ShraMan FF Bitter Sweet Symphony #Thread 1

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@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

People who've liked and commented on the last chap and made me feel so encouraged, thnks guys! You're the best!! ❤️

Bitter Sweet Symphony

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Awesome story
Loved the way it is going
Update soon

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Divi.C

@Divi.C

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

That was quite Surprising...wonderful dear. ..tx 4 the pm continue plsss..

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Wow👏you write really well! Update soon.. 😳

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Riya

@Ri21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

it was amazing. i just loved how u balanced both of their position being right at their place,great
waiting for the next part

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Afrah

@AnYa_ArMan

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Ahaan started with Ss also 😊 or I am visiting the forum late 😆

Will start reading from the start n tell you soon :)

Afrah.

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peachesandcream

@peachesandcream

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Very nice update. I liked the display of Shravan's emotional turmoil.

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Just read all three chapters...phenomenal read..i love the simplicity and the realistic feel to the way you have told the story. I agree that what Shriven does is wrong, but in some way its the KID in him the hurt kid that wants the revenge...not the rational man he is today. I agree that how Sumo treated him was wrong...just to maintain an image...and you are right...Karma is a B***h...it hurts when its our turn! Looking forward to Shravan's growth and realization that what he thought he wanted in his zeal for revenge is not what he really wanted or can abide by. Lets see how he does redeem himself. 😛

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nicky13

@nicky13

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Oh loved it it was amazing... How he described his pain to Pushkar... You wrote it so nicely... Thanks...

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shai95

@shai95

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Nice update dude! You showed Shravan's side and his past experiences and hurt really well. I agree Sumo was kind of a jerk back then, though she was young but no one should behave like that with a dear friend. Waiting to see how you take this forward. Good going girl.
Keep writing!

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