You are my world- shraman ff( part 3 pg-5 @pril 14,2016 updtd) - Page 4

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mineforever

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Posted: 9 years ago

Really great.So much sexual tension between them..sparks r falling in all directions..
Update soon..

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orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

Oh man! This was awesome!

Her sunshine awieee!

Update real soon..😳

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pinky.padda

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Posted: 9 years ago

amazing story
absolutely loving it
cannot wait
superb
please pm me

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Sashnihaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

this was just amazing ! definitively love the way you write the story and so descriptive. Please just a small request if could read less in hindi! have a hard time reading in hindi :) another than that its amazing loving it :D

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adyaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

Loved it
Pls pm me when u update 😊

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nashat

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome!! Plz pm when u update 😊

Edited by sweetnas - 9 years ago

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arshuaar

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Posted: 9 years ago

read all parts in one go...
amazing...
beautifully penned...😊

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Anupriya

@shinegirl100

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Posted: 9 years ago

it was amzing read all chapters in a go

chapter 1 was tooo hot and funny. they were caught by 3 people... seriously 3 it would be so embarassing but loved their embarassment also.

chapter 2 was mainly their feeling and u described them very well

chapter 3 the water drinking part was amazing cant write anything just speechless after reading that.

amazing work. loved it. update soon

witg lots of love

-anupriya

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