SS: Dheere Dheere Se - ArDhika + NeSam ~ 2/13/16 p63 - Page 24

Created

Last reply

Replies

500

Views

67.2k

Users

47

Likes

944

Frequent Posters

iheartChai thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: romi21

Awesome loved every bit


Thank you for taking the time to comment. It really means a lot. So happy you enjoyed the latest chapter 😃
iheartChai thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Tahiti-1

You know, I could almost actually imagine the scenes!!!!

You REALLY should become a writer + a director + a producer!!!! Bravo!!!!!!!
❤️👏


That's so sweet of you to say 😳

You know I did at one point in time when I was growing up wanted to become a director 😆


iheartChai thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 10 years ago
To my Detective Readers out there 🤓

Some great analyses ⭐️


Originally posted by: lovv



haan yaar i actually thought of d title, n got doubt, wen both of them i mean ardhika spoke n showed concern, n nesam already talking all d waking hours...so y khamoshiyan...then i cam to conclusion dat...arjun z not totally opeded up, n few important things/turns already started silently like arjun's feeling, nandhu's plan...so may b dats y d title...

thanks for d explanation...

looking forward to read d next update...take care of ur health first then abt updates...enjoy ur time...


@bold - that is also another way to look at it too. That's why this chapter was harder for me because I had to concentrate on what I could say or couldn't say and still try to imply or show there is a "silence" here in actions of the characters. What they do not do say or do versus what they say and do.


Originally posted by: esprit_00

I want to mention a few points that i loved:

1. the fact that Arjun is very much affected by Radhika. He is paying special attention to everything she says or does. His ears perked up when Sam mentioned Radz, and with just a mere mention of what Radz thought of him, he let his guard down (unconsciously). I like to think the boxing session in the morning was to do with the night before when Arjun was stuck in the office with RAdhika (and their tender moments).

2. Nandini mystery ... so i figured Arjun's solitude and painful memory of his parents triggered his bua to change some "revenge plans" as the late night phone call. That was nicely done ... and I also guessed Sam joining Arjun on that Singapore flight was related to this whole thing.

3. Ra-Neil friendship ... honestly they were the cutest thing on DYM and I am glad you are keeping them connected in your story.

4. Radhika maybe unaware of her own feelings, but she too is affected by Arjun ... just the way she talked about him to Sam. As i mentioned before the phone conversation was very nicely written ... the mute button comment was the cutest, lol.

5. Will Arjun get a Merlion something for RAdz? 😳

thanks again ... and hope to read a new update soon!



1. You can think that 😉
2. 👏
3. Trying to my best to keep the four characters involved in each other's lives like they had in the show especially since I am writing my own version of the show 😆 I know some of the characterizations may be off at times
4. I saw some clips of early interactions between Arjun and Radhika...no subs so had to go with what I could understand (which is very little) and facial expressions and actions 😆 and from what I could see the banter they had was full of sparks and jabs at each other. So the idea was how do you go from fighting to subtle normal conversation with a touch of humor?
5. Hmmm good idea 😎


Originally posted by: PoohLover

Hellooo @IheartChai😳😳

First of all am really sorry...there seem to be a problem with my laptop that am not able to like your updates

I read all the chapters and all the time i was falling more in loove with your story⭐️

Its soo beautifully written...i loove the way how there is a bit of suspense in every update about arjun past,nandini motive and i guess radhika also has also gone through a sad phase in life according to my observation😊😊

Am very eager to read about your next updates and how you mould the story and i totally like the pace the story is going on👏👏

I dunno but arjun password seems to be an indication about his past... if am not wrong does it mean sid and nia...maybe his siblings or best friends...am being quite a detective here lol😆😆

Once again sorry for not being able to comment or like before...will surely like the updates once this problem is solved😛😛

Last but not the least...take care of your health and updateee sooon 😉😉


As esprit_00 had stated the password is Arjun's parents' names. And as you have figured it out it is Sid and Nia 😃

And no worries about the Likes...taking the time to post a comment is more than enough for me 😃 I'm so glad you are enjoying the story thus far. I worry about my pacing as I know I tend to get wordy and take too long to get to the point. So I'm trying my best to pick up the pace a little more.

Please stay tuned 😉



Edited by iheartChai - 10 years ago
lovv thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: iheartChai

To my Detective Readers out there 🤓

Some great analyses ⭐️



@bold - that is also another way to look at it too. That's why this chapter was harder for me because I had to concentrate on what I could say or couldn't say and still try to imply or show there is a "silence" here in actions of the characters. What they do not do say or do versus what they say and do.




1. You can think that 😉
2. 👏
3. Trying to my best to keep the four characters involved in each other's lives like they had in the show especially since I am writing my own version of the show 😆 I know some of the characterizations may be off at times
4. I saw some clips of early interactions between Arjun and Radhika...no subs so had to go with what I could understand (which is very little) and facial expressions and actions 😆 and from what I could see the banter they had was full of sparks and jabs at each other. So the idea was how do you go from fighting to subtle normal conversation with a touch of humor?
5. Hmmm good idea 😎



As esprit_00 had stated the password is Arjun's parents' names. And as you have figured it out it is Sid and Nia 😃

And no worries about the Likes...taking the time to post a comment is more than enough for me 😃 I'm so glad you are enjoying the story thus far. I worry about my pacing as I know I tend to get wordy and take too long to get to the point. So I'm trying my best to pick up the pace a little more.

Please stay tuned 😉





haan yaar, i forgot abt his password , thanks to @poohlover... even i thought its his parents...bcz they r d only one's he doesn't have physically in his life...n how much he affected by their absence... i thought radhika's brain vl work out...bt its ok...


n agree vth esprit's 5th point, i am sure arjun vl bring it for her...n i am hoping sam vl forget it...bcz she z totally busy vth neil's calls wenever she z free...n arjun z gng to follow radhika's advice n gng to tour dat place...


n radhika wishing for sosmething ...k not directly from him...n arjun not getting dat for her...noway...lol...bt he vl give her indirectly it seems...

n one more thing he can message her n get d details, n he could hav called office number, so dat who ever present they can help him.. n then he can change his password..n i even felt he just called her eventhough he has files bcz he asks her "r u still in d office"n dnt stay late in d office shows, he expected her to b working late as usual...just my thinking...

bt arjun showed his eagerness to speak to her, as well as his trust...

like cv's, u put some minute n important details in ur chapters...

i really like this line by arjun...

"i am not like dat radhika, dnt wrok hard or something n then says, dnt stay too late"...

i am not like dat dialog was too good dat, he felt bad dat she thought abt him like dat...

dnt stay too late...his concern for her...


totally it feels like discussing d episode after telecast...

great gng...





Edited by lovv - 10 years ago
Kruthi1908 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Absolutely lovin dheere dheere se...its goin on really wel...captivating...!!!
Love arjun here...arogant n strange jst as in DYM...loved dat scene in whc radhu cals him n he gets suprised..d shreded bill n evythin..does he hav a past story here...?? N is nandini plannin sumthin gud or evil..?? Hope shes gud here...

Loved radhu n neils weekend plannin scene...so cute...

N atlast arjun n radhus ph conversation...arjun calls her coz he misses her after talkin abt her wid sam ryt..?? N I guess hes even startin to enjoy her habit of talkin non stop...

Lovely update...plzzz do continue soon...eagerly waitin...
esprit_00 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Hope you'll be updating soon :)
Huma- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 10 years ago
waiting for the update ;)
iheartChai thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kruthi1908

Absolutely lovin dheere dheere se...its goin on really wel...captivating...!!!

Love arjun here...arogant n strange jst as in DYM...loved dat scene in whc radhu cals him n he gets suprised..d shreded bill n evythin..does he hav a past story here...?? N is nandini plannin sumthin gud or evil..?? Hope shes gud here...

Loved radhu n neils weekend plannin scene...so cute...

N atlast arjun n radhus ph conversation...arjun calls her coz he misses her after talkin abt her wid sam ryt..?? N I guess hes even startin to enjoy her habit of talkin non stop...

Lovely update...plzzz do continue soon...eagerly waitin...


So glad you are enjoying the story thus far.

Hmmm...
Arjun's past? - everyone has a past and in due time things will be revealed

Nandini's plans - good/evil depends on perspective

Ardhika's phone convo - you can interpret that anyway you like 😉

Thank you for taking your time to leave a comment 😃
lovv thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Hey @iheartchai, Happy Diwali...
hope u r dng good now...


n hope, u r gng to update this week...


thanks in advance...



@Huma...lol yaar...dat pic was ROFL...so he z gng to drink only he sees d update...while reading he z gng to enjoy his coffee...nice one...
Edited by lovv - 10 years ago
desikalakaar thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
This is a great FF! Can I please be added on the PM list?

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".