MriAra FF||Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi||IMP note pg. 60

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

As usual beautifully written. ... loved the tradition of mjay's house... u reminded me of my fav show IPKKND. ...

I am soo much hooked to ur write up. .. cant wait for the next updated. ..plz update asap...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: mastaTmohi
So Kiret. I happened to wake up in at 3:30am and subconsciously I picked my phone up and came to IF and saw an update. I immediately came to my senses and read the update there and then!! Call me crazy I don't know how I ended up at the forum. Reading it at that moment of time was a guity pleasure. I loved it. Update soon.

Aww well I'm glad you liked the update!!!

Will update asap

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Mrityunjay is lost seeing Tara in her wedding attire!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally Mrityunjay and Tara got married!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara's bidaai was very emotional even though she was just going next door!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

I loved it when Mrityunjay carried Tara into the house!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Her dupatta getting stuck in his watch was cliched but it showed that she cannot move away from him now even if she wants to!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Mrityunjay has to be the sweetest husband ever!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

He had found the ring but he gave it to Tara to make her win!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

I had seen Mahadev do the same thing for Parvati in Devon Ke Dev... Mahadev during their wedding!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I liked it that Tara asked Mrityunjay to sleep on the bed with her!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

They are fighting over the side of the bed they would sleep on!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Both of them really need to grow up!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Mrityunjay is wondering what he has gotten himself into, well it is called marriage!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara kitna phail ke soti hai and moves in her sleep so much!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Poor Mrityunjay couldn't sleep because of her!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

The chapter was fantastic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Yes! They finally got married!

Cliched but I still like it! 😆

He is isn't he? 😳😳😳

Really? I don't watch that so I wouldn't know! 😆

Yeah they do but kabhi kabhi chalta hai!

Bechara Mrityunjay 😆

I'm glad you liked the update! Thank you for such a lovely comment!

-- Kiret (:

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

Logged in after 3 days..and this is my first post

Sorry couldn't comment on any of the chapters..have read half way through..the story is really fine..beautiful penned!
Nice concept..interesting to see Nimmo have soft corner for Tara in ur version.
ch1: offo MJ in all new look han..nice..

Ch2: Black n Blue comb..liked by MJ on his gal.. ;)
I wonder if this little girly could reach this tall hunk ;)
Aww bangels.. how cute..

Ch3: hayee MJ Tar playing coffee coffee ;) how sweet..
Ayooo he says 'Pagal..' so cute...she is one piddi ..he knows that. Like the nok jhok btw these two.

Ch 4:Nimmo is so INTALGIGANT ;) why coudn't she be the same in da show..
LOLz a towel..acha hua koi unto situation nai huaa...poor Tara would have gotten scared like hell..:P

Ch5:Tuxedo for the hunk..hayee..ahem ;)
aww even more beautiful than it was on the display...how sweet..wish Tara gets to wear something like this..and MJ holding her in his perfect arms..

. It would have been so much better if Taara had been there with me. "

kya..? biwi hai kya tumhari ...!
Dnt worry in da future she'll come wid u :P

Ch6: So can imagine Taara giving a thumbs up for MJ with her gleaming eyes...and MJ lost in this little beauty.
Dance..wow..super!

"I don't want to be away from you again," he said. "Mumbai's not as far as London is ok, you can at least come to visit us," I said

@Ayoo...how adorable

Ch7: Oh poor Tara...losing her father..now she has no one of her own..very well written there.
MriAra scenes are brilliantly written...awesome work dear.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: TasrinS
Awesome..,,,,,I don't have words.
This was soo good
Thx 4 pm.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

No problem!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: TINAMONI
Thanks for the wonderful update. .
And thanks for the pm..

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

No problem!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: Greys_Anatomy
Absolutely fab work ...totally enjoyed it 😃

Waiting for the next part 😉

Thank you!

I'm glad you liked it! Will update asap! 😃

-- Kiret (:

Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: faizari
lovely Kiret 👏

i like that you mention every special moment of wedding..⭐️

fighting for bed side...its really funny 😆

thanks for this naughty update 🤗

Thank you!

I'm glad you liked it!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: -Humera-
Great update, I loved how you described the wedding, the rituals, and the beginning of MriAra's married life together..
Can't wait to read how this story unfolds.
Thanks for the pm 🤗

Thank you!

I'm glad you liked it! No problem! 😃

-- Kiret (:

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Posted: 11 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: _Teena_

As usual beautifully written. ... loved the tradition of mjay's house... u reminded me of my fav show IPKKND. ...

I am soo much hooked to ur write up. .. cant wait for the next updated. ..plz update asap...😊

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

I love that show too! That's where I got the idea from! 😃

Will update asap!

-- Kiret (: