Bas Ek Baar Keh Do...(SS)||Last Update on PG 68|| - Page 32

Beautiful update dear Archi & songs you selected for scene are perfect match. MJ crying like child & hugged Tara wow.Yeh Tara bachhu bhi kaise kaise plan banati hai & Joseph ko bhi shaamil kar liya plan me. Chalo MJ ka darr kuchh toh door hua but yeh suspence kya hai MJ ne Tara ko nahi bataya ...Yeh James bond kyun ban raha hai? ... waiting for next update 😃 👏

Beutiful just wonderful. .loved it..

wonderful updates.. looking forwart to next update.

Ahaaa...
Zabardast update...
Biwi ho toh aisi...Tara jaisi...
Jo manjhdaar se kheech kar kinaaron pe le aaye...

Chalo Mj phirse driving mode pe aa gaya...warna Joseph ke sath beach par jaana...mujhe shuru mein kabab mein haddi lagta tha...
Pehle pata na tha na...Mj babua ki probbblemmm ka...

Archu bht bht pyaara likha hai...song ka ek ek lyrics peefect hai...❤️

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Loved reading it...

Wonderful update...

The car-driving scene was beautifully written...

I almost visualized the scene...

And the song...

So perfectly matched with the scene...

MJ is chalu...😆

he got his grip back on the steering but didn't tell Tara...😉😆

Nice...😃

Thanks Nira 😃

U have good imagination power 👏

thanks for loving it 😳

MJ is really chalu 😉

Lets see happens next 😉

Originally posted by: kumari27

Beautiful update 👏

Tara did right 👍🏼

Now mj is hiding that he got his grip once again.

He must have some plan behind this.

Thanks dear 😃

Lets see what he is planning ??😉

Originally posted by: Rohiniebian

Beautiful update dear Archi & songs you selected for scene are perfect match. MJ crying like child & hugged Tara wow.Yeh Tara bachhu bhi kaise kaise plan banati hai & Joseph ko bhi shaamil kar liya plan me. Chalo MJ ka darr kuchh toh door hua but yeh suspence kya hai MJ ne Tara ko nahi bataya ...Yeh James bond kyun ban raha hai? ... waiting for next update 😃 👏

Thanks dear 😃 😳


Tara too Tara hai , MJ ke liye kuch bhi karegi 😃
and Joseph is acting as helper 😉

HaHAhaha😆

MJ ==James Bond 😆😆😆😆😆

Dekhte hai what he is upto 😉

Thanks once again😳

Originally posted by: TINAMONI

Beutiful just wonderful. .loved it..

u r a very creative person..

Please please please update sooon..

thanks for Loving my writing 😃 😳 😳

updating 😊

Originally posted by: Sangeeta6690

wonderful updates.. looking forwart to next update.

Thanks Sangi 😃 😃 😃
😳

Originally posted by: ShagufElina

Ahaaa...
Zabardast update...
Biwi ho toh aisi...Tara jaisi...
Jo manjhdaar se kheech kar kinaaron pe le aaye...

Chalo Mj phirse driving mode pe aa gaya...warna Joseph ke sath beach par jaana...mujhe shuru mein kabab mein haddi lagta tha...
Pehle pata na tha na...Mj babua ki probbblemmm ka...

Archu bht bht pyaara likha hai...song ka ek ek lyrics peefect hai...❤️

Thanks Sahgu 😃
yes ...yes ...biwi ho to Tara jaisi 😊


Joseph ...kabab mein haddi 😛
hahaaha😆

Thanks once again Sahgu 😳