##EBI Extended Three Short##Part 3 updated pg. 6

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Arthi Shefali

@AartShefa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Thank you so much for such a wonderful update dr

Beautiful end..

Hope u ll start a new ss soon..

I m waiting

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Khadeja Akter

@Khadeja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Wonderful update ⭐️

Vasu and Bunty have connection before 😃
MJ decided Bunty will work with Shikhawat industries, and said tumhare liye kuch bhi 😛
This is really sweet...😳
Bunty maan gayi but Vasu insists so 😉
Golu ka aane ki khaber bhi aagai...😃
Vasu and Bunty decided to marry 😛
Tara's suspicion was right, MJ bhi maan gayi but after doing drama 😆
Golu aagayi and MJ knew it 😉
This was very lovely moment where MJ and Pari went see Golu 😊
And Mriara talk & forehead kiss
Bunty and Vasu marriage went well with celebration...😃
It was good Bunty and Vasu will stay with them
Now, Mriara fulfilled their responsibilities😊
MJ phir bhi cricket team nehi bhuli 😳

This was a very lovely efforts that you wrote what we expected in EBI
Thank you once again for writing this extended version 🤗

You are a great writer ⭐️
Hope we will read more short story like this beside your FF 😛
Keep writing 😊

Edited by Khadeja - 9 years ago

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Samreen

@SamreenJ

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

First of all lovely update Vartika

Humara MJ kitna sweeet hai

Bunty ko mana liya aub sab saath saath hain👏👏

GOLU ki news suune ko kan taras gaye they humare

aur who khuber bhi agayi

Imagination mein sab Iitna acha luga na

Aur humara GOLU 😳😃👍🏼

🥳🥳

Vasu and Bunty ki shadi hogayi jo hum sab ne bhi chah tha

wonderful⭐️⭐️⭐️

Happy ending 👏👏👏

Thanks Dear itna khoobsorut likhne keliye

jitney arman reh gaye they tumne poore kerdiye

tumhare itne ache effort ko mera SALAM

Hope you will write more and more

you are an amazing writer dost.

Thanks again.

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Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Wonderful update!!!!!

Firstly thanks for golu !!!!

Achcha hai vasu or bunty pehle se ek dusare ko jante the

Mj toh mj hai kya line bola jab Behan ko pata liya toh Bhai kyun nai.

Aur mana bhi liya.

Yeh vasu or bunty ko ab tak nai samajh aya ki Tara james bond ko bhi peeche chhod de jasoosi me.

Pakad liya vasu or bunty ki chori ko.

Haye golu ki news or arrival was just awesome.

Vasu or bunty ki shhadi bhi hi gai or mriara ki family bhi poori.

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poorvi16

@poorvi16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Finally di just loved the perfect ending. 👏 👏 👏 👏

Golu aa gaya MJ and Tara k pyaar ki nishani and Vasu got the man she loved. 😊 😊 😊 😊

The best part is that all are now living together.

Perfect ending after the imperfect ending of the show. 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

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varshita

@varshita

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Sorry for not commenting here before.

Perfect ending to the most imperfect ending on show. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

They stopped it at an open end but u completed it.

Vasu and Bunty got married and Tara's family got completed when Golu came in to their life. 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

MJ is damn happy and he is unable to hide his emotions.😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 Pari got his brother now. MJ did a nice thing by stopping Bunty with them.

This will make Tara happy and she will not feel alone. 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

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arpita25

@arpita25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

A perfect ending to an incomplete story.👏 So sorry for being that late.😒 I almost forgot that I didn't comment here.😔 Beautiful extension simply and more to that a perfect end.👍🏼 You covered all the loop holes properly.👍🏼 Vasu and Bunty got married and they are going to live with MJ and Tara so that all their alone feeling will be finished.😊 The story of Kalavati finally ended giving MJ and Tara a final relaxation. She was dead in her typical melodramatic style.😆 At the end Pari got a brother Golu and a perfect family has started.😃 I am happy and satisfied like others.😊 Well done darling.👏

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irfan2

@irfan2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

wow so cute romantic great story great i like it thank you so much 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Sorry for being that much late with the reply of the concluding part of your this story.😔 This is called a perfect ending.👏 I am sure all of us wanted the same ending to the story which was left incomplete by the makers of the show.😒 Tara and MJ finally bought a brother for Pari who was alone and wanted a bro or sis to play with.😉 At the end of the story you completed one more pair by getting them married.👏 I mean Vasu and Bunty the complete part 😊. Kalavati was finally finished and got what she deserve. Tara and MJ always make her fool and her foolishness lead her to her death.😛 Their love blossom now and it will increase with each passing moment. Perfect end.👍🏼 Superb work and love u.👏