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Shagufta

@ShagufElina

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Tu hi to har pal bandha hai
Lamhon ki inn zanjeeron mein

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Mohima

@mastaTmohi

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ShagufElina
Mohi pasand aaya tumhe...kya ab ki expectation par utra...
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Sab ki expectation high thi bht...
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ending kaisa laga...aur Mj ke emotion...
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I was literally crying whn i was writing...donon ka bichadna...

Bauhat pasand aya!! Muje bhi emotional bana diya! Muje laga ke kaash yeh khatam hi nah hoon mein ne lagatar x3 para hai usse itna pasand aya muje sachi mein!! I like the ending cliffhanger milegi ya nahi but umeed positive thi!
Agar ho sake toh short milne ka scene lek dena just MJ ka emotions ki! Kaise kaha daroorat nahi bas woh kya feel kar raha hai Tara ko finally pa kar!! No pressure!

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Shagufta

@ShagufElina

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: MastaT

Bauhat pasand aya!! Muje bhi emotional bana diya! Muje laga ke kaash yeh khatam hi nah hoon mein ne lagatar x3 para hai usse itna pasand aya muje sachi mein!! I like the ending cliffhanger milegi ya nahi but umeed positive thi!
Agar ho sake toh short milne ka scene lek dena just MJ ka emotions ki! Kaise kaha daroorat nahi bas woh kya feel kar raha hai Tara ko finally pa kar!! No pressure!

zaroor yaar likh dungi...anything for u...

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Shagufta

@ShagufElina

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: MastaT

Bauhat pasand aya!! Muje bhi emotional bana diya! Muje laga ke kaash yeh khatam hi nah hoon mein ne lagatar x3 para hai usse itna pasand aya muje sachi mein!! I like the ending cliffhanger milegi ya nahi but umeed positive thi!
Agar ho sake toh short milne ka scene lek dena just MJ ka emotions ki! Kaise kaha daroorat nahi bas woh kya feel kar raha hai Tara ko finally pa kar!! No pressure!

mere paas aage ki story hai...
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but pata nahi pasand aaye na aaye...
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Isska matlab ehsaas ko abhi khatam nahi karun...

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Mohima

@mastaTmohi

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: ShagufElina
zaroor yaar likh dungi...anything for u...

Aww thank you! Apne MJ emotions itne ache tarike se lekh ke I'm left wanting more!!

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

You know this little moment between all that PDA was so little that you couldn't even feel happy at it!!!!

It was silly making her sit in the front seat!!!!Would have made more sense to have her lie at the back!!!!

Yes it was Neil and now I don't know why they have changed it!!!!!😕

I liked it that he noticed but he should have realized she is not fine even though she said so!!!!!

Radha was surprised on two occasions!!!!

Is she that dumb that she cannot realize that Tara must be MJ's wife or girlfriend??

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Mohima

@mastaTmohi

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ShagufElina
mere paas aage ki story hai...
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but pata nahi pasand aaye na aaye...
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Isska matlab ehsaas ko abhi khatam nahi karun...

Joh bhi lekho gi muje pasand zaroor aiga! Ab ehsaas ko continue karni hai ya nahi it's your call.

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Shagufta

@ShagufElina

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: MastaT

Joh bhi lekho gi muje pasand zaroor aiga! Ab ehsaas ko continue karni hai ya nahi it's your call.

hmmm...sochti hun...
main scene likh dungi...
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Ehsaas mein add karun ya nahi...tum phir batana...
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Par tumhare liye...main scene likhungi...

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Mohima

@mastaTmohi

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ShagufElina
hmmm...sochti hun...
main scene likh dungi...
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Ehsaas mein add karun ya nahi...tum phir batana...
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Par tumhare liye...main scene likhungi...

So sweet of you! X