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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Govind checked Tara and saw all the scratches on her were gone and she was fine now!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes, not a single scratch 😲

Tara described what had happened and that she thinks she is a witch!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
She has to relay everything to clear the situation😊

She is surprised that Guruji knows about her mother's family!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲
Anyone in her situation😊

Guruji finally disclosed that she is a witch and has all three powers!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
OMG!!! 3 powers!!!😲 πŸ˜ƒ

Tara was horrified and I suppose anybody would be!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲
yes😊

She is a good witch and Guruji assured her that it is not bad to have power!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
She needed that assurance😊

On asking, Tara told Guruji about their promise on and he was shocked!!!πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
Seems like something important😊

Now how would they know what would happen if they promised to be each other's??πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”
Exactly!!! πŸ˜†

As it is, it doesn't seem to be something which happens very often!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳
Agree 😊

So Mrityunjay and Tara are magically married!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
What!! πŸ˜›
Seems like from past few updates some news flashes are constantly comingπŸ˜†

Guruji instructed her what to do and it is good he would be training her in magic!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
She indeed needs a guide (Guru)πŸ˜ƒ

Tara successfully performed the spell to hide the cottage!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
A good start😊

It was sweet that Tara slept beside Mrityunjay holding his hand!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
It was more to relax herself😊

Finally Jayraj realized that all three bloodline threes were not supposed to be alive!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
He connected the dotsπŸ˜ƒ

It is nice that he didn't want to doubt Nirmala and that shows his trust on her!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
They show what years of love can doπŸ˜ƒ

On going through the book which he got from Vasu, he realized that his firstborn son is alive!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
He did πŸ˜ƒ

I am glad he is so considerate and is not quick to think the worst of Nirmala!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Mature love πŸ˜ƒ

The scene where he asked Nirmala was very dramatic and well written!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Thanks 😳

She is unable to reply and couldn't meet his eyes!!!!
She feels she had betrayed him by hiding this information

He was hurt but he didn't lose his senses!!!
He is a good manπŸ˜ƒ

Nirmala is so surprised to know that he is not angry at her!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
Anyone will beπŸ˜ƒ

But then she saw the tree and was horrified with the thought of something happening to Mrityunjay!!!
She is getting shock after shock

It is obviously in a bad state as Kalavati had attacked Mrityunjay!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳
Right!πŸ‘

She fainted telling Jayraj that Mrityunjay is in danger!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
Poor Nirmala

The chapter was fantastic!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Thanks😳




Thanks for reading and commentingπŸ˜ƒ
Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

For bleeding through !!!!

It was fantastic face off of trio πŸ‘πŸΌ
Thanks 😳

Mj was thinking about Tara !!!
He is doing that moreπŸ˜‰

Kalawati kabhi Bhi peechha nai chhodti !!!
Never😑

But usne socha Kaise ki Tara nai ayegi !!!
So Tara Aa gayi uska plan Kharab Karne !!!
She forgot about her. The Witch is getting oldπŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†

Tara koi kam hai Kya fight back kiya !!!
She is "Star"πŸ‘

But last Govind came & kala had to escape !!!
He came just in timeπŸ‘



Tara ko aise dekh bahoot bura lag raha !!!
But Govind is there so no fear !!!
Yeah, It hurts to see her weak but yes as you said Govind is there we don't need to fear any more, for now 😊

But why he called her outside????
Read next updateπŸ˜‰

It was good chapter!!!
Thanks😳



Thanks for reading and commentingπŸ˜ƒ

replying soon😳
Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

The small voice !!!!


It is always pleasure to read conversation between Aradhana and Nirmala πŸ‘
Yes, it is 😊

Nirmala is so excited to know that his son passed or not !!!
hahaha, It's like he had passed 10th board examsπŸ˜†

Aradhna praising mj and told her that she gave he permission , Nirmala took breath 😊
She is free from duty of finding a daughter-in-lawπŸ˜†

Also liked the conversation of Jairaj and Nirmala !!!!
Thanks😳

They r adorable!!!
They areπŸ˜ƒ

So Tara came to mj to get all her answers but he was not there !!!
Just imagine how anxious she would get😊

She is nervous and frightened too !!!
She is

It is obvious for normal person for what happen!!!
It is

Now Kalawati is more powerful than ever !!!
She is 😑

But jab Tara sath hai toh Kya baat hai !!!
Our "Tara" πŸ‘

She already saw what will be going to happen with mj !!
I guess she didπŸ˜•

But how Tara can see all this ????
No idea!!!πŸ˜•

Only Govind can tell!!!
He is wise man to know many things😊

This chapter was full of suspense and emotion !!!
It was😊


Thanks for reading, commenting, and loving it πŸ˜ƒ

Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Part DearπŸ‘πŸ˜Š
Thank you 😳


Tara went to meet MJ again when her mom was out😊
smart move πŸ˜‰

Tara saved MJ from a bearπŸ‘
yeah, she did πŸ˜ƒ
What is a crossbow???



MJ told Tara about the woman he met
He had just found a friend with which he can share his thoughts😊

Tara is never able to ask back her scarf from MJπŸ˜†
yeah, well she didn't mind itπŸ˜‰

Tara told a permanent lie to her mom to get rid of scarf topic once and for allπŸ˜†
smart girl πŸ˜‰

Nirmala is not able to tell Jairaj about her elder son being alive😭
yeah, it hurts her

Hope MJ saves Tara from Nandini
You will know πŸ˜‰

Hope Jairaj finds about Nirmala's saness
Let's hope 😊



Thanks for loving it and commentingπŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago

Hi Archu !!!

I am too much behind from your updates
I will try to fill the gaps...

The Family Business

Tara was surprised by her power.
She actually didn't know it was her power.

Aradhana got emotional and showed her wedding dress.
Of course, it was very long since she saw her husband and didn't know about him. πŸ˜”

Tara found a magic book.
And it was from Aradhana's ancestors.😲
But now her family had no power.
But Tara had the power πŸ˜ƒ

It would going to be Tara's after her marriage.
So Tara the curious, started to explore the book.
She also tried the magics πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

MJ happily told the meeting with Aradhana to Guruji.
Guruji was very hopeful for their reunion with their family.
MJ didn't tell the reason of meeting πŸ˜†

So, Tara related her power with the book's mentioned witch.πŸ€”
Aradhana tried to cheered her up by saying MJ's name.
But Tara was confident about her power.
Aradhana also tried to calm her down saying there must be misunderstanding.
And she advised to talk with Guruji.😊

This was very important chapter for knowing Tara's hidden power.
The progressing of story is wonderful.
You give your reader fun, suspense and of course the romance πŸ˜ƒ

Keep writing πŸ˜›


Edited by Khadeja - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja


Hi Archu !!!
Hi dear πŸ˜ƒ

I am too much behind from your updates
I will try to fill the gaps...
Read when you have timeπŸ˜ƒ

The Family Business

Tara was surprised by her power.
She actually didn't know it was her power.
Yes, she is unaware of her powers😊

Aradhana got emotional and showed her wedding dress.
Of course, it was very long since she saw her husband and didn't know about him. πŸ˜”
She did miss Govind very badly but holds herself for Tara 😭

Tara found a magic book.
And it was from Aradhana's ancestors.😲
But now her family had no power.
But Tara had the power πŸ˜ƒ
Seems like somethings are returning😊

It would going to be Tara's after her marriage.
So Tara the curious, started to explore the book.
She also tried the magics πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Curious cat πŸ˜†

MJ happily told the meeting with Aradhana to Guruji.
Guruji was very hopeful for their reunion with their family.
MJ didn't tell the reason of meeting πŸ˜†
MJ nowadays is not telling everything to GurujiπŸ˜† πŸ˜‰

So, Tara related her power with the book's mentioned witch.πŸ€”
Aradhana tried to cheered her up by saying MJ's name.
But Tara was confident about her power.
Aradhana also tried to calm her down saying there must be misunderstanding.
And she advised to talk with Guruji.😊
Too many things are leading Tara to connect the dots but Aradhana as a good mother is helping her daughter 😊

This was very important chapter for knowing Tara's hidden power.
The progressing of story is wonderful.
You give your reader fun, suspense and of course the romance πŸ˜ƒ

It was time to reveal something about Tara 😊
I try to keep the story readableπŸ˜†


Keep writing πŸ˜›



Your comment is amazingπŸ‘

I enjoyed reading πŸ˜ƒ

Thanks for reading, commenting, and loving it πŸ˜ƒ


Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

The Still Small Voice

Aradhana told about MJ that she liked the man.
Nirmala was happy πŸ˜›
And couldn't hide her happiness. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Little Aradhana knew about whom she was talking about to whom πŸ˜›

She also missed Govind that was very natural.
Here, Nirmala knew Govind himself trained him.
Very interesting facts !!! πŸ˜›

After Aradhana left Nirmala went to see MJ's bloodline tree.
That was very
flourishing as expected.
Because MJ was happiest than ever in his life πŸ˜ƒ
And the spell broken with touch of pearl was also happened.

Nirmala and Jairaj's moment was sweet. ❀️
At the same time their affection to each other and thinking about children were seen. 😊 😊 😊
Jairaj was missing his first son but was happy to get back
his second son 😊
Nirmala took him from there if Jairaj noticed MJ's bloodline tree. πŸ‘πŸΌ

Tara was really upset about the facts of her power
She was becoming mad thinking all πŸ˜”

Here, Kalavati had become more powerful 😲
She was planning to kill MJ

Tara was scared from her power πŸ₯±
She was returning to home 😳
She could see the up coming danger it seemed 😲
This could be a benefit for them ⭐️
So Tara went after MJ 😊

Great Update πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Commenting for next update very soon 😊



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Posted: 7 years ago


Bleeding Through


MJ was searching Kalawati.

He always lost at the thought of Tara.πŸ˜‰

And Tara also came there and was happy to see him safely.πŸ˜›

So the scene was true prediction which Tara had seen.😲

Tara was so scared, she became numb.


Pheww at last she could inform MJ.

MJ jumped from there at right time. πŸ‘πŸΌ

But it seemed this day wasn't their.

Kalawati made MJ like statue.😲

She was attacking rapidly !!!πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ

She broke his left hand !πŸ˜’

Somehow Tara unbalanced Kalawati.πŸ‘πŸΌ

MJ was out of her spell.

But he was really injured badly.

It was painful to see him like this for Tara too. πŸ˜”

Kalawati now wanted to kill both.😲

But this time Tara's power came in handy.

She was able to protect both of them and made Kalawati fall. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Tara too became unconscious.

Kalawati again stood and attacked them.

On the time Guruji came and protected them. πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Govind found both were bruised.

Still Tara's hold on MJ wasn't loose.

Govind was concerned for his daughter and made her wake up.

Tara's fear was all for MJ.

Govind tried to wake him up.

But Tara's tear did it, it was not for so long though.😊😊😊

They took MJ to the cottage.

Tara was very scared as MJ was still unconscious.

Govind gave him medicine.

Now Govind wanted to talk with Tara.

Yeh, talking is important.πŸ€“

Full action packed Update !!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

It was superb πŸ‘


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja


The Still Small Voice

Aradhana told about MJ that she liked the man.
Nirmala was happy πŸ˜›
And couldn't hide her happiness. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Little Aradhana knew about whom she was talking about to whom πŸ˜›
Aradhana is innocent and pure soul😊

She also missed Govind that was very natural.
Here, Nirmala knew Govind himself trained him.
Very interesting facts !!! πŸ˜›
Nirmala knows somethings more than anyone in Palace😊

After Aradhana left Nirmala went to see MJ's bloodline tree.
That was very
flourishing as expected.
Because MJ was happiest than ever in his life πŸ˜ƒ
And the spell broken with touch of pearl was also happened.
Exactly!!! He had never been so happy in his life beforeπŸ˜ƒ

Nirmala and Jairaj's moment was sweet. ❀️
At the same time their affection to each other and thinking about children were seen. 😊 😊 😊
Jairaj was missing his first son but was happy to get back
his second son 😊
Nirmala took him from there if Jairaj noticed MJ's bloodline tree. πŸ‘πŸΌ

They show how love grows with time πŸ˜ƒ
Nirmala is under constant pressure to hide the truth about their first born

Tara was really upset about the facts of her power
She was becoming mad thinking all πŸ˜”
Anyone will think like that given her situation

Here, Kalavati had become more powerful 😲
She was planning to kill MJ
She is 😑

Tara was scared from her power πŸ₯±
She was returning to home 😳
She could see the up coming danger it seemed 😲
This could be a benefit for them ⭐️
So Tara went after MJ 😊
Yes, she is scared from her powers
Yes, her sight might them in futureπŸ˜ƒ

Great Update πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Commenting for next update very soon 😊
Thanks😳



someone is catching up with updatesπŸ˜‰

Thanks for reading, commenting and loving itπŸ˜ƒ

You replied on each update separately πŸ˜ƒ

Thank you πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja


Bleeding Through


MJ was searching Kalawati.

He just want to finish her and reunite with his family😊

He always lost at the thought of Tara.πŸ˜‰

hahaha , she dominates most of his thoughts πŸ˜ƒ

And Tara also came there and was happy to see him safely.πŸ˜›

So the scene was true prediction which Tara had seen.😲

Tara was so scared, she became numb.

yes, the scene was same as she saw in her vision


Pheww at last she could inform MJ.

MJ jumped from there at right time. πŸ‘πŸΌ

It was good that in time she took actionπŸ‘πŸ‘


But it seemed this day wasn't their.

Kalawati made MJ like statue.😲

She was attacking rapidly !!!πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ

She broke his left hand !πŸ˜’

Some days you fall to stand again more stronger than ever 😊

Kalavati can break him physically today but they will come back😊


Somehow Tara unbalanced Kalawati.πŸ‘πŸΌ

MJ was out of her spell.

But he was really injured badly.

It was painful to see him like this for Tara too. πŸ˜”

Tara did what came to her mind in that moment

It was painful for me as well to write him like that😭


Kalawati now wanted to kill both.😲

But this time Tara's power came in handy.

She was able to protect both of them and made Kalawati fall. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Tara too became unconscious.

Kalavati just need to go😑

Yes, Tara's power saved them πŸ˜ƒ but cost her consciousness


Kalawati again stood and attacked them.

On the time Guruji came and protected them. πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Kalavati 😑

He came just in timeπŸ‘


Govind found both were bruised.

Still Tara's hold on MJ wasn't loose.

Govind was concerned for his daughter and made her wake up.

Tara's fear was all for MJ.

Govind tried to wake him up.

But Tara's tear did it, it was not for so long though.😊😊😊

Tara can't let go MJ even for a second😊

Father in Govind sometimes comes up😊

MJ need to get up to see how Tara was miserable seeing him hurt😭


They took MJ to the cottage.

Tara was very scared as MJ was still unconscious.

Govind gave him medicine.

Now Govind wanted to talk with Tara.

Yeh, talking is important.πŸ€“

Yes, she is worried for MJ 😭

Govind did what best he can do😊

I agree talking is importantπŸ˜†


Full action packed Update !!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

It was superb πŸ‘

Thanks😳


I know am way behind replying😳

You can see how late I am 😳

Thanks for reading, commenting and loving it πŸ˜ƒ

Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago

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