* You And Me -- Its Us * : A ShraMan SS (Complete Pg 14)

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Mahi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: pinky.padda
wow
absolutely mind blowing
totally love it
cannot wait to read more

Thank you so much!😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Manyata5
Hats off to you
You made their confrontation amazing yet heart breaking
I am really glad Ram accepted his mistakes
Its amazing
Continue soon

Aww

That's a heartwarming compliment! Thanks a lot😳

Will do😊

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Mahi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Eeshaal
Love it mahishee 🤗 , I don't know why didn't I read this before ? Both chapters are beautifully written . Plz don't stop keep going , can't wait for more .

Thank you so much dear!

I won't stop, so no worries there😉

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Mahi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Thank you Nileshni and -BeYourSelf- 🤗

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Zenab

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Mahi as usual amazing...confrontation part is wonderfully updated ...awesome ...finally he accepted that he was the one at fault..hope sumo is going to support him in this situation.. Waiting for next update..loved it

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Mahi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

^Thank you Zenab!😳

Yupp, Sumo will be there!

Will update very soon😛

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Mahi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Hey guys! Yesterday's Epi was a masterpiece. In awe of the short realisation and hug.❤️ Now before we move onto today's heartbreak, I update the story. Chpt 3!

Chapter 3

Without saying a word, Shravan left from the place. There was nothing left to speak now. It was evident that he was born to be betrayed, he was destined to be ditched.

He had loved his mother with all his heart: She left him alone, all to himself, without having a word with him.

He loved his best friend Sumo: She broke his trust and let him down, rather insulted him at every possible place, whether it was the Prom or when he wanted to talk with her.

He trusted his father, looked upto him: And he was the man who was the reason behind him ,hating his mother.

What should he do now? He wasn't even sure it was worth living in this cruel world. He had spent 10 years of his life, hating someone so dear to him. And today he finds out that his mother was suffering as much as him.

What was expected of him? That was the thing he couldn't really understand.

Back there, Ramnath was shooting daggers at Nirmala. She wouldn't be spared if Shravan was snatched from him, hence.

Finally, Sumo broke the ghastly silence:

"Mujhe Lagta hai ki Shravan ko thoda time dena chahiye. He needs space to think about this."

And both of them agreed to this. They would give him time to sort it out himself, what he wanted of them. Both were at fault here and it was upto Shravan now, whom did he want to confide in-- his mother's love or his father's trust. The decision would sure be very difficult, moreover heartbreaking for the one who was left out.

A few days passed this incident. Shravan immersed himself in work. Ramnath couldn't bear to this new strange environment, so he found himself a conference to attend and left for Jaipur.

Meanwhile, Nirmala stayed at Tiwari Killa. Her heart said that her son would accept her. It was her faith in her upbringing.

One such day, Shravan was sitting alone in his bedroom. Life had taken a somersault for him. It was days since he had last heard from Sumo or even Ramnath. He silently waited for her call everyday. But he himself had told her not to contact him. Still, why couldn't she call just once... just once? Uh! Why was life so complicated?

As he searched his shelf for some Law Reference Books, a book fell down. He picked it up. It was his family album.

A Young Shravan smiling his toothless gums with Nirmala and Ramnath holding him.

A still older boy, riding his cycle. A big Shravan holding his Tenth Standard Certificate with his proud parents beside him.

Then, his mom disappeared. Just he and his Dad in his Twelfth Graduation.

Then came Sumo.

They pouting for a selfie, riding cycle together, having a gola with painted tongues, getting ready for the Prom Night.

And then the last snap, the most recent one. A Shravan Suman selfie with fingertips hanging from their mouths. This was his world: Suman, Nirmala and Ramnath. Will it survive? Or crash?

-Mahi

This is short. But an important to connect with future events. Sorry Priyam, had to bring this in middle of what I promised. But you'll get it in the next update.😉

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Mitali Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Looks like you are on super roll.

Back to back updates! But I am loving it.

I read both the chapters and I loved them too the core.

First Chapter gave me all sad feelings whereas the second gave me a hope.

I loved the twist. Waiting for the next chapter(which I guess you are going to give soon)

And please take care of your health.

You are an amazing writer,I love reading your works.

-Mitali❤️

And as soon as I posted this you updated.

This update was superb! Glad that you did not show the immediate reunion!

Edited by MittuArsha - 9 years ago

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Mahi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: MittuArsha
Looks like you are on super roll.
Back to back updates! But I am loving it.
I read both the chapters and I loved them too the core.
First Chapter gave me all sad feelings whereas the second gave me a hope.
I loved the twist. Waiting for the next chapter(which I guess you are going to give soon)
And please take care of your health.
You are an amazing writer,I love reading your works.

-Mitali❤️

Thank you so much Mitali! You're no less a fab writer yourself, so this comment means a lot!😳

Ahem, ahem! The third chpt lies right above you. Do read it😆

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Mitali Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Thank you so much Mitali! You're no less a fab writer yourself, so this comment means a lot!😳

Ahem, ahem! The third chpt lies right above you. Do read it😆

I realised this right now. Editied in the previous comment. Do read it😳

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