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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Asheley

When this nandhini going get her punishment??
I want all of them to suffer for their deeds, when truth comes out i want all of them to suffer more
As i really want to know who is her husband but can wait for his entry at right time.so that they can suffer more
i couldn't stop myself commenting again i loved it so much
and ya dont leave that saral also



No matter yaar... Loved to have your comment twice...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: romi21

👏👏 U killed it , it was awesome... Love this New Radhika, but what about the Baby she was concieving 3 yrs back,



Not 3 years, but 6 years...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: eshasrk

Amazing, superb, excellent update. I am just loving this new Radhika, sooo confident and all

They all should pay for what they have done to her, destroying her life in the process.
Luckily she found a great husband and the love he has for her is so pure...am loving it !!!!!

It's payback time !!!!!!!!!!!! You go girl Radhika

Plsss update soon




Yay yay... Go Radhika...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Awesome Update

Radika got married and seems like she is happy in her life



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I'M BACK... HAHAHA, the DEVIL in me is laughing... Seriously!!!!!!!! Don't mind. I've fallen before few days, and I think, my brain's screw have fallen somewhere..

Never mind, lets proceed... Lets see today, whose day got unlucky, to have collided with my RADS... God, atleast spare me...

Peep in guys...

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Chapter 7:

Week has passed.. A week since Radhika, oopss, Mrs.Raichand and her team has entered Bird Song. A week since the bad days of BS team's have started. A week since the staff of BS has turned into labours. A week since the sanctuary of these people has turned to a Danger Zone.. God, please save us from these torture', only this thought is running in the mind of BS staff.

None got spared. The following whole week the BS team learned nothing, did nothing, except serving and pleasing the ANIMO team, and their MD. They were asked to serve coffee, bring snacks, fixing appointment at parlour, booking at restaurant, etc. Along with this, they were loaded with work of the project. The ANIMO team keep them so much engaged that till the end of the day they couldn't even touch the file due to exhaustion. And then the time comes for facing the Devil herself, to submit their progress, and there she would take their separate class.

A whole week got wasted in the same way, but the seniors like Piyali, Arjun, Nandini, and Sam, could do nothing, except cursing her in their mind.

Today, there was a meeting to check the progress, of both the team. Almost whole Animo and BS team is present there. And there too Radhika is insulting BS and its irresponsible team in every possible way... Finally, losing her cool Nandini stood and shouted on Radhika, "You can't insult us and our team in such way. It's totally against the business ethics.. I see, you never learnt that Radhika..."

The Animo team immediately scoffed at the comment. It's about the respect of their MD. Although strict, but they respect her a lot.

Whereas Radhika just said calmly, "MAM..."

"WHAT?!?!" Nandini got totally flabbergasted at this response. Here she's insulting her and she refered her as MAM??!?!

Well her illusion got cleared soon..

Ra: "Call me MAM or Radhika Mam..", she said calmly.

All were stunned at the statement. She's asking Nandini, who's so much elder than her to refer her as Mam.. Whereas Nandini's just watching her blankly not getting what to reply. But she can't let her, destroy her rules, so she immediately retorts, "Mam, is it?!?! But you should know, I'm much more higher than you're Radhika..."

At this Rads turned towards her with a raised eye brow, and an evil smirk on her face. "Higher?!?! In which way?!?! Age and Experience!?!?" Her comment caused Nandini to squeeze her nose in annoyance.. Radhika is hell bent on dragging this matter to eternity. And others could just stare at the two, who were playing retort tennis with each other..

Radhika continued, "You may be higher than me in Age and Experience, but..", saying this she bend forward on the table, almost hovering over Nandini, " But, I'm much more higher in reputation and status than you're Miss. Nandini..."

Nandini never felt so much insulted. This girl is insulting her infront of the whole Animo and BS team. The people who were below her till yesterday are watching her getting insulted by a mere chit of a girl... Not able to watch her sis, getting ridiculed, Arjun spoke up, "Look you're crossing your line here Radhika.. You can't insult my sister in such way.."

Radhika rolled her eyes, and murmered, Here comes her bodyguard cum caretaker cum puppet.. Wondering, how come he was quite till now...'

She turned towards him, with an uninterested look on her face. She now wants to show him his place.. She isn't the same Rads to bear his nonsense with a hurting heart, and a smiling face..

Ra: "Do your sister always need a lawyer to speak for her Mr. Arjun?!?!", and as an instant reaction, he scoffed at the remark. "And did you forget what I just told, call me MAM, or Radhika Mam.. I isn't speaking to just your sister, you see.. It's for all of you.. I'm the seniormost authority here, and hence, you'll call me Mam.. Understood?!!?"

Then turning towards Nandini she spoke, "You're here..", pointing at the floor. "And I'm there..", she said now pointing at the sky..

This is heights of insult, and Nandini couldn't take it anymore. She angrily glares at Rads for the last time and just barges out of the conference room at once.. "Huh!!! Speaking of ethics to me.. Seems, she doesn't know the meaning of professionalism.. Heights of unprofessional behavior...", Radhika said shaking her head with disappointment..

The meeting got over, and everyone breathed a sigh of relief, while coming out of the conference room.. Arjun stood at the room for few more minutes, just looking and examining Radhika. She isn't the same girl, whom he once knew, who he once loved with all his heart and soul... But do the girl whom you loved ever existed in this world, his mind retorted..

With this he started to leave the room, when Rads called him.. There was none in the room except them..

Arjun stopped near the door, listening to her voice.. And Rads came and stood by him, and just flashed a bright smile at him..

Ra: "Hi Arjun.. How are u?!?!"

Arjun doesn't want to create a scene, and thus replied in a controlled manner, "I was very much fine, till you returned to destroy my peace again.. Any thing else?!?!"

Radhika's smile widens, and she said, "Gosh.. Never knew I still effect your life so much.. 6 years long love.. Haven't forgotten me still?!?!", she asked innocently..

Arjun turned his head towards her at once, and tightly holds her arms, and bring her closer to himself.. "What do you want huh?!!? Rubbing salts on my wounds.. Enjoying my pain..", he said through gritted teeth, and with each words his grip on her arms just tightened..

If it would have been the old Rads, her eyes would've turned misty, and she'ld have pleaded him to let go off her. But she isn't. She's now a self made woman, with determination, to bear no nonsense unnecessarily.

She just holds his arms tightly, in return, and spoke in a husky voice, "Does it pain?!?! Your wounds still didn't dried up?!?! Why?!?! Didn't your dear Nandu helped you in recovering?!!? Or Is she too much busy in enjoying her completion of revenge that she never noticed you wounds?!?! Tut tut tu... So sad..", saying this she pierced her nails in his arms, mercilessly. At first, it didn't affected his well build body, but then when its ferocity got increased, he winced and left her at once..

He checked his arms, which is now bleeding due to her wildness. Radhika's arms have red marks on them, but she didn't cared to notice. Seeing blood on his arms, she smirked and said, "Uh-oh.. It seems like you got a new wound to be reminded of me.. But sad you need to get an injection, for it.. Do take it, otherwise your wife.. Oooppss ex-wife, will file a case on me for attempted murder on you, through poison..."

Arjun looked at her irritatingly.. Just when he's about to leave, she intervened. "By the way how are your kids?!?! At home with their mothers?!?!!?"

Arjun makes a confused face and asked, "What kids?!?! Whose kids?!?! Whose mothers?!?! I didn't get you..."

Radhika made a surprised face, and said, "Kids Arjun... Your kids.. And mothers of your kids.."

Arjun just angrily said, "I don't have any kid, and there are no mother to my child.."

Radhika in a surprised tone said, "Is it?!?! I thought at the rate, at which you were changing your girlfriends, and having sex with them day and night, you would definitely have your own IPL team to present after few years... Surprised to hear that you've none.. If not cricket team, then I definitely did expect a Kabaddi team.."

Arjun is just got so irritated that he snapped at her immediately, "I don't need, or say want any kid in my life.. Got it?!?!"

Radhika looked at him for few seconds blankly, and then smirked and said, "Hope for a day, when your kid would be infront of you and you couldn't call it as yours.. It would be fun to watch your desperation, and your plight then..." saying this she went off the room, leaving a thoroughly confused and angered Arjun behind...

After sometime, in Radhika's cabin...

Ra: "I'm absolutely fine jaan... Or say I'm quite enjoying the show.." She's talking to her dear hubby, at the phone.. And is continuously trying to convince him that she's fine here, and he need not come here.. But he's adamant saying, he wants to be with her at every moment.. At last she uses her final weapon, "If you'll come here, then who'll take care of HER.. You know no one can handle her except you.. She'll create a ruckus over there.."

"Hmmm...", he sighed in surrender, knowing she's right. She can't survive without him and he won't without her..

"What are you planning next?!?! Who's the next one, Sam?!?!", he asked from the other side..

"Nop, she already got a dosage. Let her recover first, then I'll attack her again.. My targets won't be continuous.. I'll give them a dose and watch them stuggling to recover, and then the next, and the same again.. They'll get so much involved into their own lives, that they'll never be able to help the other one... One by one I'll shot the target, and give them time to overcome it, and as soon as they would succeed in doing so... I'll break them again... Oh the fun..", she said almost dreaming herself doing all this.

A huge sigh left him, and he knew she's reliving those moments of pain, the torment, the insult, accusation, betrayal, distrust, disgust, and finally the numbness.. He knew the result would be violent for her, and since he isn't there, he need to calm her down.. There's only way to calm her down and its his LOVE.

"Radhika ... Jaan...", he called out to her, with all his love.. And Rads felt like having a ray of light in the darkness, and she grabbed it, and came back to reality.. Still she remained quite.. She needs his soothing touch, and his murmurings of sweet nothing in her ears.. She's craving for him.. Badly..

"I love you jaan.. I love you... I love you with all my heart and soul.. I'll love you till the last breathe of my life.. I'll stay by your side for each and every moments we spend on this earth, or the Heaven or Hell. I won't survive without you by my side.. Nor the heaven will give me the peace.. I love you.."

Radhika's heart melt at his words. How could this man have so much love in him, for every person present in his life..

"I love you too Mr.Hubby..", she said almost in a trance.

Getting that, he's successful in calming her down he flashed his ever so charming smile. And then seriously asked, "Who's next?!?!"

Radhika took a deep breathe and said, "MISHRA family..."

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PRECAP:

Ooopsss Radhika in Mishra House.. Hold on to your seats Mishra members, Rads is preparing to drop Hiroshima Nagasaki bomb at your home... BOOOMMM...

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Hehe, guys, how is it?!?! Ok honestly tell me, that I didn't mixed up the Radhika of the show, with my new creation.. Coz the Rads there is strong too.. This is the first time, I'm characterizing a character in a new persona, and I want it to be a completely new and hatke one for u...

And another question... What do you want to happen with Nandini?!?! Saral and Sam were the main culprit along with Nandu, therefore their punishment should be grand, otherwise there wouldn't be proper justice. I've already thought of the worst for Sam and Saral, but about Nandini I couldn't decide.. Pls pass your suggestions to me guys. I'll try to think as well...

Hope you all liked it... Waiting for ur response...

BUDDY ME FOR PMS..

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Posted: 10 years ago
When are you going to update dear ? Waiting for it
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Omg this is just woww ⭐️👏 My tigress radhika 👏 Omg she is giving hard time to every1 specially to Mr.Mehra 😆 she turned lil wild. i liked it 😎 if i m not mistaken does radz have child frm arjun 😲 by her talks on kids felt it 😕 I loved this radz .. she is perfect after whtever happened with her😃 Saral & Sam deserves daily torture by Radz & nandini might jail i can't wait for Mr.Raichand's entry in BS. pls update soon.. this update was bang on 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Enigmatic-

Omg this is just woww ⭐️👏 My tigress radhika 👏 Omg she is giving hard time to every1 specially to Mr.Mehra 😆 she turned lil wild. i liked it 😎 if i m not mistaken does radz have child frm arjun 😲 by her talks on kids felt it 😕 I loved this radz .. she is perfect after whtever happened with her😃 Saral & Sam deserves daily torture by Radz & nandini might jail i can't wait for Mr.Raichand's entry in BS. pls update soon.. this update was bang on 👏 👏 👏


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Yay yay.. So glad you liked it.. I had a doubt if you all gonna like this one.. Coz nothing much has happened in it, but reading ur response, i'm somewhat relieved.. Thanks yaar.. And about Mr.Raichand, he's gonna make a bang on entry..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow i am loving my cute little devil Radhu 😉
Mr.Raichand already won my heart ❤️
I like the way he is trying to cool down her 😳
I am totally love in with Mr.Raichand 😊
I loved how Radhu answered Arjun back 😃
I love how she treated Nandhu 😃
For Nandhini punishment should be worse because she is also main culprit 😡
You writing in amazing way 👏
Loving it ❤️

Edited by Asheley - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm not new to If. I recently started watching DYM and started browsing dym forum.and I must say that ur SS is the best one that I had ever read in the forum...perfect.loved and loving it very much. Different concept and I love the new avatar of RADHIKA. Read all 7 chaps to gether...and super fast updates are I like the most.looking forward to the 8th chap. Sure it also will match my expectations..
Sry for the long comment.😳😉
Edited by niki2 - 10 years ago

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