SS: Dheere Dheere Se - ArDhika + NeSam ~ 2/13/16 p63 - Page 39

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lavv

k d way u started vth dinner was good...

d way it started just vth coffee, then dinnner plan, helping dinner preapration n then direct confrontation...

i liked d way, arjun tried to help her...i thought he z some wat good cook too...liked d way arjun reminiscence his memories of his parents vth radhika...it was sweet...liked d line ""Heh, my father use to help my mom in the kitchen when she made chaaptis. "...now he z helping radhika...nice...

liked d way she said..probable she cant live up to his mom's ;level...at d end he did approve of her cooking...

did he make paneer tikka at d end? i hope he did...four tier tiffen box, roti,dhal,paneer tikka, n salad he made...r8...

arjun z always fond of radhika's hair...i liked his d way he said dnt burn d last one...naughty arjun knows radhika vl take time to come back to her senses...

i was happy reading dat arjun was sitting n radhika was serving n they r gng to eat...but d question of radhika stooped them from tasting d 1st byte also r8? but listening to her question i was like wat?...i am sure they slept on d bed n arjun woke up early n all...so was happy reading it...so radhika didnt like arjun escaping from d bed...its a peck r8...i am happy vth dat...so radhika kissed arjun or arjun kissed radhika, we cant tell...ardhika had a kiss...dats all to make me happy...

as expected she accused him...lol...arjun got to know its her first kiss...nice...

from his question it seems he had gal friends...there z conversation btwn arjun n neil abt dat r8...gng back to read...

but radhika's reaction to let him kiss was unexcepted...vth me atleast...i thought she z gng to run away from him wen i read radhika's eyes brightned...but enjoyed reading thinking how they r gng to react after dat in their office n all, b4 reading dat, got distrubed...

so radhika z trying to remove dat akward moment by being normal...n asking him to take dinner n their text messages wer good...

i liked d way radhika directly asked him abt dat mobile n all...

totally nice...totally ardhika update...great...

nice cookies...i am gng vth it...

waiting for d next update...


take care...

//wen u described her eyes as brown eyes...2 days back also i was thinking abt her eyes...n was thiking its brown...especially in d lonavala , hotel balcony, in d morning she woke up, vth d sun rays, it felt really brown n looked shiny..just dat thought came back.its too much i know...but cant help it..//


Chef and Sous-Chef

I wanted to show just how comfortable Arjun is becoming in Radhika's presence. He's saying things that he normally wouldn't say unless it is to family. And Radhika is slowly understanding how to handle Arjun when it comes to these situations. She doesn't push and lets him decide how much he wants to share about his parents and his past. A rarity at this point, since she generally talks and pries about everything else.

Arjun unfortunately did not make paneer tikka for Radhika but maybe he will some other time 😉

Your version of the tiffin box is nice. Arjun should make that for Radhika for lunch 😆

As for Arjun's love for Radhika's hair I think it's Radhika's hair that is in love with Arjun's touch 🤣

Night-time Mischief

The "kiss" whom started it really It was just a peck but it's just the beginning of their relationship. I'm sure more kisses will come 😳

I know I could have ended it with Arjun just backing away after seeing Radhika's fearful reaction with her eyes closed so tightly. I actually thought about whether or not to just end it there or have them become lost in each other in that tender moment after Arjun's dialogue "I'm not going to force myself on you. You deserve better."

I know option one perhaps would have been a better ending as it goes in line with Arjun's code of conduct shown thus far. But in the end I decided it was time to hint that there is this unknown attraction starting to build between them. That if another opportunity presented itself there would be a good possibility that they would share a kiss. Anyways, I have some other things in store and this builds in nicely with the foundation of their relationship 🤓

Edited by iheartChai - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Aww... It was so nice 😳
It was such a warming update... I loved it... Ma ka phone aaya 😆
Their text msgs 😉
Well I only want to know how they'll realise they love each other... And then there is NeSam also... I am waiting 😃


Ma ka phone aaya 😆 My friend actually has that part of the song as her ringtone for her mom 🤣

Unfortunately for us Ma's phone call ruined the moment for Ardhika 😭

Oh well they will get other chances after all it's just the beginning for them 😉

Big things are coming...right now setting up the relationships for both couples before I shake things up 😈 🤓
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jaben

superb superb. thanks for the update. was waiting for it eagerly. And ardhika update i'm double happy.

everything was just awesome. helping her with cutting veggies, talking abt his parents n panner tikka. i hope one day radz will eat panner tikka made by arjun. 😊
she directly confronted him. n most imp is he was waiting for her to come with that topic. ohhh so lovely.
ardhika kiss. yeah i expected but it didn't happen like the way i thought. u r far away from my imagination. 👍🏼
arjun was telling the flashback like a story. but he was more startled by her reaction. and the more default line " you kissed me" lol. it was gud.
Mobile ring at wrong time. why did the mobile ring???!! was he happy r sad for the disturbance. 😕
but the last part was amazing radz gave him food in carrier n all the chat on mobile. it was too gud.
superb update. loved it.

plzzz PM me the next updates.


One day Rads will get to eat paneer tikka made by her Arjun 😉

😆 I was inventive wasn't I? I wanted it to happen in a very innocent and pure way without Radhika really being at fault for not remembering. I mean it's Arjun ...look at him...how could you not remember kissing him? 😲

Regarding Arjun's state of mind about the interruption...he could have been sad or happy...you can choose to think whichever one you want.

I have added you on the PM list 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurisb80

missed out on a wonderful kiss...😉


Yes, Arjun and Radhika did miss out but I'm sure they won't miss the next one 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: esprit_00

That was really really good, Grace!! I loved it... the romance factor was just right. So Radz likes Arjun as well ... she just hasn't realized her feelings yet.

Loved the chapter!!!


Radz as usually clueless about her feelings.

Arjun confused and clueless to the depths of his own feelings.

Sam clueless to everything at the moment.

Neil acknowledges where his feelings are going.

1 out of 4...that's bad...why are 3 of the main characters so clueless 😕 😆

Well, we will see how everyone starts getting a clue 😆 in the chapters to come 😉

😈 forewarned author is going to start messing with these clueless people.
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Posted: 9 years ago
grace...
so so awesome...ardhika kiss,my heartbeat increased ;)
it was so real...very good...hmmm

thanks for the quick update...and waiting for next update...
ardhika conversation aftr the confrontation also too good..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iheartChai



Yes, Arjun and Radhika did miss out but I'm sure they won't miss the next one😉


ohhh...then it will be a treat for me...
eagerly waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Smashing and so romantic episode according to me!Just loved it.
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Posted: 9 years ago

First, I forgot to tell u d title was nice n apt...radhika asked n arjun listned...radhika asked arjun explained..radhika listned to him...radhika told him...he listned..so from d start to till end...they both followed it seems in this update...I even like d song sun sathiya...

Agree arjun z started comfortable sharing his past vth her, radhika giving him space n was just listening to him to know him more vth her simple questions than being a detective...

Abt arjun not preparing paneer...its totally fine...they hav d entire time in d world to try all these things...d thing z, u especially mentioned 4 tier...so I thought it vl suit vth their preaparation...but no complaints...bcz, truly speaking I thought radhika z gng to peck him on his cheek or say sorry to him, wen she came looking for him, wen she came to know arjun was not there, n she even cut her mom's call short...so surprised vth her 4 tier box...anyways dat gal has a 2 tier steel lunch box in her precious bag in d show...no wonder she has a 4 tier box at home...lol...

Actually after commenting here, I started thinking again..n came to d point dat..d way u hav written z too good...she z engaged once, but didn't kissed anyone till dat night...d same gal z now ready to accept dat from a guy who she knows for a short time shows d difference...here she likes arjun n attracted to him..her answer clearly explained wehter d other person z conscious or not..dat kiss z counted...n so she was ready for it actually happen it seems..this time its her way of telling him, dat she doesn't need better...n she z ok vth him...so now I got y u used dat...actually I am ok vth he backing away, she running away, any other interruption, or they kissing...everything works vth them...but wat u hav given z apt I think...at dat moment she just given into her wishes it seems..bold attempt considering radhika's nature n arjun's boundaries...but here it works...but arjun's thinking abt relationship vth her ..n his inner questions...I am looking forward to know more on dat..they already started their travel ...so already exited to read how they r gng to grow their relationship...


abt radhika's hair n arjun...i am happy vth both d ways...

it became a paragraph again...i vl try

Edited by lavv - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hanishank

grace...
so so awesome...ardhika kiss,my heartbeat increased ;)
it was so real...very good...hmmm

thanks for the quick update...and waiting for next update...
ardhika conversation aftr the confrontation also too good..


Thanks for commenting. I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter.

Ardhika's relationship is slowly evolving we shall see what happens next 😉

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