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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ShagufElina

Oye hoye...
Kya baat...

Lecturer ka comment 😆 😆 😆
Mj with guitar 😳 zabardast 👏


Thanks Shagu 😃

don't you think Lecturer humari tarah drolling kar rahi thi 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for extreme late😳

Previous update on page 42

You are mine
Part a


*Evening time*

Today the Shekhawat Mansion lawn was decorated like a sky filled with stars, because of the twinkling of small light bulbs which decorated it. The lawn was the perfect place for a party of 20 people. At the party some of Dadaji's close friends and their wives and Mrityunjay's close friends and their spouses were invited.


Dr. Fahim was in Dadaji's room hearing Mrityunjay's progress report from him. He was in complete disbelief that Mrityunjay had started driving once again within one month.


"Uncle I still can't believe he has started driving once again because of Tara's persuasion and that also within one month he is back on the driving seat as a perfect driver."

His disbelief was clearly seen on his face and in his voice.


"If a woman makes up her mind to do something, she will do that no matter what it takes to complete it and here the reason was stronger as it was for her husband. And it's clearly written in history about woman's strong determination." He patted Dr. Fahim's back.


"Your decision of marrying Mrityunjay to Tara was right Uncle."

They came out of Dadaji's room.





Mrityunjay was at the party welcoming the guests. All the guests were congratulating Mrityunjay on his achievement.


Dadaji came near Mrityunjay and took him aside.

"Well my boy, you are looking handsome in this black suit and red scarf."


Mrityunjay gave a lustrous smile which added magic to his look making him more handsome.


"Wait...But where is Tara Bahu?"


Mrityunjay quickly scanned the party through his eyes to see where she was.

"Dadaji , I think she is still not here." He replied still trying to see her in the party.


"Boy, how could she be here? You need to go and escort her. It's her first public appearance as your wife. A man should always escort his woman and take special care if it's a party. Now go before it's too late"



Mrityunjay left the lawn grinning. But after reaching near stairs he was thinking,

"Dadaji sometimes talks very weird."

He was about to keep his first step on the staircase when the noise of someone walking towards the stairs caught his attention.


He took two steps back to see who was walking towards the stairs. The person was close to the wall so only the feet were visible from where Mrityunjay was standing.


It was a lady's foot, wearing black sandals and a black saree with a red border. Mrityunjay was trying to see the face of the woman walking there. When the woman came near the stairs, Mrityunjay stared in complete disbelief. He was seeing the beauty of his life, Tara draped in a black saree with red border and her hair properly done in a bun.


He was enthralled by the compelling beauty of Tara. Her each step on the stairs was bringing her near Mrityunjay, he was standing near the staircase spell bound. He was not even blinking his eyes as he might lose the moment how the most beautiful lady in his life was approaching him.



Tara was blushing on seeing his eyes fixed on her but she also could not take her eyes away from him.


Her man looking like a prince in the black suit with the red scarf, that she had gifted him as a departing gift, wrapped around his neck. His long locks were touching his cheeks as the cool breeze was blowing in through the window where he was standing.


His physique was clearly visible in the fitted black suit. She had seen Mrityunjay everyday in suits, but today he was looking like the Prince Charming of fairy tales who has come to escort his princess. Slowly she walked down as if a fairy from the sky was coming down on Earth to meet her love. She stood on the last step of the staircase in front of Mrityunjay who was still staring at her without blinking his eyes.



"Mrityunjay," she said seeing he was still lost in his thoughts.


Mrityunjay got alerted after hearing his name and was embarrassed for what he was doing just now.


"Mrityunjay what were you doing? You were doting Tara...What she might be thinking about you?" his mind said.

"She is my wife and I can see her." replied his heart.



"Let's go," she said.


"Wait." he said coming near her. "Wait...I ...I..want to say...something... "


Tara's heart started beating very fast thinking, "What does he want to say now?"

There were many thoughts bombarding in her mind.

"Am I not looking ok in this?"

"Do I need to change?"

"Oh...God what if I had worn the worst saree?" she thought.



He interrupted her thought process by saying, "Tara, there is one change you need to do."


Hearing him, she said in her mind "I knew I must have done a blunder in choosing the saree."



She turned to go to her room when he came near her and removed the hair stick from her bun, allowing her hair to cover her almost bare back and to touch her soft pink cheeks.



She turned to see what he did just now and found him staring at her. They were watching each other flabbergasted. They were quiet but their eyes were speaking volumes. Their hearts were beating fast as if they would explode any moment.



Tara became aware of the surroundings when her long hair came on her face. She immediately moved her eyes away.

Mrityunjay too became aware with this.


She wanted to walk ahead but Mrityunjay blocked her way.

He came near her and removed her spectacles and kept her hair stick and spectacles in his suit's inner pocket. Then he half bowed and offered his hand to her.


Tara, who was blushing, shyly slipped her hand in his.


Mrityunjay held it gently taking care that her delicate hand wouldn't get hurt by his rough hands and looked at his hand with a big smile on his face. He was smiling at his fate, as they were holding the hand of the most beautiful lady in the world.

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Thanks for reading😊
Thanks Shaina_b for making it read worthy 😃


Next update on page 45
Edited by Archi21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh i miss EBI so much !!!!!!!
Good work Doll !!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
I like your all FF Archi...😊
This is my first comment in this FF , sorry i never coomment...😔
WOW!!! what an update...😃
You have gave such a beautiful EIDI...
I love the chapter name...
The chapter is awesome .
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update 👍🏼
Fully adorable chapter.
U described Tara & mrityunjay situation very well. It reminds me of " vat savitri vrat " scene.

Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful just beautiful. ...
I can see the whole scene in front of my eye...
Don't forget to update. ..
Many thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
I so loved this update
MriAra scene just outstanding...so beautifully written...just lovely & romantic
I visualized the whole sequence...
Update soon...!!!!
waiting... :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Greys_Anatomy

Oh i miss EBI so much !!!!!!!
Good work Doll !!!!!


Thanks dear 😳

miss EBI badly 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sohag

I like your all FF Archi...😊
This is my first comment in this FF , sorry i never coomment...😔
WOW!!! what an update...😃
You have gave such a beautiful EIDI...
I love the chapter name...
The chapter is awesome .
update soon...


finally u commented 😃

Thanks for ur love for my all FFs 😃

I am glad to know u loved EIDI 😃

Do read next update as Eidi is incomplete without it😊
updating


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

Nice update 👍🏼

Fully adorable chapter.
U described Tara & mrityunjay situation very well. It reminds me of " vat savitri vrat " scene.

Update soon



Thanks for loving it 😃

U r right I was inspired by that scene somewhat when i was writing this 😊

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