MMZ ss: UNTOLD LESSONS chap 13 on pg 47.. (09/10)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyya guys...
This idea has evaded my thoughts from few days... And i can't help but share this with you...

Honestly i'm ArDhika shipper.. But like Radhika more...
This SS is the one where you will come across a brand new Radhika...

The ss will be a continuation of the current story line... But in a completely different way..

Also there is a someone opposite Radhika.. But guess what?!?! Its not Neil, or Arjun and nor Saral...
A complete new face for the New persona of Radhika..
I will continue only if i get ur support...
So tell me if u want me to write the story..
If i get sufficient yes as answer then i'll post the prologue today itself.


Waiting guys

INDEX:
prologue: page 2
chapter 1 updated on page 3
chapter 2 on page 5
chapter 3a&3b on page 8
chapter 4a & 4b on page 10
chapter 5 on page 12
chapter 6 on page 16
chapter 7 on page 19
chapter 8 on page 24
chapter 9 on page 30
chapter 10 on page 34
chapter 11 on page 39
chapter 12 on page 43
chapter 13 on page 47
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Do continue! Would love to see a different Radhika. And please Pm me whenever you update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please continue. Would like to read about different radhika pm me when u update😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vishruti.siri

Please continue. Would like to read about different radhika pm me when u update😊😊


Thank u..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am also think about it.that Rahul Gandotra my favourite everest hero come in the scene.but he is not the guy of Radhika.
Tommorrow will start a new story.Sam will call Radz to go out of Birdsonf.radz ii hurt and leave the job.then he 'Ll find a jb.nd met his new bs rahul.continue with nxt replies
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It is a great idea Divya😊
Please continue😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Radz mke frndship with rhul and ago 2day of mrg arj ans sam 'ii meet radz and rahul meet the moonson by sharing icecream and sam said kici arko patana suru kar dia.rhul confuse and ask sam no mam u are misunderstanding se is my frnd only bt rahul will find in arjun eyes arj loves radz but radz cont
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

<font size="4">It is a great idea Divya😊</font>

<font size="4">Please continue😃</font>


Will do..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue:

Everyone are happily having breakfast on the dining table of Khanna house...

Neil: Oye Samundar singh. Jam paas krna.

Sam: Tujhe kitni baar kaha h... Mujhe Samaira Mehra bulaya kar.. Tu samajhta kyun ni..

Piyali thinks,'Ye sab kuch uss Radhika ki galti h. Meri beti k is halat ki zimmedar wahi h. Main tumhe kavi maaf ni krungi Radhika.'

At another part of city... After his night with another girl, Arjun is furiously punching the bag...

He mutters, I hate u Radhika Mishra.. Main tumhe kavi maaf nhi karunga.. Ab main apne zindagi main bhut age bar chuka hu..

At Mishra house...

Ankush: Maa aaj kheer bani h n?!?!

Mala: Kyun?!!

Ankush: Maa aaj choti ka b'day h... Aap bhul gyi?!?

Mala: Kitni baar kaha h, uska naam is ghar me koi ni lega.. Mar chuki h wo hamare liye...

At another part of world...

A girl standing by her window says to herself, 'Jitni zindagi jeeni h jeelo... Par wo stars h n, wo tmpar nazar rakh rhe h.. Ye shanti nhi... Toofan se pehle ka sannata h...'

Tell me if you like it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome prologue Divya😳

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