SS: Dheere Dheere Se - ArDhika + NeSam ~ 2/13/16 p63

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iheartChai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: hari1403
Awesome update yaar. I was literally laughing like mad while reading the whole chasing part.🤣The pregnant lady was angry with her husband for ice cream ,in that situation also she was inquiring about ice cream .lol.Superb songs.Arjun n radhika both r keen to know what had happened lastnight between them.In temple the convo of arjun n priest also superb.Eagerly waiting for next chapter.

Glad you enjoyed the chase scene. I had fun writing it. Poor Neil though all of this because of ice cream 😆

It took me a while to find the right songs I wanted to use for the radio scene between Arjun and Radhika. So super happy you liked my choices.

We'll find out more about Ardhika's night 😉 in the next chapter.

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iheartChai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac
That was like one of the craziest yet most enjoyable NeSam update and a romantic ArDhika update 😉
I loved Neil and the lady's dialogue excahnge 😆 Belgium Choco-chip Ice Cream can do wonders 🤣
Well that air of awkwardness between ArDhika was so damn cute. And the Radio was hilarious (I suppose you wanted it to be cause when I read the last song I couldn't control myself 🤣 )
NeSam were so adorable in the end. A small part yet blissful...

P.S. To be honest I thought you forgot all about this SS but I am happy you proved me wrong 😃

Yes, the chase scene was really outrageous...all because of ice cream 😆 Poor Neil getting into all that trouble because of that silly husband and wife spat.

Yes, the radio part was suppose to be funny too. If you noticed the song got progressively suggestive about love/romance/relationships. Arjun has no idea when or how but subconsciously he's becoming complete when he's around Radhika (Jab Mila Tu) and Radhika is completely clueless when the signs are slowly pointing to the obvious (Saibo) and then now the subconscious / conscious attraction / tension that is developing between them (Tumhe Apna Banane Ka)

Thanks again for commenting. I know it's been long gaps in between updates. I've just been super busy with work that I finding hard to squeeze in time to write even when I really want to but have to head to bed.

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iheartChai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: jaben
wow. ur imagination is making me laugh like anything.

just imagined the car chase scene with all the actors. it would be real fun if watched on screen. ROFL.

😆 Glad you enjoyed the chase scene. Imagine with who you like and enjoy it 😃

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iheartChai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: mayurisb80
You could go Aww..so cute with regards to Neil...
loved the update...

Yes poor Neil he needs a hug 🤗

Thank you so much for commenting 😃

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iheartChai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: mmzmahi
A hilarious update.. But what's with Radhika's cheeks ?? I am guessing that Arjun may have kissed her..

Radhika is blushing but is confused as to why. Subconsciously she remembered something but isn't too sure about it. Arjun Sir may need to fill that part in for her.

We'll see what he says in the next chapter 😉

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iheartChai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: esprit_00
Awesome Grace!! I love how you have kept the mystery behind what transpired between Ardhika that night... Arjun remembers and Radhika is clueless... hmmm... i want to know what really happened, lol.

Don't we all E? 😆

I'm such an evil author 😈 to keep everyone in suspense

As usually Radhika is clueless though subconsciously she knows something is up

Well, we will see what Arjun Sir has to say about last night 😉

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iheartChai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: Ramyagirish
Hi iheartchai. Am extremely curious Wat actually transpired btw radhika and arjun tat time. I went bac to ur periods update as to read whether I missed smth but no I have not... So Wat ever mystery it is pls update asap. I can't wait .it's lovely.

I purposely left that part out of the chapter. But Arjun and Radhika are definitely trying to piece it together in their minds.

We'll see what happened in the next chapter 😉

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lavv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#358

truly u r a mischievous author for sure... dats y i enjoy d reading more n more...

i know, u guys do research for writing...

its really nice to know, u work so much to select d title ...d song selection u always do z great...it aptly suits d situations...great work...

yes. i hav over imaginative brain...i even pictured sid n parineeti lol...

neil n lady was d funniest n craziest for me...

keep up d great work...take care of ur health too...looking forward to read more...

//u know wat makes me more surprised n appreciate u more...for comments also, u use sub titles...dat titles also very apt...great gng...//

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Tanya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#359

Was laughing so hard about the lady's part and her husband.Innocent Neil always tangled in such situation.Also loved as usual Ardhika part.

Becoming your big fan of writing.👏😃

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iheartChai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: barbie21034
Was laughing so hard about the lady's part and her husband.Innocent Neil always tangled in such situation.Also loved as usual Ardhika part.
Becoming your big fan of writing.👏😃

Thanks so much for the lovely comments 😃

I am so glad you enjoyed the chase scene. Poor Neil getting involved in such a situation 😆