||Crossroads - ArDhika & NeSam FF|| - Chapter 1 @ Page 4 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it Megha, finally I read it. I really liked how u describes the situations, Arjun's thoughts & really liked SaRa's interactions. And when u described Neil's pain, I could actually imagined the situation aid Shravan's face. 😊
Waiting 4 the next part, keep it up dear, it's really good! 😉👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
thats was great, cant wait for the next chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Fantastic update. It's good that sam questioned bonnie. poor neil feeling sad for him.waiting for next chapter.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
lovely...
Megha,

Why did you want to co-write this with me when you have already written such beautiful start??😃

I loved this chapter...little insight into Bonnie's thought about Arjun was well done. CVs missed an opportunity there, by removing her from the equation for now.

And questioning Bonnie by Sam was great!

Loved how you gave insight into all of them, except Radhika. Looking forward her thoughts on Arjun.

Please send a PM if possible when you write next chapters...

Love
MD
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Pls continue this soon Megha/
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Amazing prologue and chapter Megha😃
PM me for the next chapter😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow
fabulous upt
loved it
cont soon plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Awesome start and interesting too.
I will be following this fic. Sent u a buddy's request. Plz accept and pm me the future updates.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Awesome prologue and 1st chap :) cont soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb prologue!! The prologue is so meaningful!! 😃😃 Love you for this new ArDhika and NeSam FF Megha 🤗 Just love your way of writing..cant wait to read more please continue sooon.. I am yet to read the first chapter! I bookmarked the thread.. will read and comment in details!! And do PM me everytime you update this!! 😃

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