SS: Dheere Dheere Se - ArDhika + NeSam ~ 2/13/16 p63

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-GayathriK-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#251

I dont think it can get anymore beautiful! i was smiling all the way too wide while i was reading the phone conversation Ardhika was having. For a person like Arjun, it was just amazing how he just opened up about his mother to Radhika and how Radhika just had her own way of comforting him. I think you just lightened up my mood 1000 times with this update!! It was just amazing! I am loving this day by day! Banjaara is one of the songs that i always had in mind while thinking about Ardhika and now reading this was heavenly!

I am gonna re-read this entire think until you post the next update!!

Thank u for a wonderful update! Continue soon!! 🤗

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ArthunaAlive

@ArthunaAlive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#252

The flow of the story is enticingly captivating with subtle nuances of emerging feelings that I wish the chapter had not ended !!!!! Well done Grace Dear 👏

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

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Posted: 10 years ago

#253

That was the sweetest pair...both Sam n Neil ,Neil and Chashni n then Arjun n Radhika...i cant choose whose the cutest...

I guess Arjuns thanks was for her giving him company ..solace with inane words...

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esprit_00

@esprit_00

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Posted: 10 years ago

#254

Very nice as usual 😊

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: Ramyagirish
Hi ur story is moving beautifully. Raneil rapport is grt... Nice ardhika conversation...Thanks for updating missed them a lot.. Yup it was a biggg chapter. Please continue. Kudos to u for giving us such a big one, waiting for nandini s plot to unfold.

Yea I know it was very long chapter...glad you liked it. Bit by bit we will find out what exactly Nandini is up to 😉

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
awesome update
I wonder what is going on in Nandani mind. I hope it won't destroy the innocent friendship between Arjun, Radhika, Neel and Sam.
Update next chapter soon

That is the big question...what is Nandini plan? Is she good or is she evil? 😛

All will be revealed in due time 😉

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: Sweets101
Lovely long piece...didn't want it to end

Thank you for taking the time to comment. It really means a lot. Glad you enjoyed the chapter despite it being super long 😃

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: don girls
Awesome update

Thanks for leaving a comment. So happy you enjoyed the chapter 😃

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: -GayathriK-
I dont think it can get anymore beautiful! i was smiling all the way too wide while i was reading the phone conversation Ardhika was having. For a person like Arjun, it was just amazing how he just opened up about his mother to Radhika and how Radhika just had her own way of comforting him. I think you just lightened up my mood 1000 times with this update!! It was just amazing! I am loving this day by day! Banjaara is one of the songs that i always had in mind while thinking about Ardhika and now reading this was heavenly!
I am gonna re-read this entire think until you post the next update!!
Thank u for a wonderful update! Continue soon!! 🤗

I thought Banjaara was just the perfect song for Ardhika...in the serial Radhika really did teach Arjun how to live again and he found someone he could "come home to" and rest his "heart and soul".

I am super happy you enjoyed the chapter. I was afraid I had written too much and it would be a bore to read especially since I had already written a phone convo with them in the last chapter.

Last time it was Arjun who initiate the call and it was purely for business purposes but this time Radhika initiated contact to indirectly keep Arjun's mind off his parents death.

I wanted to build on Arjun's subconscious attraction towards Radhika.

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iheartChai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: ArthunaAlive
The flow of the story is enticingly captivating with subtle nuances of emerging feelings that I wish the chapter had not ended !!!!! Well done Grace Dear 👏

Thanks so much 😳 I am glad you enjoyed it even though it was super duper long. I was afraid I crammed too much in the chapter to move the story along.

I wanted to build the relationships between the characters and firm up my plot for the big reveal of Nandini's plan 😉