the story u r planning for us ahead. Eager to read the next part. Do update soon pleeease.

with lots of love

-anupriya

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Silverrmoon

@Silverrmoon

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Res...will be back. Thank you for the Pm Mahi 😃

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Read ur ss in one go
Really interesting concept
Shravan is struck to whom to choose
He felt so much lost
Sumo should be with him in this
Continue soon