ShraMan FF Bitter Sweet Symphony #Thread 1

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Ri21
it was amazing. i just loved how u balanced both of their position being right at their place,great
waiting for the next part

Aww... dear, I'm so glad to know tht

you liked how their POV s were presented.

Next chap will be uploaded asap.

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Niharika17

@Niharika17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Loved it

I am actually liking the fact that writers are being very objective of this situation without getting biased towards any one character

Shall wait for next one

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: AnYa_ArMan
Ahaan started with Ss also 😊 or I am visiting the forum late 😆
Will start reading from the start n tell you soon :)

Afrah.

😃 lol.

OKay, I'll wait to know your opinion about it.

Thanks for checking this ss out. 😳 Take care.

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Niharika17
Loved it
I am actually liking the fact that writers are being very objective of this situation without getting biased towards any one character
Shall wait for next one

Thanks! ❤️

It's after all sensible and wise to understand both of their situation here,

and I'm really priding over the fact that most of the people in this forum are not biased towards one. That's called maturity, hats off to the forum members. 👏

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: peachesandcream
Very nice update. I liked the display of Shravan's emotional turmoil.

Thank u so much! 🤗

Glad you enjoyed Shravan's POV.

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: --Nargis--
Just read all three chapters...phenomenal read..i love the simplicity and the realistic feel to the way you have told the story. I agree that what Shriven does is wrong, but in some way its the KID in him the hurt kid that wants the revenge...not the rational man he is today. I agree that how Sumo treated him was wrong...just to maintain an image...and you are right...Karma is a B***h...it hurts when its our turn! Looking forward to Shravan's growth and realization that what he thought he wanted in his zeal for revenge is not what he really wanted or can abide by. Lets see how he does redeem himself. 😛

Oh, thanks a lot!

I'm glad tht you enjoyed reading the story, just wait to see what more is in store for the two. 😉

Yep, now that his revenge is complete let's see what exactly he does, or does not. 😉 (that's a secret wink and a promise of loads of drama)

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: nicky13
Oh loved it it was amazing... How he described his pain to Pushkar... You wrote it so nicely... Thanks...

Thanks!

Aw... I'm glad you enjoyed their conversation. (I hope something like this happens in real!) 😃

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: shai95
Nice update dude! You showed Shravan's side and his past experiences and hurt really well. I agree Sumo was kind of a jerk back then, though she was young but no one should behave like that with a dear friend. Waiting to see how you take this forward. Good going girl.
Keep writing!

Exactly, every time they show a flashback I can't help but want to jump inside the screen and give a consoling hug to the teenager Shravan and give a piece of mind to Sumo. 💔 But then, when the flashback ends and they show how Suman is now, I feel so torn and want to give a hug to her in stead. 😕

Anywho, 😃 let's see what happens, hopefully you'll like what's coming up.

Take care and thanks for your encouragement and nice words! 😳

Edited by devilaonmoon - 9 years ago

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: kavithaa12
awesome story yaar👏 keep writing and thanks for the pm😊.

Thanks to you for your lovely comment! 😳

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: AMAYASTARSS
great one
actually you're right , it could be possible ke that day her parent's could have died but she did come to meet shravan ...par vo toh rukka hi nai...waiting for nxt part eagerly
thanks for the pm🤗
love kriti

Thanks!

Yep, that's what I thought, what if she lost her parents in a situation like this.

Let's see...

Will be uploading in probably an hour. 😃