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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#371

Awesome Part Dear👏😊

Nirmala unknowingly met her son😊

Both she n MJ felt connection on meeting each other😃

This was more of Kalavati part than the leads

Tara could not go to MJ's house due to her mom

MJ's dull tree started glowing😊

But why it was dull all these years when he was alive?

Nirmala understood that MJ is her son only😃

MJ wants to know about his family

But Guruji will tell him on the right time

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 7 years ago

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Mrityunjay thinking of Tara when he saw the lake was really sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
They have many moments here😃

Tara was relieved to see Mrityunjay safe but then Kalavati came to attack him just as Tara had seen in her vision!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
Oh No!!!!!😲

She warned Mrityunjay just in time and he rolled away from Kalavati!!!!
Just in time!!👏

But Kalavati is not one to let go and she attacked Mrityunjay with her magic!!!!
She did 😡

The sadistic witch that she is, Kalavati is torturing him before she kills him off!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡
She is 😡

She certainly didn't count on Tara fighting back!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
She didn't knew what this new Tara is 😃. This Tara in love with the man Kalavati is torturing 😃. Love changes people for good😃

Tara grabbed Mrityunjay before he could fall and now she is so upset seeing him in pain!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭
She is 😭

It was now up to Tara when Kalavati cast a very powerful spell!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
She will fight back😃

Tara's shield is so powerful that it protected them and Kalavati's spell rebounded!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏
What is Tara now? Witch? Having of sight?😕

Finally the trio came together and it was a fantastic and action packed face-off of the trio!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏
yes, finally 😃

Thankfully Govind came just in time and Kalavati had to flee!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes, he came just in time 😃

Tara is devastated to see Mrityunay in this state!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
Me too while writing it😭

Mrityunjay woke up when Tara's tear fell on his cheek, truly kya pyaar hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 👏 👏 👏 👏
Their love is strong 😊

It is terrible to see Tara in this state!!!!
It is 😭

Govind is there and he knows how to take care of Mrityunjay and the medicines for his wounds!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Years of experience had made him wise😊

He probably called Tara outside to ask her about what happened!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔
That we will know in next update😉

I wonder if he would also finally tell her the truth!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
I am wondering same😕

The chapter was awesome!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Thanks😳

Thanks for reading and commenting😃

Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: Greys_Anatomy
Is he going to tell her the truth ?????????????😲
Read the next part to know that 😉

Yaar so much suspense ...what will happen next ?????
Next update will answer 😉

Archu ...amazing waiting for next part !!!!!!!!1
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👍🏼❤️⭐️

Thank you for loving it 😃

I know this time I left on cliffhanger 😉

Don't worry next update will be before 2018 😃

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04
Awesome Part Dear👏😊
Thank You 😳

Nirmala unknowingly met her son😊
Yeah, she did😃

Both she n MJ felt connection on meeting each other😃
They did 😃

This was more of Kalavati part than the leads
Yup😊

Tara could not go to MJ's house due to her mom
Yes, sometimes distance is made by our dear ones😊

MJ's dull tree started glowing😊
But why it was dull all these years when he was alive?
MJis away from it's home and also there is a magic forbidding him from city. Once tocuhed by Nirmala, his mother the connection is renewed😊

Nirmala understood that MJ is her son only😃
Yes, she did 😃

MJ wants to know about his family
He does😊

But Guruji will tell him on the right time
Yes, wait till the time is right😊

Thanks for reading 😊

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#375

Previous update on page 50

Wake Up Call

Govind took Tara's hand to check the scratches on her wrists and her face, but they were gone. It was like nothing had happened to her. He took a deep breath and made her sit down.

"Tara, can you explain to me what happened there near the lake?" he asked with a concerned look in his eyes.

"I don't know from where to start," she replied recalling the events from yesterday till now.
"I was standing here and saw an image of Kalavati attacking Mrityunjay near the lake, went there and found the same thing happening. Then she did some spell and locked him in his place and began attacking him with spells. When I reached near him, she again cast some spell but a white light was coming out of my palm which formed a shield around us and then I lost consciousness." She said in a single breath.
Govind was looking at her with wide eyes. She took a deep breath and said, "I think I am a witch."

Govind came near her and sat next to her. "There are some things about you Tara that you don't know," he said taking her hand in his.

"Means?" she questioned.

"Your family, especially your mother's ancestors, they had some powers many years ago, which was dormant for all these years until you touched the Pearl," he said looking at her.

Her eyes were wide with surprise after knowing that he too knew about her mother's family. She wanted to ask him about this but thought to let him complete it first.

He continued, "Yes, you are a witch. But not like there were in centuries. The witches of your family possess one power at a time. Either they can cast spells, heal others with their touch or see visions. But you my dear Tara possess all three." He smiled.

Her eyes were wide open with horror. She recalled all the incidents from the bird flying till the image of the attack. "What do you mean by that?" she whispered in astonishment.

"Seems like you have all three powers at once," he stated.

Seeing her pale, he gave her a side hug and said, "Don't fear my child. There is nothing bad about it. There is nothing bad about having such great powers. You have been given the power to help people."

After a moment of silence he spoke. "Tara I want to ask you one more thing." She nodded her head again in yes.

"Did you and Mrityujay make any promise to each other?" he asked with slight hesitation. She nodded her head in yes.

"May I know what promise you made?" he again asked hesitating.

"We promised to be each other's keeping this Earth, water, sky and forest as our witnesses," she mumbled.

"What??" shrieked Govind.
"Do you both kids even know what you did??" he exclaimed in a hushed voice. Tara was looking at her feet like a child listening to her parent's scolding.

After taking a short breath he said, "You two got married."

As soon as these words reached her ears, she lifted her head and gave a confused look at him.

"As soon as you two promised each other, you two got magically married to each other. This is happening after a long time that anyone got married in such a way. This happens only when both the persons wholeheartedly surrender themselves to one another. Now you both are bound to each other. Together you form a shield which even a powerful spell cannot break. A spell like what Kalavati did," he said looking at Tara.

Tara was not able to understand what was happening to her and to her life. Two days ago everything was normal, she was normal, her life was normal. Now suddenly she was a witch with three powers and magically married to Mrityunjay. She closed her eyes, took a deep breath and faced Govind.

"Guruji, now what should I do you tell me. I have lost all my senses," she said in an exhausted voice.

"First of all cherish what you have, second you cannot leave Mrityunjay till he gets well, third cast a spell to protect this cottage from anything magical and fourth learn to harness your power," he said grabbing her palm.

After taking a short breath she said, "First, I will need time to accept what I am now. But I don't regret it. Second, I would not have left Mrityunjay even if you had told me to do so. Third, I don't know any magic that can protect this house and fourth who will teach me how to use the powers I possess, because when I try on my own, accident happens." She retorted the last thing in a bit frustrated voice.

He smiled listening to her answers and went in the study and brought some books.
"These are the books which contain spells and all information about them. And regarding your training of how to use your powers, I can teach you that." He said placing the books next to her.

Her face lit up at this. He grabbed a book and turned some pages stopping at one. He handed over that book to her and said, "Read this spell carefully and do the hand motion shown here."

She took the book and read the spell once, then looked at Govind and asked, "Are you sure this will work?"

"I believe it will. You just need to perform the spell correctly," he said. She did as he had instructed her. As soon as she moved her hands saying the incantation in her mind, a white light engulfed the cottage. Tara was looking around her in astonishment while Govind smiled seeing it working.

"See I told you it will work," he said holding her at arm's length. She smiled weakly.

"Now you too take some rest. I am going to the forest to look for the witch. Time has now come to end her," he said picking up his bag. He rubbed her shoulder tenderly and left.

Tara returned inside the cottage where Mrityunjay was sleeping. She grabbed his right hand in her hand and snuggled herself next to his unconscious body. She didn't mind sleeping next to him knowing that now they are married, although it was magically but still they were married.

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Continued in next post

Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#376

Continued
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At the palace, the King was sitting in his chamber studying a document when he suddenly remembered how the bloodline trees were standing tall to their full glory. A thought struck him.

"Why were all three trees that the Queen had planted healthy? Isn't it that one tree was not supposed to be there?" he murmured to himself.

"Should I ask Nirmala about this?" he thought.

"But then it would be like doubting her. Like she is hiding something from me," he murmured taking a deep breath. He rested his back on the chair and closed his eyes thinking how to find out about the bloodline tree.

He suddenly got up from his table and started to search for something in his study. After searching for long, he sat down again.

"Where is the book of our family history?" he said holding his head in his palms.

There was knock on the door. "Dad may I help you?" came the sweet voice of Princess Vasu.

"Oh, my daughter. What brings you here?" he asked smiling at her.

"I just came here to return this book," she said keeping a big fat book on the table.

"It was with you!!" he said surprised.

"Yes dad. I took it months ago to read," she said smiling.

"Thanks for returning it. Would you mind if I ask you to leave now? I have some very urgent work to do," he said grabbing the book at once.

Vasu looked at him and said, "Yes dad," and exited the room.

The King hurriedly turned the pages to where it was written about the bloodline trees. After reading a few lines he lifted his gaze from the book and said, "If our firstborn was dead so should be the tree." His eyes were filled with shock.

"He is alive!" he gasped.

Then he remembered how each time when he talked about their eldest son, Nirmala's face went pale as if she was hiding something.

"Why she didn't tell me about this?" He punched his fist on the table.

"Probably she might have known this though I was unaware of it." He thought as he loosened his fist.

"But it's also possible that she knew about this, but because of some restraint she had not told me. At times I have felt like she wanted to tell me something but restricted herself from revealing it." He was confused with his own thoughts of Nirmala knowing or not knowing about this. He stood up from his table and walked out of the study towards her chamber.

He rushed into their chamber. Seeing the King serious and panting, she got up from her seat and walked towards him.

"Leave us alone!" he ordered. All the servants from her room left making the Queen more worried.

She grabbed his hand in hers and said, "What's the matter, my King?"

He took her towards the window from where the bloodline trees were visible and said, "You knew about this. Didn't you?"

Her eyes were wide with horror sensing he had realized that their eldest son was alive and she had not told him. Seeing her lower her eyes from him to the floor, "Why didn't you tell me?" he asked holding her arms tightly. "Why?"

There was an unseen pain in his voice, the pain of him being kept in dark by his own wife. She didn't have the strength to look at him. She knew he was hurt by this. He had a right to know about their son, but the witch's threat had kept her quiet all these years and now Govind's plea to keep it a secret. A tear escaped her eyes. He lifted her face to see her expression and found tears rolling down her cheeks from her closed eyes.

"I am not angry at you. I just want to know what the truth is," he said hugging her tightly.

She sobbed a little in his embrace. She then parted from him and cleaned her face. She turned away from him towards the window as she was not able to face him. He was so kind to still not get angry on her for hiding this truth from him for which he had been grieving for years. She looked towards the trees. One tree was dull and had shed many leaves. It was the same tree which today morning was glowing the most. She was horrified at the thought of something happening to Mrityunjay. She turned towards the King.

He saw her horrified face and grabbed her by her shoulder and asked, "What's the matter?"

"He is in danger." That was all she was able to say before fainting.

The King grabbed her in his arms and carried her to the bed and shouted, "Bring the physician immediately," and sat beside her, rubbing her palm.

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Thanks Shaina_b for making it readable😃
Thanks for reading😊

Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#377

Govind checked Tara and saw all the scratches on her were gone and she was fine now!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara described what had happened and that she thinks she is a witch!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

She is surprised that Guruji knows about her mother's family!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Guruji finally disclosed that she is a witch and has all three powers!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Tara was horrified and I suppose anybody would be!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

She is a good witch and Guruji assured her that it is not bad to have power!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

On asking, Tara told Guruji about their promise and he was shocked!!!😃 😃 😃 😃

Now how would they know what would happen if they promised to be each other's??🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

As it is, it doesn't seem to be something which happens very often!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

So Mrityunjay and Tara are magically married!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Guruji instructed her what to do and it is good he would be training her in magic!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Tara successfully performed the spell to hide the cottage!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

It was sweet that Tara slept beside Mrityunjay holding his hand!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Finally Jayraj realized that all three bloodline threes were not supposed to be alive!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

It is nice that he didn't want to doubt Nirmala and that shows his trust on her!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

On going through the book which he got from Vasu, he realized that his firstborn son is alive!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

I am glad he is so considerate and is not quick to think the worst of Nirmala!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The scene where he asked Nirmala was very dramatic and well written!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

She is unable to reply and couldn't meet his eyes!!!!

He was hurt but he didn't lose his senses!!!

Nirmala is so surprised to know that he is not angry at her!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

But then she saw the tree and was horrified with the thought of something happening to Mrityunjay!!!

It is obviously in a bad state as Kalavati had attacked Mrityunjay!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

She fainted telling Jayraj that Mrityunjay is in danger!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

The chapter was fantastic!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Edited by Shaina_b - 7 years ago

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Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#378

For bleeding through !!!!

It was fantastic face off of trio 👍🏼

Mj was thinking about Tara !!!

Kalawati kabhi Bhi peechha nai chhodti !!!

But usne socha Kaise ki Tara nai ayegi !!!
So Tara Aa gayi uska plan Kharab Karne !!!

Tara koi kam hai Kya fight back kiya !!!

But last Govind came & kala had to escape !!!

Tara ko aise dekh bahoot bura lag raha !!!
But Govind is there so no fear !!!

But why he called her outside????

It was good chapter!!!

Edited by kumari27 - 7 years ago

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Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#379

The small voice !!!!

It is always pleasure to read conversation between Aradhana and Nirmala 👏

Nirmala is so excited to know that his son passed or not !!!

Aradhna praising mj and told her that she gave he permission , Nirmala took breath 😊

Also liked the conversation of Jairaj and Nirmala !!!!

They r adorable!!!

So Tara came to mj to get all her answers but he was not there !!!

She is nervous and frightened too !!!

It is obvious for normal person for what happen!!!

Now Kalawati is more powerful than ever !!!

But jab Tara sath hai toh Kya baat hai !!!

She already saw what will be going to happen with mj !!

But how Tara can see all this ????

Only Govind can tell!!!

This chapter was full of suspense and emotion !!!