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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kennashreign

Enjoyed the update! It gave an insight to Suman's plight.

I would just like to say that there should be a few instances which soften Shravan. It's fine if he hates her. It's also fine if they don't end up together but Shravan's misconceptions need to be cleared one by one. He needs to know facts. He can continue to hate Suman after knowing the truth, but he needs to know. I feel that the story needs to balance the assumption with the truth. Also Suman and Shravan need to confront each other and let everything in the open. This is just a suggestion, you may disagree with me but I had to say it. Now that I have, I can rest till the next update. Cheers 😊


I understand what you're saying. There's a fine line between hate and love, and one never gets to know when and how they cross that line. ❤️
We'll see the process happening now.

Confrontation? I like the feel of it. Thanks. You're right, for things to get cleared properly a confrontation must happen - of any kind.

Never get weary of me disagreeing with you, dear, it's your suggestion and opinion which I really want to know. After all they help me to write, yaar, sometimes they help directly, sometimes indirectly. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sambag

I must say everytime I red this story I feel why it did end so soon and why did not it end a little later. You know how to keep people engrossed.


Thank you so much, dear! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks! ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: potterginny

Lara!
I am glad Suman remembered her Sumo self. And Pushkar is always love. I wish Sumo had Daboo too by her side.
The angry yummy man was missed but this update was pretty filling so chalta hai.
Meethi and the watchman? Smelling suspicions!!
Wish you'd update sooner.
Love,
Ginny.


Hey, Ginny!
Angry man will there be in the next chapter.

Will updt asap. Take care. ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

Brilliant update Sumo is a fighter 👏 hats off to her and her strength this is the Sumo I love the Sherni and Pushkar is a darling as usual and about earning money she can expand her business open branches of PCT and can also open restaurants


Hmmm... expand bisuness; open branches... AWSM!
Thanks, yaar. 🤗
My readers are all genious for giving such "dhasu" ideas. 😎
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon


Hmmm... expand bisuness; open branches... AWSM!
Thanks, yaar. 🤗
My readers are all genious for giving such "dhasu" ideas. 😎

thanks 🤗 waiting for next update eagerly 😊 unlike because she doesn't have a time limit so she can take her time 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: PALAK19

u right so welll...but plss show soft corner of shravan toward sumo its my request


Thanks! I will. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ri21

Amazing. Missed shravan

Loved suman pushkar part😃


Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ezbeedscrittore

Wow

I love your story
I am so glad Suman found her inner strength to fight off this time of misery
Shravan can never be the monster that Khurana is
He is just an impulsive guy who made a few bad choices
I love the stories where the girl is all kickass and doesn't give a damn about the guy
It's gonna be interesting how Shravan is going to react to it all
Pushkar be the bae, he is the best person and I love the kind of support he is for Sumo, she knows someone's there for her. She may not involve him in her battle, but knowing someone's got your back is the best feeling

as for her money, how about some good uncle, or good young guy can jump in and give Suman a huge contract, like a very big contract and she could sign a contract where he could pay her the sum she needs over 6 months, and she would have to work for him until she pays him off

or maybe she finds a trust left by her father for her, but she can't access it until some time, cuz you know, she needs time to live with Shravan
It's totally upto you, but I want Suman to pay him off in one or two months max

lol, these are the ideas I came up with
the final story is gonna be yours

also, I think I forgot to say but this part was amaze..


Hmmm... I like the idea of contract. I'm loving it how many awesome ideas I'm getting from my very inventive readers! 🤗

And thanks, from the bottom of my heart. 😳 I hope you'll keep enjoying the future chapters as well.

Take care. ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

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