MriAra extended OS: Together Again...||EPILOGUE Update on PG 15|| - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Tara and Pari's meeting was so emotional and sweet!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

I loved your description of Pari!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Tara wanted to shower all her love on her Pari and Mrityunjay understood her feelings!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

Accha huya ke Tara ne Mrityunjay ko Omkar ke baare mein sab kuch bata diya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

So Pari has already become a messenger between her parents!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara should not have revealed her feelings about Pari in front of Mannat!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Mrityunjay's note to Tara was very sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I hope Tara finds some evidence against Omkar!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

This part was very good!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘




Thanks for loving itπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: its-alexandrite

sorry for late reply

last 2 updates are superb...πŸ‘
family scene @ templeπŸ‘πŸΌ
pari -tara meeting was niceπŸ˜ƒ


don't feel sorryπŸ˜‰
thanks dearπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: mastaTmohi

Tara pari Milan 😭 but is really πŸ‘

Well written archu loving it


thanks MohiπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Sangeeta6690

It's amazing! Archu the writer! I was stunned! Keen to know what will do now!!

Perfect meeting of Tara, Mj and pari! Nice n cute description about pari! Waiting for next update!

thanks Sangi for loving it so muchπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Previous part

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Part 5


Tara started her search from her room, but nothing was found there.
She secretly entered Mannat's room when she was out, but there also she didn't find any evidence. She left the room just before Mannat's return to her room. It was a near escape.
Now her next target was Omkar's study. She was searching there when Omkar and Mannat entered the room. She hid behind the bookshelf.


"Bhai, today that Tara wanted to go to the temple, so I accompanied her."

"Why?? She could have run away. Why don't you understand we need her till tomorrow evening??" Omkar clutched her hand tightly, leaving red marks on her hand.

"Bhai!" she cried in pain. "If I had not taken her to the temple, she might have killed herself and that would have resulted in a huge loss to you. This visit to the temple resulted in trust building between us."

"Hmm... did she meet someone there?" he asked thinking if he had gained any information from this visit which he could use to control Tara.

"No, but a small girl gave her a rose. Tara seemed attached to that girl. She is an emotional woman, a rose made her emotional," she smirked.

"Huh...well where did you keep my organ deal file?" he cut short her talk as further talk was unprofitable for him.

"There, with other files related to the same." She pointed in the direction where the file was kept.

Rani knocked at the door of the study. "Sir, your manager has arrived."

"Yes he must have come to discuss about the party." Mannat and Omkar left the study.



Tara was listening to all this. She was shocked to the core. She immediately moved to that section of the study where the organ deal file was kept.


She started examining them. She was shocked to see many famous hospitals' names in that file. These files contained deals, bank account details in which the organ deal money was kept, addresses of other smugglers. She removed the important pages from the files.

"Tomorrow I need to give this to Mrityunjay."


She was about to leave the study when Omkar returned there.

"What you are doing here?"

Tara got scared seeing him. She immediately hid the papers in her pallu.

"I...I was getting bored in my room, so came here for a book." She faked a smile.
"But found nothing interesting here." Saying this she left.



Omkar was surprised to see her changed behaviour. But he didn't say a word at that moment.


He made some phone calls.
"Vakil Sahab, all papers are ready for tomorrow?"
"Yes sir."
To confirm the guest list once again, he called his manager.
"Manager, all arrangements are done for tomorrow?"
"Yes sir. All guests and your special guest the District Magistrate have been invited."



"Now last call."
"Laado, tomorrow you have to do one more work for me before I give you the money."

"Laado will charge extra for that," Kalavati was trying to act smart.

"I will pay."

"Ok, then say what I need to do?"

"You need to kill my wife tomorrow after I signal you."

"Ok." She hung up.



"What a man he is...?" She was stunned.
"Yesterday gave money to save her and today is giving contract to kill her...!!!"
"But why should I worry?? I am getting money, that is important and more than that, the fact that Mrityunjay will kill her is important. The more he kills, the more satisfied I feel."

She sang.

~Main teri dushman dushman tu mera
Main naagin tu sapera~



*****


Mrityunjay reached Kalavati's den with Pari. Pari went in and Mrityunjay stood in front of Kalavati.

"Remember that woman you kidnapped?"
Mrityunjay gave a thoughtful look at Kalavati.

"Arre...that Omkar's wife, who you kidnapped yesterday and you were unhappy for leaving her. See I have arranged to fulfill your wish."
Mrityunjay was confused hearing Kalavati's say this.

She continued, "Now you can fulfill your wish. You need to kill her tomorrow." She smiled while offering a gun to Mrityunjay.

Mrityunjay was shocked to hear these words. He was stuck to the place where he was standing. Once again Kalavati was planning to separate him from his Tara.

He swallowed his uneasiness and said, "Now I don't want to kill her as I kidnapped her to know Fahim's address and now he is here. So I will not kill her." His eyes were filled with anger.


He started to leave that room, when Kalavati said, "Omkar wants his wife dead after tomorrow's party."
Mrityunjay was stunned hearing this.

Kalavati words gave Mrityunjay an idea to escape from this.
"A man who first saves his wife and then the other day wants her to be killed can't be trusted," he said loudly to convince Kalavati and walked away from there.

Kalavati was not in a mood to lose an opportunity to gain money and to torture her most hated enemy Mrityunjay. But seeing Mrityunjay's rebellious mood, she kept quiet and waited for the correct moment to convince him.


*****


Mrityunjay went to see Fahim Chacha. He ordered all Kalavati's men to leave Fahim Chacha alone as he wanted to clear his account without anybody's intervention.

As soon as all Kalavati's men left the room, he rushed to Fahim Chacha and analyzed his wounds.
Seeing this care for him, Fahim immediately understood that his Kunwar Sahab had regained his memory.
Mrityunjay apologized to Fahim Chacha for acting rude to him.

Fahim Chacha was crying and saying, "It was all my fault. If I had supported Tara five years back, everyone would have been alive and living happily and this wicked, cruel Kalavati would have been behind bars."
He regretted believing Kalavati again when he visited her in jail to inform about Pari's birth and Kalavati used him to escape from jail and killed all the family members, separating Mrityunjay, Tara and Pari.


"You can put everything right now. You have a chance."
Mrityunjay was trying to console a regretful Fahim Chacha.
"You are the only one who knows all about Kalavati, her whole past. Only you can prove me to be Mrityunjay, Tara to be Tara and Pari to be Adi and Meethi's daughter."


"Kunwar Sahab I will give my life to prove what is right."
"Ok Fahim Chacha. Now you do as I say. Scream loudly as if I am torturing you and after I leave the room act unconscious."
Mrityunjay started shouting and banging on chairs ruthlessly, making sounds to make everyone believe that he was actually scolding and hurting Fahim. After half an hour, he left that room. He went straight out of Kalavati's den.


*****


Tara was worried thinking about the next day.
On the other side, Mrityunjay was worried about Tara. He wanted to inform her about Omkar's plan and their future step in unmasking the evil. He thought to visit Omkar's house.


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Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Good that Tara overheard Omkar and Mannat talking!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Tara is very smart and removed only the important pages from the file!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Iss Omkar ne toh Laado ko Tara ki supari de di hai!!!

Now Laado wants Mrityunjay to kill Tara!!!!🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒

Even though Mrityunjay has refused for now but Kalavati is definitely planning something!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Good that Mrityunjay talked to Fahim and found out the truth!!!!

Looking forward to Mrityunjay's visit Omkar's house to meet his Tara!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

This part was good!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘






Edited by Shaina_b - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Previous part

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Part 6


Mrityunjay reached Omkar's house but was confused about Tara's room. He was standing outside the bungalow thinking of a way to know her room when he saw Tara's glimpse in a room.
He reached her room by climbing over the fence, then the wall and finally used the pipes to reach her room.


Tara was lost in her thoughts and was pacing in her room. She heard someone jumping into her room through the window. It was dark in her room. There was only a night lamp on, leaving most of the room in darkness. She was already afraid thinking about the next day and Omkar's plan to kill her and this sound startled her.

She exclaimed in a loud voice, "Help!! Hel..." before Mrityunjay covered her mouth tightly.



Mrityunjay's touch made her understand it was him. She immediately hugged him tightly and in the very next moment questioned the reason for him being there. He didn't answer. Instead he moved back slightly and looked at Tara from her toe to her head.
"Tara you are looking gorgeous in pink."
Tara sensed what he indicated. She went red sensing her husband's eyes on her.

He moved to her. He grabbed his wife by her waist and pulled her to him so close that they could hear each others' heartbeats. Slowly he moved his hands over her petite body, from her hands to her face tenderly, once again making her body remember his authority on her.

After a gap of five years, her body was once again feeling him. He planted wet kisses on her starting from her cheeks which were wet with tears seeing him, then on her eyes, on her forehead. His lips grazed her neck, going to her shoulder down to her mole which he had noticed on their first meeting, making her remember each night after his re-entry in the Shekhawat Mansion. He lowered her nighty from her shoulder and kissed on her shoulder. The emotions which were held back from five years where emerging, provoking them for each other.
She moaned, "Mri..ty..un..jay.."




"Sia...Sia...open the door."
Hearing Omkar's voice at the door, they came back to the reality of the situation.

"Bhabhi..." One by one all were coming after hearing Tara's scream.

"Mrityunjay you need to leave now. And take this. These are some evidence against Omkar. Give it to Inspector Vedant, only he is honest." Saying this Tara pushed Mrityunjay towards the window.

"Always remember one thing Tara, I love YOU." He kissed her on her lips, sucking the juice of her lips and quickly left the room from the window, signaling her to meet him tomorrow at the temple.


Tara immediately moved towards the door after fixing her dress.

"Why did you scream?" questioned Mannat entering her room.

"Nothing. There was a lizard on my bed, now it's gone." She was trying to hide her emotions which were aroused just a moment ago, emotions which were dormant for the past five years.

Seeing Tara's confusing behaviour, Mannat took Tara to her room.



*****


After leaving Omkar's house, Mrityunjay carefully studied all the papers that Tara had given. They clearly showed the illegal business of Omkar. To finish Omkar and his illegal business, he packed those proofs in a cover and reached near the police station but didn't enter it as he was very well known among the police as Balli and there were some constables who were working for Kalavati and could inform Kalavati about his visit to the police station which could raise suspicion against him.
He was thinking of a way to give the evidence to Vedant when he noticed a small boy outside the police station. He handed the cover to the boy and instructed him to hand it to Inspector Vedant only. The boy did as he was instructed. Mrityunjay left for Kalavati's den.



Vedant opened the cover. First he saw a note. It read:
"Read the documents carefully and don't share with anyone here in your police station as these are proofs against a big crime in which some men from your police station are also involved."


One by one, he studied all the papers. He was shell-shocked to read those papers. All the papers contained addresses of some hospitals and organ smugglers. He reported about this to the DIG of Police and asked for his permission. He was immediately granted permission for search and arrest. With immediate action, Vedant with his team of trusted policemen started his search on the addresses mentioned in those papers and arrested them.


The whole night this continued but he was not able to figure out who the main culprit was. The interrogations were getting even stricter revealing more facts than what the papers showed. And with the arrival of the morning, the smugglers' courage surrendered in front of the police. One of the men blurted out, "Omkar Agnihotri."
Hearing this left Vedant shell-shocked. He didn't believe him but with the progress in interrogation the whole role of Omkar in this was getting clear.


There was a conflict within Vedant whether to arrest the man behind this hideous crime or to leave the man of his sister's life. Vedant, a man of ethics, chose his duty over his relation and applied for arrest warrant against Omkar.



*****


Finally the day for which Omkar had waited for five years was here. Today was Sia's birthday. From the morning he was taking care that all arrangements are done perfectly.
Omkar and Mannat wished Tara as it was Sia's birthday.

Tara asked Mannat to accompany her to the temple as it was her birthday so she wanted to thank God.



They reached the temple. Tara was worried how she would meet Mrityunjay. Once again she prayed to God to show some way to meet Mrityunjay. She handed over the pooja ki thali to the priest who was quite old, had a beard and was coughing again and again.

Tara noticed the eyes of that priest and instantly she recognized the priest as her Mrityunjay. A smile brightened up her face. Mrityunjay returned Tara's thali to her pointing to her to check the thali. He had written his message on a small piece of paper placed under the flowers. Tara wanted to talk to Mrityunjay but today Mannat was behind her like a shadow.



After returning home, Tara immediately moved to her room and checked Mrityunjay's message.

"Tara I have given all the proofs to Vedant and he has started his investigation. Be careful tonight. Kalavati is coming to the party.
Remember one thing, "I love YOU." "


Her heart felt some relief reading the note but at the same time she was confused how she would hide from Kalavati. But her heart assured her that her Mrityunjay must have arranged something for her.


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Thanks for reading


Editor: ⭐️Shaina_b⭐️
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Next update link on main page

Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Yeh Mrityunjay ke aate hi Tara screamed but thankfully Mrityunjay shut her up!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Tara knows Mrityunjay by his touch and I loved the way she hugged him tightly!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

I loved it when Mrityunjay looked at Tara that way and complimented her!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It was soo romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

They are surely craving for each other after 5 years and Tara is getting lost in Mrityunjay's touch!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Iss Omkar aur Mannat ko bhi abhi aana tha!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

It is good that Tara was able to give the evidence to Mrityunjay and tell him about Vedant!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

I loved the way Mrityunjay kissed Tara and reminded her of his love for her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

Accha huya Mrityunjay ne Vedant tak saare evidence pahucha diye and now Vedant is ready to arrest Omkar!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara can recognize her Mrityunjay in any disguise!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

I love the way he said "I love you" even in the note to Tara!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Tara trusts her Mrityunjay completely to save her from Kalavati!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

This part was fabulous!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘







Edited by Shaina_b - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Good that Tara overheard Omkar and Mannat talking!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Tara is very smart and removed only the important pages from the file!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Iss Omkar ne toh Laado ko Tara ki supari de di hai!!!

Now Laado wants Mrityunjay to kill Tara!!!!🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒

Even though Mrityunjay has refused for now but Kalavati is definitely planning something!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Good that Mrityunjay talked to Fahim and found out the truth!!!!

Looking forward to Mrityunjay's visit Omkar's house to meet his Tara!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

This part was good!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘





our Tara is smart πŸ˜ƒ

lets see what Kala had plannedπŸ˜›

thanks for liking it πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Last 3 updates are beautiful Archu! πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
Love your writing πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Loved Tara-Pari meeting 😳😳😳

So, in your story, MJ is not selfcontrol baba πŸ˜† I like out of control MJ!! ☺️☺️☺️

And Tara can recognise MJ when he is in disguise! Thank God and Thank you Archu!! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Why did Tara reveal about Pari to Mannu? Kahaan gayi ishmaartness?? 😭

It's good that Tara heard Om-Mannu talking! She's closer to the truth and even closer to MJ now 😳

Good that Lado has given MJ the job to kill Tara! Now it's easier for MJ to save Tara!! πŸ˜ƒ

Can't wait for further updates! 😊




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