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COMMENT FOR CHAPTER 23

what an update di 👏
Full of romance,action and some cute bestie wali nok jhoks... 😃
Ab ismein to koi doraai Ni h di that u two love birds are very romantic but pta h kbhi kbhi I feel like kaash ye lamhey khatm na hotey...
Your kiss and bedroom romance was like haayeee!!! Koi to rok lo... 😉

But I seriously don't like ye dooriyaan...
U were not able to contact bhaiyya for days...not fair yaar...

Bdw my action Jackson di was back Vo bhi full form Mein..
Ron bhaiyya ne ek Dum sahi suggestion Diya tha..
Most of the time aisey idea bdey kaam aatey hain...👍🏼

Aur uskey baad bhaiyya and aapki nok jhok 😆
Ek baat bolun aapka and Ron bhaiyya ka rishta na bohot hi pyara and sweet Sa hai..
Humesha aap sab aisey hi hastey aur khilkhilatey rehna sath Mein... 😳

U decided to join the gang and bhai KO btaya bhi Ni..
Bhaiyya bhi ro padey na... U guys made me cry dubara se... 😭
Vsey I know he is always with you jsey Ki he promised...
Toh tension Ni lene ka.. Brave bankey problem se Dhishoom krney ka..
Problem ko ek marney ka zor se.. 😃

Okay toh I am eagerly waiting for next part...
Update Kr do di jldi se...
Aur kya baat hai... Zra dekho toh aaj mainey ye lambey lambey comment post krey hain...
Purey mahiney Ki kasar nikaal di mainey... 😆

Isi k saath I wanna say that I love my family very much and is ek mahiney Mein sabhi ko bohot zyada wala miss kiya hai...
Aa jao plz sabhi log jhappi paa lo yaar... 🤗🤗
Mwwwaaahhh!!!!! 😳 😳

Originally posted by: Rohan30

Tere dar pe aake tham gaye
Naina namaazi bann gaye
Ek dooje mein yun dhal ke
Aashiqana aayat ban gaye Main aur Tum

Kaisi dil lagaai kar gaye
Rooh ki rubaai bann gaye
Khaali khaali dono thhe jo
Thoda sa dono bhar gaye Main aur Tum

Chalo ji aaj saaf saaf kehta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai
Yunhi nahi main tumpe jaan deta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai

Missing you Nikita! !

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Sanju my Jaan! Mwaaah! And tight wala hugs to you for posting this chapter 😃
Kumar family! I love you guys so so much! 😃
You All are sugary sweet 😳
Sach mein R brothers jaysa koi bhi nai. 😳 (speaking from my experience)
Rajeev jiju,kiya romance karte ho Yaar,Tum dono romance karte ho aur bura haal Mera hota hai ji 😆
Snowstorm wala scene scary tha,but you survived once again 😃
Rajeev jiju ka gussa scene was so cute,usey gussa karna nai aata 😆
Tum dono bilkul school kids ho,ek dusrey ko kitna tickle karte ho Yaar 😆
Pata hai main Tum Dono ke jagah par apne aap ko aur apne unko imagine karne lagti Hun 😳
Gadha TJ is caught! Good job,now he'll spend the rest of his life behind bars
Mauli madam,hats off to you! Kiya describe kiya jiju ko Yaar,I totally agree with you,he's one handsome hunk 😳 every girls desire mr Rajeev kumar 😳
Aww..strawberry pie scene 😳 yummy yummy scene tha sanju 😉
I'm gonna read that over n over again woh bhi akele mein maza lekar 😆
Missed Rohan in this chapter very much. Hope we get to see him in next chapter. 😃
Alex scene was funny 😆 I want to read more about him n how he reunited with his family,felt really bad for that guy. I'm excited next chapter is on the way. Yay!!!
By the way banner dekh ke main flat hogayee ji 😆
It's damn hot n spicy 😳
And Mauli,you are one naughty girl I tell ya 😆 saali aadhi Ghar waali 😆
Aur tang karo dono ko I'm loving it 😆
Love you guys,mwaaah! Rohan k I'm missing you dost.. 😭

Gudiya my baby sis 😃 🤗
Banner par maaro Mann atka 😆
Prathi said it right,hot and spicy 😃
Romance ke King and Queen ho Tum dono yaar 😃 mwaaah!
The blizzard/snowstorm scene was written so perfectly Yaar 👏
Superb writting skills there 👍🏼
Ayyo you were lost and buried in the snow? Fir mera hero I mean tumara hero Rajeev ne Tume bacha liya ..aww he sat by you holding your hand while u were unconscious 😃
He's very loving and caring...mwaaah!
He's gussa was cute,kitne pyaar Se mana liya Tumne with your tickle technique 😆
Tum dono ke kissing scene na...my God! 😳 read karte main sharma jaati Hun ..aur kaha bayth gayee thi tu? 😆
Alex scene was funny 😆
I know you'll save him sanju,but how? That I wanna read.
Mauli tu toh kamaal hai 😆 kiya describe kiya Rajeev ko,I just loved it. 😳
I think there are more qualities in him which only Gudiya knows 😉
Finally hooligan TJ is in custody,well done Jhansi ki rani 👏
Strawberry pie ..hmm yum! Yummy tha na Rajeev? 😆
Love you both and the things you do together 😃
Missed officer Rohan so much in the chapter 😭
Please bring him back in next chapter Gudiya,we love him very much 😳
Please continue soon,I see next chapter is on the way,waiting eagerly
Love you kumar family!!!

Main aagayee! 😆
Banner dekh ke maaro Mann dola 😆 seriously di it's hot stuff 😳
Jiju,Di,Ron ji and my ethu,I miss you guys so much 😭
How will I spend three weeks without you guys? It's painful re 😭
Hope to see yous soon,mwaaah to all 😃
Coming to the update,it was 👍🏼
Winter storm scene was kinda scary,but it was very well written di 👏
Thank Goodness! Jiju saved you warna aapka kiya hota? 😕
Baar baar ayse risk kiyu leti ho Di? Naughty Di!
Jiju undressed you and sat by you holding your hand 😉 oye hoye!
He's loving,kind and very very sweeet! Mwaaah! 😳
I love you Rajeev Jiju!!!!! 😳
Dono bhaiyon ko gussa karna nai aata par jab karte hai toh Baap re! Toofan aajata hai right Di?
Di,I love it when Jiju pins your hands or cages you In between his arms 😃
I love your romance,I really do. Main apna romance imagine karne lagti Hun 😉
Mujhey attics Bahut pasand hai,ours are not spooky
Alex is one funny chap,I know he will listen to you and bhaagega waha se 😆
Mauli Akka,aap Jiju ko check kar rahi thi? 😆
I know he's one hot guy but stop drooling on him ok? 😆
Haww you said murgah to Jiju,toh fir sanju Di murghi huwi right? 😆
Accha hai murgah murghi ki prem kahani...bhaago!!!ayyo koi bachao mujhey! Sanju Di my sona Di I love you very much,Mujhey iss batameezi ke liye maaf kardoge na? (Puppy face)
TJ ki toh Aysi ki taysi! How dare he touch you like that? Main hoti toh koot deti usey 🤢
Langoor Kahi ka! Abh jaayga behind bars for good!
Jiju,strawberry pie ka swaad aur badh gaya hoga nai? 😆 kiya romance karte ho Yaar main toh bass woh...aagey samajh jaao ji 😆
Keep fighting sanju Di till you reach your destination.
Love you all,mwaaah!
Ron ji I missed you a lot,waiting for you to enter in the next chapter 😳
I'm excited for the upcoming chapter,can't wait [:D/]
Thanks Di for updating,I know you have put your effort n energy in this so thank you dil se 🤗

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Haaye raam... Finally mujhe hosh aa gya...
Yes di.. Don't get shocked.. Vo kya hai na.. Mainey chapter ka banner dekh liya tha.. 😲
Aur aaj jakey hosh aaya h mujhey..

Bhaiyyyaaa!!!!! 😲
Kya Abs Hain... 👍🏼

Haan toh.. I missed Rohan bhaiyya so much in this chapter didu.. 😔
Next tum pakka likhney ka unkey baarey Mein.. Ok di.. Ittu Sa hi sahi..

Di.. The car ride was terrific... I was so scared only by reading it..
I don't know how u faced that...

Oh!!! Thank you so much God... Finally Bhaiyya saved u.. 😳
Hero bhaiyya. ⭐️
Aur bhayi humari di to bhaiyya ka naam suntey hi laal tamaatar... 😳
Red to bhaiyya bhi they but the redness was in his eyes as gussa... 😕
But he was concerned for you na... 😳

Omg!! Di.. 15 members aur baaki bhi hain.. How will you live with such shitty people??
Specially that bloody TJ.. 😡

But bhaiyya is with u na toh tension Ni Lene ka..
Smartness k saath do ur work.. Mission as well as Lomance 😆

Aww.. Aap dono attic Mein romance farma rahey they.. 😳
Kittney cutie couple Ho aap dono.. Nikki di sahi kehti hain..
Aap na cutest Tota Maiyna jodi Ho. 🤗...❤️

Alex scene was damn funny di..🤣
He thought that you were a ghost... And aapka haath snake😆
but di.. I feel very bad for him.. 😔
Aap jldi se usey uski family se Mila Dena... 😳

Mauli di...hey bhagwan.. The way she described Bhaiyya was PERFECT
of course he has every great quality in him.. 👍🏼
And ye kya... I love that Saali Aadhi gharwali line of her's... 🤣
Unhoney bhaiyya KO zabardasti daba k hug kiya.. 😆

Aur ye dinner table pey kya Ho raha tha.. 😉
Badmaashiyaan...😳

Bhaiyya ka dessert after dinner was damn cute and sweetie scene... 😳
I love you so much my World's Best, Bold and Beautiful Couple

I am gonna kill that f***ing.. TJ.. 😡
Thank you Mauli didu.. For saving my lovely didu..
But u guys should have beaten him taabad tod.. 😡
Great... U my didu log Ney sahi kiya usey baandh k.. 👏

Ron bhaiyya ne aapkey liye special shoes bheje..
Aww... That was so caring and sweet gesture.. 😳
Unko bhi pta h Ki Aapka kuch Pta Ni Chalta.. tabhi to special shoes bheja.. 😆
Good Job bhaiyya 👏
Golu loves u so much wala...🤗...❤️

Yeyy... Girls succeeded to bring that shitty man outside the villa..
GIRLS POWER..

didu... I am waiting for next update desperately..
Please update jaisey hi u got time..😊

I love you all Very wala much my Bold family.. 😳
Hugggsss... 🤗.. ❤️...
Mwwwaaahhh!!!!!! 😳 😳