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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Awesome Part.😊
The Romance Part was so Nicely explained.😊
The Whole Part was so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Unres @ pg 47 πŸ˜‰ Bare my comment πŸ˜†
Tume Humari deal yaad haina in next update.. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† you going to write na akka? 😊
Edited by Komali14 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww😳
First part of update:
Darr dia apne... inna krb mausm... do haseen ladika... susaan jagh...
Or tree b gir gya... or darne ko...😭
But ap bach gye that's really nice...πŸ˜†

Second part:

Aahaaa hmre di n Bhaiya to bht romanick hai...πŸ˜›
Bss mauka milna chahiye... happy moments ki line lga de...πŸ˜‰


Pr ye gang k kch log... gndi njre rkhte hai... 😑 acha kia jo hockey se maara... or maarti nani dadi Mummy papa sb yaad aajte... gaadha...πŸ˜ƒ

Overall nice update di...
Love u❀️ n hug uπŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res πŸ˜ƒ
UnresπŸ˜›
Hey didu..πŸ€—
Wow..fantastic update yaar..πŸ‘
Loved it..totally loved it⭐️
Ohh snowstrom..thamk god bro ne bacha liya aap logo ko...pheww..
Aap k saamne bro helpless ho jaate hai..yeh aap ki gang join karne ki aur snowstrom may drive karne ki baat ko le k gussa to bahot hue hoge par aap se pyaar itna karte hai k woh kuch kar bhi ni saktey..hehe..pyaar may theek se gussa bhi ni utaar saktey..hehe..my poor bro 🀒 πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Us ghade ki himmat kaise Hui aap ko Chu ne ki 😑

Haaye...yeh chup chup k wala aap dono ka romance mujhe bahot pasand hai..😳
Kiss scene was beautiful πŸ˜ƒ
Hehe ..Alex..samajh ni aa raha us ki haalat pe rou ya hansu...snake..ghost..🀣 hahahaha..meri hussi hi ni ruk rahi thi read karte wakt
Hehehe..mauli 🀣
Urrggg...us T J bacche ko to bahoshi ki haalat may pahaad se phenk dena chahiye..ullu kahi ka..😑

Strawberry pie wala romance..hehe..nice πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
aage kya hoga...kaise hoga..?hehe..i'm very excited..jaldi se update continue karo ji..πŸ˜›
N jaani ...kya banner banaya hai yaar..yeh banner dekh k yaha pe mere bhai k piche aur macchar I mean macchariya na par jaaye...aap mortin ready rakhiyo mrs.kumar..hehe πŸ˜†
Thanks for t update jaani
Loveee youuu..mwuaah..mwuaah..hehe πŸ˜†
Edited by Ajju15s - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry for the late comments
Little bit busy
But will read all update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Unres on page 48...
I think di.. It is longest one... πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
This one is for my family... πŸ€—..❀️
Bhaiyyas and Didusss... πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

... And I am lucky to have this bold and beautiful family... ❀️
LUBBB UHHH ALLL... πŸ˜ŠπŸ€—β€οΈ
Edited by shivi808 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
maine suna mere comment ka intezaar canada ki police tak kar rahi hain...but i m too much occupied nowadays...so sorry...



update was too beautiful...i wanted to write more but can't...keep writing...and always keep smiling...kyonkiii?????

love u a lot...bitty
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey Adaa akka.. πŸ€—
I want to welcome them with you akka.. 😊
Welcome to Rahul ji, Amit ji, Kunal, Sameer n Rahil.. πŸ€—
Wowww yaar mind blowing, full package update.. Boley toh rapchik tha.. πŸ‘
I just loved it.. One of the best updates ever akka.. Love you for this mwaaah!! πŸ˜ƒ
Tu moonwa ko dekhne main busy thi aur yeh donkey fellow escape hogaya uske legs bhi tie karni chahiye tha..
I knew it jiju ll stop him hero joh my jiju humesha correct time pe entry maarte hai like police you see.. πŸ˜ƒ
He escaped from sherni aur Sher ke paas fass Gaya saala.. πŸ˜†You know everything happens for a reason na, Usse uske badtaamizi keliye rewards toh mila hii nai tha toh acchey se mil Gaya Woh with interest..πŸ˜† Buy one get one free ke tarah jiju ke saath saath police ji se bhi pita mujhe bahut mazaa aaya ji.. πŸ˜†
Mauli akka is sweet na.. Sab bak deti hai at once na.. Nonstop train ke tarahπŸ˜† oops! You very sweet akka.. πŸ˜ƒ
Police ji said sorry for language he used ... So sweet ..😳
N both brothers made him apologize u how sweet.. Akka u said "This is what happens when you mess around with Indian girls"
Well said akka.. πŸ‘Ek punch dedeti lage haath saaley ko.. 😑
Shitty guy ki dhulai dekhke mazaa aagaya.. After acchi si dhulai kuch masti huwi.. πŸ˜†
Jaaha police ji hai waha pe masti toh banta haina.. He's so full of life yaar.. πŸ˜ƒ
I loved your cute little fight n badla yaar just like kindergarten kids.. πŸ˜† go to kindergarten you both.. Go to zoo also πŸ˜†
Tum toh snow white lag rahi ho bubbles.. Jiju bhi kuch kam nai hai he pull your legs n tease you equally.. πŸ˜† I loved it when you said do something na n he said sabke saamne.. Hayee main sharma gayi.. 😳
Police ji ka bum freeze hogaya.. Poor babu..
Bakri πŸ˜† tu bakri banke leafs khati hai.. πŸ˜†
When police ji left even I started to miss him with u re..

Hayee I loved attic scene very much.. Mwaaah!! Kiya chumma diya tumne jiju ko.. 😳
Akka Ek chumma Tu mujhko udhar dede.. πŸ˜†
mere jiju expert hai chumma dene main kiyu akka .. " Itna sharmaogi toh I'll kiss you whole night" 😳main mar jaawa kiya style hai mere jiju ka.. 😳
Gang leader is like old movie villian kisiko nai pata where he lives n how he looks..πŸ˜† Abh Tu 20 gangsters ke saath rahegi n no alone time n no romance.. Tu jiju se mil bhi nai paa rahi ho how sad re..
Police ji is snoring n you recorded it, good job akka..πŸ˜†
His one liner are very funny n I love it..
Tumne kaha I'm a ullu πŸ˜† akka Tu ullu bhi hai, bechare mere jiju has fallen for ullu.. Tum dono bahut sweet ho yaar I just love your cat dog fight very much.. πŸ˜ƒ
First day in the kitchen n you sleeping godhey bhej ke.. I know jiju ko dekh rahi thi haina sapne mein Issiliye you are not done with sleeping or romance in ur dreams.. πŸ˜‰
Tum dono ko cooking nai aati hai n you both show up in the kitchen yeh toh wayse baath huwi na bina study kiye you appeared for exam.. πŸ˜† Onions chop karte huwe ansoo aagaye tujhe jayse exam paper ko dekhke n you said I can't do this toh aagaye mere jiju apne mehbooba ke paas.. He helped you in copying I mean slicing onions how sweet yaar..
Akka jiju aaj bhi tumey help karte hai to slice onions ya fir lomance in the kitchen, πŸ˜‰dekho tomato hogayi Mrs Adaa Kumar.. πŸ˜†
Boss's mom lady Don wayse hii hogi like Lady Don in the movies moti hogi like bhens.. Dekho akka started crying uska naam suntey hii..
Mauli akka ke ex boyfriend bhi hai.. 😲
Alex se friendship hogayi tumari , he said you beautiful n he could paint your eyes main samjh gayi ki bandhe ke andar painter chupa huwa hai.. 😊
"Behind every beautiful thing there's some kind of pain " awww akka hugs tight one πŸ€—
Moti bhens ko dekhke sabko heartsttack aagaya.. πŸ€”She warned u, uske bete ki Aysi ki taysi my jiju ll remove his eyes out if he lays his shitty eye on my akka.. 😑
Awww she said fairytale Princess to you , tum Sacchi main Princess ho yaar mwaaah!! 😳
It's November 6th my favorite day on the calendar.. πŸ˜ƒ because it's yours n police jis birthday.. 😊πŸ₯³
But you didn't get any wishes from jiju, your parents n police ji..n he didn't receive your call hongey apne kaam mein busy forgetting that it's his birthday n urs.. πŸ˜”
Awww you hugged jiju's shirt n cried birthday ke din rohte nai hai ek intelligent man told me.. πŸ˜†
You are all alone in bhooth bangla.. Akka Tu bhi na security guard pe gussa nikal diya go die suckers.. πŸ˜†
Awww jiju ne surprise diya.. He brought cake for you how sweet n he wished you sabse pahlay.. πŸ˜ƒ
This was like long distance birthday celebration together through video call..πŸ˜ƒ So sweet yaar.. Police ji celebrated with both mommas.. Sab happy chappy hogaye n you started smiling finally..
Oh my God itni lambi list of wishes shaadi honeymoon wish kiya lage haath n yeh dekho police ji ko laga Tu baythe baythe soh gayee.. 🀣
Both buddies celebrated their birthday n wished each other..πŸ₯³ Police ji never leave chance to tease you.. πŸ˜†
Awww jiju ne itni mahnat ki to surprise you with cake n gift , how sweet yaar.. 😭You one blessed girl to have him n of course my jiju is lucky to have you.. Tumne Joh kaha for jiju made me emotion..I love you endlessly aww akka ruladiya tumne yaar.. Tum dono sabse cute n sweet couple ho yaar mwaaah!! Love you both very much.. Jiju kissed you how sweet n mauli akka ne break laga diya beech main.. Yeh tum dono ka honeymoon suit nai hai , zara jaaga aur maahol dekhke..
Alex gifted u painting how sweet yaar must be very good painter na.. Tumara expression se pata Chalta hai.. πŸ˜ƒ
You gave his return gift by assuring him that he'll be with his family in few days..
Dono lovebirds chale to spend some good time..

Akele akele kaha jaa rahe ho hume saath lelo jaaha jaa rahe ho πŸ˜‰

Jiju ne earrings gift kiya beautiful.. Aur pahnaya how sweet..😳 Kitna beautiful n sweet moment hai yaar.. U were busy moving ur head but jiju toh tume dekhke romantic hogaye.. Hayee behind tent wala scene was so romantic.. ☺️
Main toh kho si gayi.. You both reminded me of aashiqui.. My fav scene aur aap dono ne bhi wahi kiya Hayeee I was just lost.. No words to express it.. ❀️
Besharami ka hadh paar karna hai.. Main sharma gayi re.. 😳
All of me loves all of you.. I love this song.. Mujhey kuch yaad aagaya.. 😳
Akka jiju ne kiya kaha I feel like...? Batao na I want to know..πŸ˜‰ Tum bhi mere Kaan main batao I'll keep it secret pakka.. πŸ˜‰


Flashback was awesome yaar my favorite part in whole update.. πŸ˜ƒ
Awww gudiya was excited to meet jiju aur momma ne kaam dediya.. Akka tumara room was fish market I thought you were vegetarian before.. Fish market main rahti thi.. πŸ˜†
Sandhya is wants to fall in love how sweet.. She's sweet n loving na.. πŸ˜ƒ
Momma is so sweet yaar..πŸ€— You kissed her n she wiped it just like chotu.. πŸ˜†
Jiju ka style I love it when he tucks his hands in his denim pocket.. 😳
Tumne jiju ko mana kardiya to go with him n my sweetheart jiju was after you to help u finish your work how sweet of him yaar..😳
Finally momma maan gayi sweet.. πŸ˜ƒ

Momma papa were rehearsing for dance competition.. Wow yaar dono ko tap dance karte dekhke mazaa aaya hoga na.. They are so adorable..
Majnu.. πŸ˜†Papa bhi na he's so sweet yaar.. Bechare jiju yaar assignment karna hai.. Papa know jiju ko kis cheez main interest hai.. Naughty jiju ke naughty papa.. πŸ˜†
Go do your assignment or wash my car.. 🀣Ayyo I laugh so much while reading jijus n papas convo yaar they are like friends more than father n son.. πŸ˜ƒ
Bouquet scene was so funny.. πŸ˜†
Papa ko kitna pareshan kiya jiju ne.. Papa said main tumare saamne kuch bhi kahne ki himmat kar sakta hun Kiya? πŸ˜†He's so sweet yaar..
Momma kitne cutey fight karne ki try maarti hai yaar.. Dono ka roothna manana kitna pyaara hai.. Their fight is so sweet n cute n full of pyaar.. I love it when Momma says Rajeev ke papa.. It sounds so cute.. She called papa babu n papa scooped her up.. 😳
Now I know why jiju is sooo romantic like father like son..πŸ˜ƒ Romance n badmaashi runs in the family.. πŸ˜†
I love you Rajeev ke papa, I love you meri baccho ki maa.. Aww So sweet yaar... I love you both cutest couple.. β€οΈπŸ€—
Awww jiju ne sabko rula diya.. 😭I love those beautiful lines he said to papa.. " The best thing you did for me was to love my mom.. Your my greatest gift from God.." ❀️
Six month anniversary keliye jiju planned so much so sweet of him..πŸ˜ƒ Papa thought you how to make masala tea.. πŸ˜ƒ
Sacch hai yaar there is so much love in Kumar family.. πŸ˜ƒ
Papa ne tumse maafi maangi..
He's such a sweetheart.. I always smile n laugh when I read about papa n momma n I'm in love with them all over again.. πŸ€—

Awww akka you said papas memories ll always bloom in the garden of your heart forever how sweet yaar..
Bedroom scene was such a Cutie one.. 😳 Jiju was watching u sleep.. Dono kitne pyaare ho.. Made for each other..😳 Main Pura din aap dono ko ayse cutely romance karte dekh sakti hun..

Akka main khush huwi after reading this update yaar.. πŸ˜ƒ Dil chuliya yaar.. It was like superhit movie.. The way you write is outstanding hats off akka..πŸ‘ You make your readers feel what you write n imagine n enjoy your update.. πŸ˜ƒβ­οΈ
I love you so much.. I love you all my sweet family.. ❀️
Big teddy hugs to all of you.. πŸ€— Mwaaah!!
Akka Abh I can't wait for long please next update jaldi doh I know there is some more beautiful moments in next one..πŸ˜ƒ Please please continue soon..
Thank you akka for writing this master piece story of yours.. Bold n beautiful.. Read n fall in love.. ❀️
I laab you chotu ki mummum.. β€οΈπŸ€—
Edited by Komali14 - 8 years ago

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