EDKV Collective OS: ongoing part3, plz join in guys.. - Page 4

I will be writing in bold black arial font..
Is that fine???

Originally posted by: Amreen...

I will be writing in bold black arial font..
Is that fine???

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Yeah! That's fine

Sailaja you could write in orange or maybe light blue? Choose a colour dude... It's not that difficult😆

Ok.. I have given a small addition... plz gave a look on page 4 😊
Let me know how was that...

Originally posted by: Amreen...

Ok.. I have given a small addition... plz gave a look on page 4 😊
Let me know how was that...

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

That's better... Coz i was getting confused where u took it😆

I'll continue😉

And a well written part,btw😛

No actually I was having no idea when shailaja wrote.. maybe we posted at the same time... because when I was ready to update I saw that the conversation between Shravan n Pushkar was going on... and then after I posted I saw updates by two people.. eternity n shaisuri... so even I was confused ki yeh kya ho gaya... so I tried to merge it up with the previous updates... I guess we should keep a rule that updates should be within a gap of 30 minutes each... and that too after reserving a post so that no update comes in between his and the previous one and confuse the readers and the writer gets to write his part without confusion... is this idea good to apply???

Originally posted by: Amreen...

No actually I was having no idea when shailaja wrote.. maybe we posted at the same time... because when I was ready to update I saw that the conversation between Shravan n Pushkar was going on... and then after I posted I saw updates by two people.. eternity n shaisuri... so even I was confused ki yeh kya ho gaya... so I tried to merge it up with the previous updates... I guess we should keep a rule that updates should be within a gap of 30 minutes each... and that too after reserving a post so that no update comes in between his and the previous one and confuse the readers and the writer gets to write his part without confusion... is this idea good to apply???

Or else we could do one more thing...as soon as anyone gets an idea that he or she can continue the further part continuing from a part from any other writer... then he should first quote the part n tell that he or she wants to continue n then no one else can continue it for the next hour n if the person doesn't continue then anyone else can quote to inform that he/she is gonna continue n then continue or else it will be a mess again.. n the story will become confusing... 😆

Originally posted by: Amreen...

Or else we could do one more thing...as soon as anyone gets an idea that he or she can continue the further part continuing from a part from any other writer... then he should first quote the part n tell that he or she wants to continue n then no one else can continue it for the next hour n if the person doesn't continue then anyone else can quote to inform that he/she is gonna continue n then continue or else it will be a mess again.. n the story will become confusing... 😆

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

<font color="#9900cc">It was evening and as Shravan got into his car, he couldn't help but remember that movie incident.</font>

<font color="#9900cc">Pushkar: Ohh common bhaiyya! Kisi Mantri ki party mein nahi jaa rahe. Why are you freaking out with your clothes like girls? He giggled.</font>

<font color="#9900cc">But Shravan knew that he had to look his best. It was Sumo's invite after all. How could he not look best?</font>

<font color="#9900cc">After exasperating Pushkar to the limit, they both set out for the movie.</font>

<font color="#9900cc">They reached just in time and saw a not so pleased Sumo waiting outside.</font>

<font color="#9900cc">Sumo: Ek aur minute late hote toh I would have left you both! She exclaimed.</font>

<font color="#9900cc">The trio rushed inside and as they got into the lift, Sumo and Shravan bumped into each other in a hurry. Their heads clashed slightly.</font>

<font color="#9900cc">"Oops!", came Sumo's reflex.</font>

<font color="#9900cc">They settled into the Hall, with Sumo sitting between Shravan and Pushkar.</font>

<font color="#9900cc">The movie went fantastic and Shravan enjoyed it a little more, reasons unknown to him😉</font>

<font color="#9900cc">As they left the Hall, Sumo was emotionally happy while the boys seemed not so affected and normal.</font>

<font color="#9900cc">Sumo: Tum ladkon ke pass toh dil hi nahi hota!</font>

<font color="#9900cc">" That's not right", thought Shravan. But he remained quiet, just looking at her all the time as if time stood still.</font>

<font color="#9900cc">Shravan realised that he had reached Tiwari Villa. It was a well built mansion. Not so pleasing from outside but there was a certain warmth in it. Shravan liked that feeling and was highly impatient to get in and meet the girl of his dreams that had made him insane in just two days.</font>

PS- A request to Sailaja and Amreen, please write smaller bits so that the writers have enough freedom to turn the story their way. Not that these parts which you both wrote were binding, but just in case, in future it might get binding for us.😉

I will continue... will write exactly at 2.30 to maintain the time gaps... and yes sorry... I will write short updates... I actually love to write long updates... to showcase emotions and feelings along with situations... coz I feel this way the story becomes more entertaining n that's why my updates are always long..
Will try to control my habit... 😊