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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Wow!! Beautiful, those are! Loved them, especially the second one!! You must continue writing shayaris! I'll be waiting for them!

Edited by Radhikerani - 10 years ago

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MannMeRamBasale

@DamRyeong

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Wow!! Beautiful, those are! Loved them, especially the second one!! You must continue writing shayaris! I'll be waiting for them!

thank u so much Pro.. glad u liked those..

second one is my fvt too..

thanks a lot for ur comments..😳😳

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MannMeRamBasale

@DamRyeong

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

^ thank you Aishu.. (=

@Pro.. thx pal..saw ur edited post.. (=

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MannMeRamBasale

@DamRyeong

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Rasika9
oye hoye akki tu too chupi rustom nikli...
kya shayari likhi hain...loved itt...

thanks a bunch yaara.. glad u liked those.. *hugs*

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MannMeRamBasale

@DamRyeong

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sanjinimala
Akki ji the shaayri was beautiful 👏
Thanks for writing the words and their meaning,it helped me to understand a lot ⭐️
Bahut khoobsurat tha please do continue ⭐️
*love*
Sanju 😃

thank u so much Sanju..

i'm so glad to see ur comments..

yeah! i thought that will be usefull (=

thanks a lot for appreciating my work..

love

-Akki

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Shivangi

@shivi808

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

😲 😲 []Haila!! kya likha hai..
👏 👏
Its just Superr se Uparrr.. ⭐️
Bohot pyara likha hai di..
Aur di.. dnt gve me any credit to motivate u vrna main to khushi mein balloon ki tarah foolkar fatt jaungi.. 😆
Literally it was amazing..
luv uhh!! 😳

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MannMeRamBasale

@DamRyeong

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: jollygrl
😲 😲 []Haila!! kya likha hai..
👏 👏
Its just Superr se Uparrr.. ⭐️
Bohot pyara likha hai di..
thank u so much dear.. was waiting for ur comments..
i'm so glad u liked it..

Aur di.. dnt gve me any credit to motivate u vrna main to khushi mein balloon ki tarah foolkar fatt jaungi.. 😆

haha...calories coming in my comments...🤣

Literally it was amazing..
luv uhh!! 😳

thx a lot..😳.

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MannMeRamBasale

@DamRyeong

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

thx buddy..<3

glad u liked those..

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MannMeRamBasale

@DamRyeong

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

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heyy guys.. here are two more shayaris from my side..

not exactly shayari actually.. but a few lines.

1) yaad hai..?

wo jo darakhton pe likhe the kabhi naam humne..

2) zamane ka khauf nahi hai mujhe..

gar, tum hi hans diye mere ikraar-e-mohabbat par...?!

darakht: Tree

guys, i'll not be sending PMs for updates in this thread.. may be with FF/SS updates PM, i can send one.. so please follow-up with the title if any update is mentioned..

please hit the like button and leave ur comments/suggestions

thanks..

love..

-Akki

Edited by itsokaysammy - 10 years ago