ViCha FF - from reel to real Chapter 15 PART 2 UPDATED PG 18 - Page 15

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Khadeja thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for late comment Shegufta
I am stuck with my exams ...

Whenever you come back with update it is always bang πŸ˜ƒ

Chapter 15 part 1

Superb Update ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Viraf had nightmare
Really so horrible πŸ˜”
He was so worried for Chhavi 😊

Everything was normal at dining table 😲
That was indicate something was fishy πŸ˜‰
And finally reveal, Viraf's Mom wanted to meet Chhavi 😊
But this is good πŸ˜›
She at least wanted to meet her πŸ˜ƒ

Viraf and his Mom had reached 😊
I was guessing at previous update the person can be Viraf's mom πŸ˜‰

Chhavi was shocked πŸ˜†
And nervous, she should be 😊

Wow as soon as she went to kitchen, he reached there to hug her πŸ˜‰
Dollyji praised her also 😊
Viraf wanted to talk to her...
As expected he had brought his Mom without informing πŸ˜†

This part was nice πŸ‘

Edited by Khadeja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
The dream was so horrifying!!!!

This is probably the result of his anxiety and tension regarding Chhavi!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Everything was normal at the dinning table and it seemed like it was the calm before the storm!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Viraf's mom wants to meet Chhavi aur pata nahi ab kya hoga!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

She is strict and is not going to say yes easily!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Seems like Viraf aur Chhavi ke ishq ke imtehaan baaki hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Both Viraf and Chhavi need to tread carefully now!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Just as I had guessed it was Chhavi's would be mother-in-law who had come to visit her at this hour!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved the hug in the kitchen!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Dolly mummy complimented Chhavi and that is a good sign for now!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh Dolly mummy bacche hi jaan legi kya jo itna darra rahi hai!!!😈 😈 😈 😈

Chhavi is angry and nervous to see Viraf's mom in her house suddenly and vented that anger on him!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑

Viraf's condition now is just like a saas-bahu show's hero who is caught between his mother and his wife!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Fiddling with the perfume bottle really proved to be a bad move for Viraf!!!!

She taunted him with Meera's name and Viraf was shocked!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Waise she is right that how can she pass Dolly mummy's test unless he tells her everything and helps her!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Chhavi even told Viraf to break up with her and how can she think that he would leave her??

Now both of them are upset and Viraf left with his mom!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

Finally Chhavi is feeling guilty about shouting at him!!!!

This Meera is so chipku aur subah subah make-up room mein aa gayi!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Kya jaal bichaya tha usne and she is actually telling Viraf about it!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Viraf did the right thing by making her get out of his room!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Now this Saba is after him to come to her house and is using Novu as an excuse!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Viraf's dream came true, this is called sixth sense!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

The scene betweem them was cute and Viraf is so caring!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The kiss on the forehead was just soo sweet and it didn't go unnoticed by Sodhiji!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved the conversation between Sodhiji and Manasvi!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Saba is not at all happy about it and she is bound to create trouble soon!!!!πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ

This part is good!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘




Edited by Shaina_b - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
For Chapter - 15 , part - 2

So Chhavi was a bit angry to see Dolly Aunty in her house suddenly!!!
And she disgorged her anger on Viraf.
Ohooo
She taunted him with the name of Meera...
GOD!!!
Chhavi Viraf ko use chodne keliye keh diya!?😲
Meera toh Kabab mei haddi hai yaar!!!!
Meera Viraf ke make-up room mei?! 😲
She is so chipku!!!!! πŸ˜•
My god his dream became true!!!!
I loved this small ViCha scene!!!!
So cute
Viraf is caring...😳
I so so loved the small conversation between Manasvi Sir and Sodhiji!!!
That was perfect!!!! πŸ˜†
Saba as usual jealous!!! 😑
Preview!!!!
I think it will be something related to Chhavi's quitting news!!!

I loved this Chapter
And you know I am a big fan of your writing!!!! 😳

Continue soon!!!!
*Waiting* πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Comment for Part 15(1)-

Ye Meera ka angle kahan se aa gaya story me? I mean she was his past and when he has decided and told his mother that he is in relationship with Chhavi how can she still try to spoil his life?

She should not interfere in their lives. What she finally wants? She went up to Chhavi and dissolve some poison in her mind speaking lies and more to that I was surprised to know that she believed it all just like stupid TV show's actresses.

Was this track really needed? I mean it sounds so filmy and the irritation she showed was really making me unhappy.

Viraf's mom is really sweet. She wanted her son to be happy with anyone he chose but she want to see and have a check with his choice.

It was a nice update.



Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Shegufta
Happy for the update

Ufff kiya starting hai
I was breathless shegs


Viraf ki mom kuch mysterious hai
I was also shocked and nervous
Kiya woh maan gayi hain
But abhi to ishq ke imtehan aur bhi hain


Yeh khuwab aur unki taabeer
Aksar preshan kerdete hain

Yeh kiya aunty ji ne to ghoorna shuro kerdiya
Funny

Awww Viraf ka hug
Chhavi needs that sweet tight warm hug

Dolly aunty sahi se kabhi husi kabhi no husi khel rahi hain
Bachi ki jaan leingi kiya

Beechara viraf preshan to tha hi
Aub chhavi bhi hogayi

"Ajeeb dastan hai yeh
Kahan shuro kahan khatam
Yeh manzilein hain konsi
Na woh samjh sake na hum"

Yeh kiya kiya horaha hai
Chhavi ke parents,
Meera ka perfume
Viraf phas gaya poora ka poora

Yeh fighting bhi hogayi
Hayo rabba
Meera ne jo jaal bichaya usmein
Donon panchi phans gaye

Hopefully sab theek hojaye jaldi

Ahhh yeh meera bhi na
Maar dalo isse shegs
Issey jeena ka koye haq nahin

Viraf ko bhi aik hug ki zaroorut hai
Chalo mein dedeti hoonπŸ€—

Oh god
Dream sach hogaya
Sixth sense isey kehte hain

Sodhi ji aur manasvi sir to darling hain
Bas saba ka kuch alag masala hai
Shegs sambhalna haan

Interesting preview
Please jaldi jaldi update kiya karo
Werna to yeh sab bhooli basri yadein ban jati hain

Dher sara piyar lelo aur update jaldi jaldi kerdo❀️

πŸ€—πŸ€—
Edited by SamreenJ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

For Chapter 15 , part - 1

First of all I'm very happy that you are back with this story!!!! 😳
Oh God!!!!
This dream was so horrifying...😲
Probably this dream was the outcome of Viraf's anxiety and tension regarding Chhavi!!!
Ohhh...
Dolly Aunty wants to meet Chhavi...Gosh!!!!
Dolly aunty is strict I must say... πŸ˜‰
Awww...
I loved this hug scene!!!! 😳
Baap re!!
Dolly aunty ki ye surprise to kuch jyada hi ho gaya for Chhavi!!!

Update is a bit small but is nice and interesting!!!! πŸ˜ƒ


Apparently all our nightmares stem from the fears and anxieties we have in real life so I guess Viraf is stressed about Chhavi. Yeah this part was short because I was a bit stuck as to what I wanted to do with the story πŸ˜† Haan i'm sure the real Dolly ji isn't as strict as I've made her to seem haha
Thanks Niru! Do let me know what you think about part 2 😊❀️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 15 Part 2

Awesome part ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Viraf was scared how would Chhavi react on his Mom's coming and judging ...
Uffo !! Chhavi was reacting so much...
And the perfume drama has become history !!!!

Chhavi taunted Viraf by name of Meera 😳
Now Chhavi had become very rude 😳

How could she imagined Viraf would leave her ... !!!
Viraf also left with his Mom πŸ˜’
Chhavi was also upset

Big fight πŸ˜”

Meera again !! Nooo ...
This girl is real chipku 😑
It was good Viraf made get out her

Now, Saba 😳
It seems everyone is just testing Viraf's patience πŸ˜”

Viraf's dream had come true 😲
But the ViCha moment was cute 😊

Sodhiji and Mansavi was guessing right πŸ˜›
But Saba was happy 😳

In preview Saba-Chhavi convo πŸ˜•
Career changing talk ... There must be going to something big happen at chapter 16 ...

This part was great πŸ‘
You are an excellent writer 😊

Update soon 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
Reply for part 15(2):-

Chhavi is really impossible. I know it was shocking for her that the things came up very quickly when she wanted to hide their relationship.

But she could try to find a way and talk to Viraf how to deal his mom but no, instead she chose another way and she said the things which hurt not only him but also to us.

How can she think so mean about him? If a boy makes you meet his mother it means he wants to bring the relationship to another level and instead she thought that he wanted to get rid of her?

More to that, this perfume drama was really irritating. What his mom must have been thinking when he brought her with him aivee hi. How can she behave so childish. Why will he not ignore her on the sets when she misbehaved with him so much?

What happened to her all of a sudden and why did she faint? Viraf really cares for her and it can be shown very well. Sodhi jee is really smart. Saba was more assuring herself.

The most confusing thing was precap of next update. What is this career changing thing?

Update next part soon.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guys,

I pretty much gave up on this FF because I got so busy but decided that I should continue so here is another chapter after ages! Hope you guys enjoy and as always please leave your feedback behind 😊
Recap: Manasvi and Sodhiji notice something brewing between ViCha while both Saba and Chhavi have some career changing news for one another. Will ViCha patch up and what is this career changing news?

CHAPTER 16

Chhavi's POV:

I felt a tad bit light headed as I gently raised myself up from the pillow I was resting on. I found myself in my dressing room with someone measuring my blood pressure and members of the crew with their curious eyes fixated on me.

"Doctor woh toh tikh hai na ab? Kya hua tha? Aise achanak faint kyun kiya usne?" Viraf asked as he bustled into the room.

"Dekha na maine kaha tha kuch toh hai. Aisa lag raha hai ki Viraf bhi ab faint karni wali hai," Manasvi sir whispered into Sodhiji's ear and smiled seeing Viraf quickly taking Chhavi's hand.

"Haan Viraf nothing to worry about. Actually shayad stress ke wajah se uska blood pressure drop kiya aur usko chakkar aaya. Nothing serious but thoda waqt ke liye unko rest karna chahiye and try to make sure she doesn't take too much stress," the doctor said while packing up his medical equipment.

I was about to sit up whether when Viraf's tight hold on my hand kept me firmly grounded to that pillow. I tried to wrestle out of it the grip but I was met with his stern eyes telling me to stay put. As angry as I was with him, something in my brain told me to listen to him and let him hold my hand.

"Chhavi tum ab rest karo aur hum jaa ke shot ready karthe hai Viraf ke liye. Tumhari shot hum baad mein le lenge. Chaliye Manasvi ji ab kuch kaam bhi kar lethe hai. Also Viraf tum bhi thoda stress kam karo yaar nahi toh tum bhi faint karoge," Sodhiji chuckled as he patted Viraf on the back and left with Manasvi sir.

"Viraf main..." I began to speak when Viraf looked at me sternly once more which made me stop midway.

"Please ab kuch maat bolo. Bohot hogaya tumhari yeh stress aur anger. Rest ki baad jitna argue karna hai mere saath kar lena but ab mere liye chup hojao," he said as he stroked the stray hairs from my face.

"Nahi mujhe kuch bathana hai tumko," I pleaded as I sat up against my pillow and faced him directly.

"Kya? Kal raat ke baad aur kuch kehna baaki hai because agar hai toh ab mujhe nahi sunna hai. Please ab argue nahi karthe hai, tum rest karo aur main shot de kar aathi hoon," he said while grabbing my shoulders and forcing me to lay down flat on the bed again.

With one last glance at me, he sauntered off without saying anything more. I came to work late because I could hardly sleep last night with all that had transpired but a thought came into my mind which kept me awake. Viraf was right that at least he had the courage to open up to his family whereas I was still struggling to tell my parents.

Earlier that morning:

I woke up when the bright beams of the sun entered my room through the gap in the curtains. I turned on my side to check the time on the clock when I realised how terribly late I was going to be for work. I leapt out of bed and hurriedly got ready to leave which left me no time to have breakfast.

I dozed off a little in the car when the loud ringtone of my phone began to ring and jolted me awake.

"Hello?" I inquired sleepily without checking the caller ID properly to see who it was.

"Hello, Chhavi? Tu abhi takh soh rahi hai kya? Kaam nahi hai aaj?" my mother asked.

"Nahi kaam par hi jaa rahi hoon bas thoda sa tired hoon main. Kal tikh se neend nahi hua hai. Aap batao subah subah phone kiya apne?" I asked in a barely audible tone as I rubbed my sleepy eyes.

"Baath hai ki humne yeha bohot din se tere liye ek accha ladka dhoond rahi thi. Tu akela waha Mumbai mein rehthi hai kaam karthi hai toh tera toh time nahi hoga yeh sab sochne keliye. Aur kal tera liye ek bohot accha rishta aaya hai aur ladka toh bohot accha hai. Main soch rahi thi..." my mother gushed before I interrupted her enthusiastic spiel.

"Please Maa aapko patha hai ki main ab shaadi keliye ready nahi hoon," I retorted in annoyance with her excitement over this issue.

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Posted: 9 years ago
i will try reading n commenting on this thread.
thanks shaina .

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