SS: Dheere Dheere Se - ArDhika + NeSam ~ 2/13/16 p63 - Page 27

Originally posted by: mayurisb80

That was the sweetest pair...both Sam n Neil ,Neil and Chashni n then Arjun n Radhika...i cant choose whose the cutest...

I guess Arjuns thanks was for her giving him company ..solace with inane words...

Originally posted by: iheartChai

I thought Banjaara was just the perfect song for Ardhika...in the serial Radhika really did teach Arjun how to live again and he found someone he could "come home to" and rest his "heart and soul".

I am super happy you enjoyed the chapter. I was afraid I had written too much and it would be a bore to read especially since I had already written a phone convo with them in the last chapter.

Last time it was Arjun who initiate the call and it was purely for business purposes but this time Radhika initiated contact to indirectly keep Arjun's mind off his parents death.

I wanted to build on Arjun's subconscious attraction towards Radhika.

Originally posted by: esprit_00

Very nice as usual 😊

Originally posted by: -GayathriK-

Radhika has never failed in making Arjun feel better. Its that what makes Ardhika special!

I would just keep reading no matter how long your updates are! In fact the moment the update ends i wish if it was longer. And somehow the way you chose to bring the characters evolve and know each other slowly as the title says 'Dheere' its just amazingly done! I see the development in ardhika slow but steady and really something that i can relate to.

I think you are doing a brilliant job on how unknowingly Arjun is attracted to Radhika and i smell the beginning of feelings there, though not so strong as of now 😉

Oh i have no idea how i am gonna wait till your next update 🤔

Btw can you add me into the pm list??

Originally posted by: akyalove0896

First of all thanks a lot for such a beautiful update

I am hell stressed with my exams and this update gave me relief really

You are absolutely right

Banjaara is really the right song for ArDhika

Radhika was the one who taught Arjun to live again

She filled his life with love

And Arjun was really a wanderer and Radhika was his shelter- his home

This song described ArDhika beautifully

And it's amazing that maybe Arjun has started to feel for Radhika

And I'm sure his love for her will be great

Love ArDhika

And love you🤗

Originally posted by: lovv

now completed...

wat to say...its too good...i knw its a long update...but still i dnt want it to end...

awww..too sweet

i really liked ramu kaka n radhika conversation...d way ramu kaka knew her...ready to share abt arjun... n neil telling radhika...if ramu kaka ready to tell...dats line itself indicates d trust ramu kaka had n nandhu's waords abt ramu kaka z too good...so if ramu kaka gives importance to radhika...dats tell another story...

Ramu Kaka has been with the family a long time...so i am sure he knows some things 😉 what he knows should be interesting

i really liked nandhu too...d way she spoke to neil n radhika was good...it seems she z very caring for arjun...she z taking revenge for arjun n his parents...n she got hurt too...waiting to knw d reason...i knw its gng to b more good...already seen nandhu targeting radhika...so can u make some other way keeping nandhu-radhika being good...just a request...

Not to keen on seeing Nandini's evil side? 😆 Can't say much for now...🤓

i liked radhika -ridhima conversation...like normal ppl now a days discuss abt diet n food...

n liked d way u dragged d info dat dadaji liking arjun...n d way radhika totally flipped her word n changed d topic...radhika too knows everything cant be shared...otherwise she could hav told dadaji how he helped her dat night wen power got out n dat dinner...poor ridhima dnt knw...

I really wanted to show the sisterly bond. i don't know if they showed that much in the show as I discovered the show much later.

Dadaji is sort of like Ramu Kaka for the Mehra household 😆 they know a lot of secrets and good people to talk to and get advice from

i thought from d party arjun z gng to tour d place radhika said...but his dialogs to sam was too good...abt if meant to be...they they vl...was too good...

I sped up things straight to the party scenes to keep the chapter moving without dragging so much other stuff into it

n ur song n d way d lyrics aptly gone vth situations wer too good...

Thank you...loved the song Banjaara...thought it was the perfect song for Ardhika

at d bar...i thought its radhika's call..bcz b4 gng for chai she was thinking so...i thought she z gng to call...so its her message...n i think arjun thought she z gng to spaek n left d bar...too good...

n i liked ardhika phone calls totally...i nevr thought he vl put it on speaker though...

arjun talking abt his mom was too good...surprised he said dat so normally..u put dat really good...

n d dialog beggers cant be choosers...lol...first moneky , mr.grumpy now begger great gng...

yup, it was Radhika's text message that got Arjun's attention...without thinking so much he just decided to go up to his room so he could speak with her without distractions

i thought she vl ask him abt d visit...but ditn get to read...hope he already visited d place...bcz arjun n sam r gng to return r8...

Honestly, I meant to put it in but then just forgot about it 😆 I'll have to work it into the next chapter

n d last one, arjun saying thanks to radhika, says he m8 already knows y she called him, d second she said abt ramu kaka, he got dat it seems ...n her message n call byherself shows dat... he did got d caring person n d home...like d lyrics goes on...u r really too good yaar...

it was a subtle hint...that he some how knew or understood her true intentions...that probably explains why he finds himself letting his guard down...even if it is only for a split second

Her intentions are always good and she never expects anything in return. Because I think at this point he doesn't have anything in return to give or he hasn't realized this yet 🤓

me too like paneer after gobi, so arjun z gng to like paneer next time...n arjun remembering her hurt feet still...good...

I like paneer too. When I visited Indian back in June it was so awesome to have the real deal 😆 Over here it is made with cow's milk so it's less fluffy.

// did i miss something...how did radhika know dat arjun took responsibilities from d age of 19...i hav to go back n read P.Chapters...//

I never really said it anywhere. I just mentioned it was 9 years ago death anniversary and since the characters are in their 20's...if you add that together...Arjun is around 27-28 now. I wanted him to be elder here with Sam and Neil around the same age and then Radhika a year younger. So I image Sam and Neil to be about 26-27 and Radhika is 24-25. The age is sort of flexible 😆 they are all in their 20's

i totally loved it...thanks you so much for d wonderful update...

You're welcome...glad you enjoyed it 😃

looking forward to next update...

Originally posted by: iheartChai

A long comment requires an equally long reply...see my replies in pink

u know, here very less no.of stories r there on ardhika, few r discontinued...n few hav exmas n health n work...so wen i got d update felt too happy...n over enthusiastic...lol

next time i vl make sure to give short n sweet comment...

Thanks for taking the time to comment. Makes my day to see readers enjoying my work 😃

you work z too good...so it makes us like n comment...nice work...