ShraMan FF Bitter Sweet Symphony #Thread 1 - Page 78

First of all congrats on century of this thread 👏

one and all i WL say u r a fabulous writer i jst luvd this chp n the way this ff is going jst awsome and for sme suggestions i want say gv u sme bt it is up to u as hw u do it as it is jst a suggestion n yaa ovio i i WL like nono luv whatever u write so here r sme suggestions: u cn i mean thre cn be a mrs beauty contest n thre WL be cookng and ovio our sumo is vry pretty n cooks well so she wl win it n she WL get 2 and a hlf crores as a prize mney n also a diamond peagnent aftr tatc cn gv d mny to shravan n keep d peagnent to hrslf n move out of d house c WL nt gv d mny directly to shravan so he WL nt hv a chnc to stop her n in d meanwhile shravan WL get to knw d truth through pushkar bt he WL nt believe him as he WL think he is defensive about sumo so bck at hme he WL get a lettr sumo has lEFT him with d mny n he WL also find sumo's personal diary in which everything WL be clr bt he WL nt be able to stop sumo or nt its upto u n he WL repend fr his dids atlast hero heroine milan n yaa d whole story is upto u its jst a suggestion n my bhejaas wrk luv ur writng plzzz continue soon

Originally posted by: .shivi396

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Unres
Shit Her Nightmares are becoming more dangerous😭
I thought he will be the one who will sooth her
Poor girl she won't go to her family this earlier
Where is that KADDU 😡
Don't know about Sumo but I m d one who is missing Shravan😆
Wohooo why He is behaving like this 😕
Banda achchha hai yaa bura😕
Finally Sumo is back
Yes yes go girl,Just return him that damn money and go away where you can get peace🤗
He wants the same thing afterall👍🏼
Awww Pushkar is here for Sumo
Come on girl Give us more Sumo-Puskar consolation Scenes and Give us Jealous KADDU🤣
I found Jealous Guys So cute
Jhappis to you🤗
Plz update jaldi jaldi
Already missing KADDU Malhotra😆

Originally posted by: PALAK19

sumo gets her strength back...and plsss show shravan soft side toward sumo by clearing misundrstanding between them...i want shravan to understand the feeling on which sumo is suffering her pain,emotion and off course sumo's past abt her brother...start clearing misunderstanding but slowly slowly its my resquest

Originally posted by: an_chau

I love the direction in which you're taking the story... and as you say, the curious case of Shravan Malhotra will be a delight to watch as it unfolds...

great going!

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome update

I always love pushkar character, he is the one person in suman life who can catch her lie.

I am definitely curious to know how will Sharavab led a life when he has no place in Suman present and future.

Meethi and pushkar, i thought they were just servants of the home but now that you have used word "not" for them, i think they MAY BE spying on suman for Sharavan as he bearly trust her.

I hope Suman nightmares will end soon

Can't wait to read more.

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Hey Lara!!!! Ur updates are like sunshine in a gloomy day 😊 ... Update is fabulous as always.. I loved suman- pushkar convo. He is such a sweetheart. Glad he stayed back..
Thanks for the pm 😊

Originally posted by: orion23

Lara🤗

You awesome, awesome creature ❤️

What an amazing update!

Those nightmares Poor girl!

So Sumo pulled herself together, her self respect and determination will see her through this!

About the 2.5 crores, massive amount.. a massive order or a new start up, given those things make tremendous money these days😆 I'll leave that to you..

Pushkin❤️ My darling is back! I wanna see him fulfilling his cupid duties perfectly!

Where exactly is Shravan? I need to know him better Banda samajh nai aata! And love her or hate her, one thing for sure he can't do without her.. So her happy ending without him won't settle well..

And I hope Sumo tends to her injuries sooner, the neglect will only hurt her more😭

Can't wait to read the next chapter!! Update soon!!

And thanks for the PM😎

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

You're welcome, dear!🤗

Nope, Suman defo won't be a doormat wifey, watch out as she fights her way into the "lambu's" heart and rip it apart. 😈

(I'm sounding like a dayan now. hee hee...)

Nice ideas.👍🏼

Will cont soon, and thanks for the lovely comment. Take care.

Glad that u liked the idea.
Update pretty soonish lara

Originally posted by: pearl100

Lara loved your chapter ...loved the way you have shown us the first day of her marriage...mujhe arnav aur khushi ki yaad ati hain 😆 after the contract she decides to leave arnav ...I can give this suggestion...she can invest in stock markets, yes it is risky but with determination she can earn quite a lot and she has less time span as well...how much ever she could earn she can return the money back...she can run her center and trade as well simulataneously...I want to see sharvan guilty once or twice..plzz let us see shravan's pov once at least 2 paras 😆...your story is really good Lara..I forget sometimes whether its in the show or its a ff 😆 me totally engrossed init..that good it is...waiting for the next part ...Till then take care. Thank you so much for the PM dear.😃