You are my world- shraman ff( part 3 pg-5 @pril 14,2016 updtd) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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😆hey guys back with a not so happening part...

Part-2

"Pushkar...Vandy ko lekar jaa"- ordered Ramnath as Pushkar literally had to drag away Vandy but not before winking an all the best' to his troublesome brother.

Shravan glared at him but had to divert his eyes as soon as his father stepped in front of him, demanding answers to the current predicament. He could only look away...but (sigh) that was a mistake...!! His eyes fell on the bed as ACTION REPLAYY occurred in his mind, making him go a deeper shade of red.

Damn that woman for being so tempting'.

What are you saying? Tempting...and that too SUMOO'

It's not like as if I was able to do something to her'

What are you, Shravan Malhotra? A PERVERT...!'

Ramnath watched in awe as his son kept making weird faces, from dreamy to chiding...disappointing to amusing...!

"Ahhmmm...I was going to ask you about what was happ..."- teased Ramnath as Shravan intervened.

"I have a headache, dad...good night"- replied he speedily and jumped onto the bed in a second, hiding himself under the quilt.

"Don't get too hot in there"- suggested Ramnath before leaving with a teasing smile adorning his lips.

"I am already hot"- mumbled Shravan as he went into deep slumber.

Suman twisted and turned on her bed as there was no way sleep was gonna knock her unconscious , after such a blunder. She could still feel his breathing on her lips...she could still feel his wet chiseled body.

But nothing happened'

Whattt?...why are you so disappointed about that'

But he looked so delicious'

He ain't some friggin food...Suman Tiwari'

Wait...by no means, I am a cannibal'

"What the hell is going on in that damned head of mine"- sulked Sumo getting up from the bed.

"Damn this bed, that woman foiled it and now sleep ain't knocking me out" sulked Shravan as he left the bed to take a shower AT 1:30 IN THE NIGHT!!

He tried to cool off his heart which apparently seemed to be on a major rampage. Even the water droplets stood no chance to that heat that his body was experiencing...turning into steam in a split second. He looked at himself in the mirror only to find her staring at him. He raised his hand to feel her only for her to disappear on him.

"Why...Why can she so easily play with my emotions? Why my heart jumps when she sees me like that? Why it hurts when she is not before my eyes? Why can't I imagine any other woman in her place?"- complained Shravan as he ruffled his locks.

"What's that weird feeling in my chest? Why can't I hate him for the cruel joke, he played to hurt my pride? Why am I attracted to him...like a moth to light? What is this loneliness that befalls on me in his absence?"- wondered Suman recounting all those beautiful memories of childhood.

And soon they both went to sleep, on their window sill...where they were apparently sitting, complaining to god through Chanda mama.

THERE YOU GO FOLKS...I DID NOT INCLUDE ANY ROMANCE COZ I FELT LIKE WRITING ABOUT THE TURMOIL , THEIR INNER SELVES SEEMD TO BE INDULGED IN. ;)

Do comment...or I would get really demotivated and probably would scrap this useless idea that could not even garner audiences.! L


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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Haha that was very goood..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Both the updates were fabulous
Oh god

It's awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Really amazing..do continue writing it..
Really enjoyed reading it.. 😊 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Damn!
This is darn awesome! Though they were not together, the attraction and tension was still palpable throughout the story. Being able to craft it this well is a talent itself and you have it. Kudos. 👍🏼
Keep writing...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww small but a sweet on chappy
The way u expressed their feelings was awsum
Update soon the next part I want a long chappy
Waiting for next part
Love Ishita
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Really good nish...do continue.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Too good... I was eagerly waiting for the chapter...
And it was upto my expectations!!
Lovely way to express their emotions towards each other... the humor element was good too... never even think of discontinuing or else I will lock u in a room with Khosla 🤣
When without the romance it was a hooking chapter...
Plz make the updates a little longer if u can... dil maange more ShraMan 😉

One request... plz start liking the comments and reply to ur readers too... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
haha this is amazing ... really enjoyed reading this
hope you continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
awesome
just read both parts
sounds interesting
update soon

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