##EBI Extended Three Short##Part 3 updated pg. 6 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Nira_Mukherjee

Wow a lovely ending!!!👏 👏 👏

First of all thank you for giving us an actual ending...😃 😃 😃
Thank u so much that you liked the way I ended my OS. 😊 😊

Vasu-Bunty they made a cute couple together 😳 😳 😳

Loved how you portrayed their connection,

And their marriage with all rituals...😃 😃 😃
It was the perfect way to do the justice to their characters. 👍🏼 👍🏼

Golu aane ki news🥳

That was so good

Mj itna khush tha doctor ko hug kar liya😆 😆 😆
Haan us ko nahi pata tha ki us ki mehnat itne jaldi rang laayegi. 😆 😆

It is nice that Bunty-Vasu will live with MriAra now

Another nice scene was Mj-Pari when they went to see Golu and Tara, I wish I could see that in the show...
I too wanted that but alas it never happened there. 😭 😭

Mj aur uska cricket team...😆

But the ending portion was cute!!!
thank u dear 😆 😆

Excellent writing from you!!!👏

A perfect and complete ending.

Hope we will get more this kind of stories from you!!👍🏼
I will try my best to fulfill your dream. 😉 😉

Keep writing and share with us!!!!😊

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Bunty and Vasu revealed to Mrityunjay and Tara that they already know each other!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes they should have told them. 😊 😊

Tara is feeling sick but still she is insisting on making preparations for Bunty's departure!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔
Yes, after all itne time baad bhai ghar aaya hai. 😉 😉

Good to see that Dai Jaan had realized that she had not behaved well with Tara when Tara had first come there!!!!
These were the loop holes which must have been worked well. 😛 😛

I love it when Mrityunjay completes Tara's words!!!!❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

That's why they were made for each other.

Mrityunjay is the perfect husband aur usse Tara ki har khushi ka khayal hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Hona bhi chahiye 😊 😊

He has decided that Bunty would work with Shekhawat Group of Industries now so that Tara can keep him here!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Aur kya? Itna bada ghar aise khali thode na rehna chahiye. 😉 😉

Mrityunjay is right ke jab Tara ko pata liya hai toh uske bhai ko bhi pata lega!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉

😆 😆

It was really sweet when he said anything for you!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

😳 😳

After much convincing, Bunty agreed to Mrityunjay's offer but had to go now for the time being!!!!!

He will be a great support to MJ and Tara. 😊 😊

Tara ki narzon se bhala kuch chup sakta hai and she is suspicious of what is cooking between Bunty and Vasu!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Bahut smart hai Mrs. Tara Singh Shekhawat.

I love it when Mrityunjay catches Tara in his arms before she falls down!!!!

This is the best news ever that Tara is pregnant!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

We all are happy for them

We were waiting for the news of Golu since eternity aur hamare kaan taras gaye thhe yeh sunne ke liye!!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

Aur ye mauka show me kabhi nahi aaya. 😆 😆

Mrityunjay was sooo happy that he hugged the doctor!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

😆 😆

Tara is very happy and the scene with Mrityunjay lying in her lap was soo sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Their dream came true

Finally Vasu and Bunty declared that they love each other and want to get married!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Good 😊 😊

Tara's suspicions were now confirmed aur usne toh pehle hi Vasu aur Bunty ki chori pakad li thi!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Ab to jodi ban hi jani chahiye na. 😉 😉

Mrityunjay was angry at first but then agreed after talking to Vasu!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Ab bhai hai to thoda drama to karega hi. 😆 😆

He took the right decision that the wedding would not take place now as Tara is pregnant!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Like a good and caring hubby. 😊 😊

Finally Mrityunjay aur Tara ke pyaar ki nishani and Pari's brother Golu is here!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

The scene where Mrityunjay and Pari go to see Tara and Golu is just fabulous and I loved it!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

This was all EBIian dream which came true

I wish we could have seen this scene in the show!!!!

No worries you got it here 😉 😉

It was a lovely moment between Mrityunjay and Tara and the kiss on the forehead was so sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Bunty and Vasu's wedding was grand and it is great Vasu got the man she loves!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

😊 😊

Mrityunjay and Tara have now fulfilled their responsibilities very well!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

The best part is that they would all be living together at Shekhawat Villa!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Now the emptiness of Shekhawat Villa will be fulfilled. They are the only family for them so they did it like their parents. 😊

Mrityunjay still wants his cricket team!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Vo to hai... 😊 😊

But the ending scene was really cute and heart warming!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

This part is fantastic!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Thanks dear 😊 😊

This is what is called a perfect and complete happy ending to their story!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Thank u a lot 😊 😊

Thank you for this extended version after the open ending of the show!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

My pleasure 😊 😊

It is fabulous and just how we had wanted Ek Boond Ishq to end!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

A big thank u Shaina for comment... 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Wonderful update ⭐️
thank u 😊 😊

Vasu and Bunty have connection before 😃
MJ decided Bunty will work with Shikhawat industries, and said tumhare liye kuch bhi 😛
This is really sweet...😳
Yes in this way he can keep Vasu with him and the house will not be empty as they will get good company. 😉 😉

Bunty maan gayi but Vasu insists so 😉
Thoda to bhaav banta hai. 😛 😛

Golu ka aane ki khaber bhi aagai...😃
Vasu and Bunty decided to marry 😛
Ek saath do khushkhabri.. 😆 😆

Tara's suspicion was right, MJ bhi maan gayi but after doing drama 😆
Thoda drama to banta hai na? 😆 😆

Golu aagayi and MJ knew it 😉
This was very lovely moment where MJ and Pari went see Golu 😊
And Mriara talk & forehead kiss
😳 😳

Bunty and Vasu marriage went well with celebration...😃
Yes finally the good time of Shekhawat's is here.

It was good Bunty and Vasu will stay with them
They should as MriAra are all alone as well.

Now, Mriara fulfilled their responsibilities😊
Yes they gave a brother to Pari to play with. 😉 😉

MJ phir bhi cricket team nehi bhuli 😳
Haan sochta yahi hai vo ki ghar aur bhara bhara lage. 😛 😛

This was a very lovely efforts that you wrote what we expected in EBI
Thank you once again for writing this extended version 🤗
It's my pleasure that I contributed in my way. 😃 😃

You are a great writer ⭐️
Hope we will read more short story like this beside your FF 😛
Thank u dear and I am sure you are liking my new work as well. 😉 😉

Keep writing 😊

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

First of all lovely update Vartika
Thanks a lot Sam 😊 😊

Humara MJ kitna sweeet hai

Bunty ko mana liya aub sab saath saath hain👏👏
Hona chahiye they all need each other

GOLU ki news suune ko kan taras gaye they humare

aur who khuber bhi agayi

Imagination mein sab Iitna acha luga na

Aur humara GOLU 😳😃👍🏼

Aa gaya na vo jis k hum ne bus sapne dekhe the.

Vasu and Bunty ki shadi hogayi jo hum sab ne bhi chah tha

wonderful⭐️⭐️⭐️
😊 😊

Happy ending 👏👏👏
Thanks 😃 😃

Thanks Dear itna khoobsorut likhne keliye

jitney arman reh gaye they tumne poore kerdiye

tumhare itne ache effort ko mera SALAM
I just tried and I am glad you liked it.

Hope you will write more and more

you are an amazing writer dost.
Yes I am doing it but don't know where you disappeared all of a sudden. 😕 😕

Thanks again.

Originally posted by: kumari27

Wonderful update!!!!!

Firstly thanks for golu !!!!

Thanks a lot dear and it was duty to complete all incomplete things. 😊 😊

Achcha hai vasu or bunty pehle se ek dusare ko jante the

Ye bhi ek bada loophole tha jis par CVs ne kabhi focus hi nahi kiya.

Mj toh mj hai kya line bola jab Behan ko pata liya toh Bhai kyun nai.

Aur mana bhi liya.

Pata hi lena tha Vasu k liye Bunty se accha kaun hoga? 😉 😉

Yeh vasu or bunty ko ab tak nai samajh aya ki Tara james bond ko bhi peeche chhod de jasoosi me.

Pakad liya vasu or bunty ki chori ko.

Chori nahi ye to mohabbat hai.

Haye golu ki news or arrival was just awesome.

Vasu or bunty ki shhadi bhi hi gai or mriara ki family bhi poori.

Perfect na??? 😃 😃

Originally posted by: poorvi16

Finally di just loved the perfect ending. 👏
Thanks dear 😊 😊

Golu aa gaya MJ and Tara k pyaar ki nishani and Vasu got the man she loved. 😊
Yes all the loopholes got fixed. 😉 😉

The best part is that all are now living together.
Yes they have to as all need each other.

Perfect ending after the imperfect ending of the show. 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Originally posted by: varshita

Sorry for not commenting here before.
It's ok maine hi kaun sa jaldi reply kar diya. 😛 😛

Perfect ending to the most imperfect ending on show. 👏
Thanks 😊 😊

They stopped it at an open end but u completed it.
Yes I wanted to do that. 😉 😉

Vasu and Bunty got married and Tara's family got completed when Golu came in to their life. 😊
Yes everything is now at it's place. 😊 😊

MJ is damn happy and he is unable to hide his emotions.😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 Pari got his brother now. MJ did a nice thing by stopping Bunty with them.
I was thinking about his expression when he changed a lot.😆 😆 Yes they should live together. 😊 😊

This will make Tara happy and she will not feel alone. 😊
Yes a perfect family now.

Originally posted by: arpita25

A perfect ending to an incomplete story.👏
Thank u so much Arpu 😊 😊

So sorry for being that late.😒 I almost forgot that I didn't comment here.😔 at
No problem at all maine hi kaun sa time se reply kar diya. 😛 😛

Beautiful extension simply and more to that a perfect end.👍🏼 You covered all the loop holes properly.👍🏼
Thanks once again as I wanted that so did it through os. 😊 😊

Vasu and Bunty got married and they are going to live with MJ and Tara so that all their alone feeling will be finished.😊
Yes and there should be people in that big house.😉 😉 Vasu has equal share in that house na? 😆 😆

The story of Kalavati finally ended giving MJ and Tara a final relaxation. She was dead in her typical melodramatic style.😆
It has to end, I didn't want to leave her alive threatening whole life.

At the end Pari got a brother Golu and a perfect family has started.😃 I am happy and satisfied like others.😊 Well done darling.👏
Thank u for liking my efforts. 😃 😃