it was amazing. i just loved how u balanced both of their position being right at their place,great
waiting for the next part
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it was amazing. i just loved how u balanced both of their position being right at their place,great
waiting for the next part
Originally posted by: AnYa_ArMan
Ahaan started with Ss also 😊 or I am visiting the forum late 😆
Will start reading from the start n tell you soon :)Afrah.
Originally posted by: Niharika17
Loved it
I am actually liking the fact that writers are being very objective of this situation without getting biased towards any one characterShall wait for next one
Originally posted by: peachesandcream
Very nice update. I liked the display of Shravan's emotional turmoil.
Originally posted by: --Nargis--
Just read all three chapters...phenomenal read..i love the simplicity and the realistic feel to the way you have told the story. I agree that what Shriven does is wrong, but in some way its the KID in him the hurt kid that wants the revenge...not the rational man he is today. I agree that how Sumo treated him was wrong...just to maintain an image...and you are right...Karma is a B***h...it hurts when its our turn! Looking forward to Shravan's growth and realization that what he thought he wanted in his zeal for revenge is not what he really wanted or can abide by. Lets see how he does redeem himself. 😛
Oh loved it it was amazing... How he described his pain to Pushkar... You wrote it so nicely... Thanks...
Nice update dude! You showed Shravan's side and his past experiences and hurt really well. I agree Sumo was kind of a jerk back then, though she was young but no one should behave like that with a dear friend. Waiting to see how you take this forward. Good going girl.
Keep writing!
Originally posted by: kavithaa12
awesome story yaar👏 keep writing and thanks for the pm😊.
Originally posted by: AMAYASTARSS
great one
actually you're right , it could be possible ke that day her parent's could have died but she did come to meet shravan ...par vo toh rukka hi nai...waiting for nxt part eagerlythanks for the pm🤗love kriti