SS: Dheere Dheere Se - ArDhika + NeSam ~ 2/13/16 p63

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lavv

@lavv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#371

k d way u started vth dinner was good...

d way it started just vth coffee, then dinnner plan, helping dinner preapration n then direct confrontation...

i liked d way, arjun tried to help her...i thought he z some wat good cook too...liked d way arjun reminiscence his memories of his parents vth radhika...it was sweet...liked d line ""Heh, my father use to help my mom in the kitchen when she made chaaptis. "...now he z helping radhika...nice...

liked d way she said..probable she cant live up to his mom's ;level...at d end he did approve of her cooking...

did he make paneer tikka at d end? i hope he did...four tier tiffen box, roti,dhal,paneer tikka, n salad he made...r8...

arjun z always fond of radhika's hair...i liked his d way he said dnt burn d last one...naughty arjun knows radhika vl take time to come back to her senses...

i was happy reading dat arjun was sitting n radhika was serving n they r gng to eat...but d question of radhika stooped them from tasting d 1st byte also r8? but listening to her question i was like wat?...i am sure they slept on d bed n arjun woke up early n all...so was happy reading it...so radhika didnt like arjun escaping from d bed...its a peck r8...i am happy vth dat...so radhika kissed arjun or arjun kissed radhika, we cant tell...ardhika had a kiss...dats all to make me happy...

as expected she accused him...lol...arjun got to know its her first kiss...nice...

from his question it seems he had gal friends...there z conversation btwn arjun n neil abt dat r8...gng back to read...

but radhika's reaction to let him kiss was unexcepted...vth me atleast...i thought she z gng to run away from him wen i read radhika's eyes brightned...but enjoyed reading thinking how they r gng to react after dat in their office n all, b4 reading dat, got distrubed...

so radhika z trying to remove dat akward moment by being normal...n asking him to take dinner n their text messages wer good...

i liked d way radhika directly asked him abt dat mobile n all...

totally nice...totally ardhika update...great...

nice cookies...i am gng vth it...

waiting for d next update...

take care...

//wen u described her eyes as brown eyes...2 days back also i was thinking abt her eyes...n was thiking its brown...especially in d lonavala , hotel balcony, in d morning she woke up, vth d sun rays, it felt really brown n looked shiny..just dat thought came back.its too much i know...but cant help it..//

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#372

Aww... It was so nice 😳
It was such a warming update... I loved it... Ma ka phone aaya 😆
Their text msgs 😉
Well I only want to know how they'll realise they love each other... And then there is NeSam also... I am waiting 😃

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jaben

@jaben

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#373

superb superb. thanks for the update. was waiting for it eagerly. And ardhika update i'm double happy.

everything was just awesome. helping her with cutting veggies, talking abt his parents n panner tikka. i hope one day radz will eat panner tikka made by arjun. 😊

she directly confronted him. n most imp is he was waiting for her to come with that topic. ohhh so lovely.

ardhika kiss. yeah i expected but it didn't happen like the way i thought. u r far away from my imagination. 👍🏼

arjun was telling the flashback like a story. but he was more startled by her reaction. and the more default line " you kissed me" lol. it was gud.

Mobile ring at wrong time. why did the mobile ring???!! was he happy r sad for the disturbance. 😕

but the last part was amazing radz gave him food in carrier n all the chat on mobile. it was too gud.

superb update. loved it.

plzzz PM me the next updates.

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#374

missed out on a wonderful kiss...😉

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esprit_00

@esprit_00

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#375

That was really really good, Grace!! I loved it... the romance factor was just right. So Radz likes Arjun as well ... she just hasn't realized her feelings yet.

Loved the chapter!!!

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: jey3ram
Hiii Iheartchai,...
Wow,..superb update yaar,...So,Our Ardhika kissed,...Arjun alone knew and Radz was shocked and their text message part also superb,...

Thank you sooo much deary for such a faster update,...

Yup Ardhika kissed

And you're very welcome. Hopefully, the next chapter will be just as fast.

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: Josupra
I read all your chapters just recently. They are very well written. Waiting for your next update

A new reader, welcome 🤗

Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. It really means a lot and I am so glad you enjoyed the story thus far 😃

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: Ramyagirish
Hi iheartchai its a smashing ardhika chappy... Am Glad u broke d suspense. It really was tooo gud. I liked d starting romance . It has just got started thou... Has a Long way to go. Am really Glad tat u updated it soon. Wish d phone hadn't chosen tat moment to ring 😉...

The romance has just started 😳 ...more in store 😉

Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: hari1403
Wow ...They kissed 😳, no no our rads kissed arjun.
'So I'm more comfortable than a pillow?' Superb question .lol.And they r almost kissed once again. 😛 .Their fight over that night n kiss was very funny.Awesome update. Eagerly waiting for next update.

Sweet innocent Chashni has started something that she isn't even aware of 😉

We'll see how this affects their relationship in the coming chapters. Thanks for leaving a comment 😃