EDKV Collective OS: ongoing part3, plz join in guys..

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: mizzundaztud
Wow ppl, amazing yaa... It's going great... I will update it in the main post tomorrow...and will give my gutter inputs too 🤣
Ab mazaa aa raha hai ise padh ke...

Hi yaar... (what's ur name?)
I loved this idea... and I am enjoying posting this light hearted OS here... will u do one thing go.. Instead of posting all the parts in the main post please make small parts by merging 3 4 small parts!!
Also plz make and please make an index of which page has whose part on page 1...
Thanks!! 😊

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Regina

@mizzundaztud

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Amreen...

Hi yaar... (what's ur name?)
I loved this idea... and I am enjoying posting this light hearted OS here... will u do one thing go.. Instead of posting all the parts in the main post please make small parts by merging 3 4 small parts!!
Also plz make and please make an index of which page has whose part on page 1...
Thanks!! 😊

I am Regina, ppl call me Regi.. I sure will do that.. Looks like this will turn into a TS or something... Will update it and make index as u said... Till then keep writing

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Amreen...

Yes.. but when Shilaja and my update together messed it up you added a good addition with the flashback of the movie scene, in such a good way that it merges amazingly with the story!!
So I really loved the way u cleaned out mess 🤣
Did u read my continuation???

Nothing great yaar...😳

I read it.. It's amazing! You and Shailaja are doing an amazing job... Adding so much cuteness and charm to the story...

Great work girls👏👏

I loved both the parts... 😳😳

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Unressed!!

Plz have a read!! 😊

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Sumo had to admit that Shravan was doing his task quite well. He had engaged Daboo in such a manner that even his wild detective mind failed to notice something unusual.

Ranging from his Studies to Sports, he was interviewing him in detail and Daboo was equally enjoying himself. As Daboo went to freshen up and change, Shravan rushed to kitchen. The cake was ready and it smelled too good! If Sumo hadn't been guarding it, he was all ready to gulp it down!

Sumo, as if reading his hungry mind, gave him snacks to eat. As she was handing over to him a plate, they shared a cute eyelock. Shravan was mesmerised in those deep brown orbs whereas Sumo got captivated in those jet black eyes.

Just then, Nanu came and saw them in this awkward position.

Ughm ughm! He coughed.

They instantly jerked out of their trance. Sumo was blushing too hard, so she decided to leave whereas Shravan was too lost to react, so he just stood there.

Nanu: Karte kya Ho?

Shravan: Woh mere Papa ki yahan...

Nanu: Maine Poocha karte kya Ho?! Jitna Poocha, itna hi bolo!

Shravan: Nanaji woh main...

Nanu: Nanaji? Yeh tumko kisne bola? Mujhe Mr. Tiwari bulaoo.

Shravan was sweating like hell now. He was freaking out. But the fault wasn't his. Nanu was interviewing him so seriously, as if he was a groom and he was to marry Sumo.

"Shut up Shravan! Focus!", he reminded himself. After taking a deep breath...

Shravan: Mr. Tiwari main Ek lawyer Hoon, London based. Ek mahine ke liye India aaya Hoon.

The longest sentence he had managed to speak till now. And he was a bit proud of it.

Hope it was fine guys... Not very good, though. Take over now!

Edited by Artist_Forever - 9 years ago

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever
Ress for Amreen's update

U mean u wanna continue from mine...

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Amreen...

U mean u wanna continue from mine...

Yes😛

Fab update... Gosh! I don't be able to keep up this hotness quotient... Am bad at this!😆

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Yes😛

Fab update... Gosh! I don't be able to keep up this hotness quotient... Am bad at this!😆

Are u will write awesome.. I know 😳
Jaldi update karo 😉
I really can't wait... 😆

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever
Updated!!

Awesome is the word here... girl u rocked this time.. the best update till date by u... Loved it to the core... Loved the end!! Seriously 👏

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Reserved to continue from Artist_Forever's post. Unreserved.

The cross-questioning by Nananji was still on and Shravan was stuttering and plodding his way through this maze. Of course it was no mean thing dealing with Raghuveer Tiwari who was the Baap of his Baap, Ramnath Malhotra in this area.

Nanaji: Peethe ho?

Shravan: Ji, haan!

Nanaji: What?

Shravan: Matlab, ji nahin! Ahem! Ahem!...Main madhya ka sevan ke bilkul kilaf hoon! Actually I'm working with an NGO which fights against alcoholism. I even attend their meetings and give speeches about the dangers of alcohol drinking

Nanaji: I was just trying to ask you if you'd like to have a soft drink.

Shravan: Oh, that...yes, I would like to have a drink. I'm feeling very thirsty.

Nanaji: Tumhari girl friends hain? Smart ho, handsome ho, intelligent bhi dikhthe ho, toh mere hisaab seh hone chahiye.

Shravan looked a bit confused at what to say in reply to this. Suman was listening with very great interest to what his answer would be. It was true that he had dated several girls before this. But none of this was serious.

What he felt for Sumo was very real and sincere. She was the first girl whom he wanted to trust his entire heart and life with. He could not damage his reputation with her by telling he had dated several girls before this to her Nanaji.

God much as he liked being in Tiwari Villa in Suman's presence, this cross-questioning was becoming too much for him to handle. Finally Shravan nodded a-la the painting of Monalissa in a criss-cross fashion which neither told the exact truth nor fabricated an apparent falsehood! Both Nanaji and and Sumo interpreted it according to their own convenience and preference.

Then finally, Nanaji asked the most important thing of all, "Do you play chess?"

Shravan(With great excitement): Yes, Nanaji, matlab Tiwariji!

Nanaji: In that case, let's see how well you play. In our entire circle, only Suman and Ramnath are the ones who can defeat me in a game of chess. Suman is so good at this game that I decided that I was going make the person who could defeat me as her husband. Equality you see! So you think you have it in you to defeat me?

Shravan: With your blessings, Nanaji...matlab Tiwariji, I will definitely try my best!

Nanaji: And I promise one thing! If you defeat me in this game, you can call me Nanaji just like Suman calls me. We can get rid of this expression Tiwariji' then!

Shravan: Ok, Tiwariji!

Nanaji: Mind you only if you win!

Edited by shailusri1983 - 9 years ago