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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Sanju4Rajeev

Shivi darling both chapters were fabulous 👏
Loved it 😃
Riu bacchey ne papa ko pen gift kiya,very sweet 😃
Arey ye kiya doll ko follow kartay kartay she lost her way! 😕
Don't worry princess riu,stay away from strangers,your papa
will soon find you 😃
New entry? Kaun hai bhai? 😉
Overall,it was a five star update ⭐️
Very well written shivi darling 👏
Continue soon,
Love and hugs
Sanju


Thanks di... 😳
Will try to continue soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

<font color="#660099"><font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Shivi darling ye bhi toh cutie cutie update tha😊😊😊

Riu ne toh apne papa ko pen gift kardiya. Muwaah to her & also to Raghu😉😉😉

Riu toh ziddi hain Antu ki tarah apne papa ke saath jaaneki zidd karrahi hain😆😆 Raghu mere liye Strawberry ice cream lana please😉😉😉

Aww she wants to see her papa😃😃😃 Toh uska bhi intezaam karliya Raghu ne😃



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Strawberry " ice cream haan!!! 😛
Ok, mil jayega di...😆
Love your comment 😃
Thank you to allowed Ni h na????
Edited by jollygrl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Rasika9

It's just a guess work yaar...


guess!!!! Okay let us see k KON AAYA 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
CHAPTER 4

____'s POV😉

My friends were about to leave when I told them to wait as I have to use washroom.
I was done & was on the way when I heard some sobbing sounds. I turned to see from where it was coming. Then I saw a little girl of about 4-5 years sitting on the stairs & was crying.😭. She had her face buried in her tiny palms. She had brown coloured hair which were left open. It seemed like that she was lost. I went to her and asked her softly

What happened????

She quickly looked at me and then I saw her actually.
She has pink coloured cheeks, a small nose on her face looked shoo.. Cuteiii.. Then I noticed her eyes, they were deep black, coal coloured. Such a cute little fairy she was. She asked me

Who are you?????

Well I am ANTARA...& u????

(Rasika di... Aapka andazaa.. Boley to ekdum Sahi 😆👍🏼)

She became little bit angry and scared at the same time yet she replied with confidence.

Why??? Why would I tell you my name??
I don't know you & we 're not friends even.
My papa says-' Ajnabee se baat Ni krna chahiye...


and then she turned her face away from me. I smiled but continued

Ohh... Ye to problem Ho gyi. Kya karein ab???
Haan!!! Kyun na hum friends ban jaayein... Hnn??


I extended my hand in front of her. She looked at my hand and then towards me. She narrowed her eyes as if she was checking me out wether it is safe or not to be with me. At first she hesitate but then shook hands with me and accepted my friendship with a smile on her face.

So... Now will you tell me what's your name doll???

It's RIA...

RIA... I got lost in her beautiful name for a second. But my trance was broken by her sobbing sounds

Pa..paa... 😭

So I was right. She was lost in the mall. I asked her very politely

Kya Hua h?? Aap ro kyun rahe Ho???

She looked at me with her teary eyes and said

I have. Lost my papa.. Don't know where he has gone??

She replied with pure innocence. Poor girl, she didn't know that she was lost not her father. I didn't know what spell her teary eyes created on me that I wanted to help her. I hugged her. She continued to say

Aunty please call my papa... I am missing him
Mujhe papa k pass Jana hai..


I wiped her tears and asked her how her father looked like exactly. That time a biggest grin😃 appeared on her lips. I scooped her up in my arms. She begin to describe her dad

Mere papa...
Vo to bohot achchey hain
Mujhse bohot Sara pyaar krtey hain..


hmm... Aurr...

She didn't even let me to complete my words.

Arey haan baba main bhi unsey dher saraa love krti Hu...
I AM HIS WORLD, aisa papa kehtey hain
Aur aur Vo na bohot BEAUTIFUL hain... 😳


BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! 😆😆

I bursted into laughter as I heard her saying that.

Acha!! Aapke papa beautiful hain??? 😆

Hmmm... Bohot.. Pata Ni kahan hongey
Hawww!!!! Kahin Vo ro na rahe Ho. He is very possessive when it comes to me. And he loves me so much na...


Her eyes Again caught the sadness. She was very happy when she was telling me about her dad. Seriously both of them are lucky to have each other in their life. I decided to help her. Then my eyes noticed a chocolate shop. I asked her for chocolate but she denied by saying that she wanted her father only.

We will find your papa but eat something
Otherwise when your papa ask me if you had something or not
And you would reply by saying NO then he will scold me
To kya aapko acha lagega???


She nodded her head in no. She placed her tiny palms on my cheeks and said

Okay chalo... But don't be sad

I smiled and then tickled in her belly. She was laughing. God!!! She was the cutest girl I have ever seen.


Raghu's POV

While searching her I went to the second floor of mall. I was pacing here and there when my ears caught some giggling sounds. I immediately turned because I know it was Riu. But what I saw along with that was enough to freeze me on the spot where I was standing. There was a girl with whom she was laughing. That girl was wearing a deep blue coloured top with a white jeans. Her hair were left open. Her big brown hazels were so Deep that anyone can fall for her. The smile on her face was very pleasing. What a lovely girl she was. I was unable to hear their conversation from that distance but could see her pout.
How cute she looked when she did that 😳

She tickled in het belly and they giggled. A tear escaped from the corner of my eye. A word came out of my mouth with a sigh

ANTU...

But then my mind started to work. The very first thought that hit my brain was

What is she doing here??? Now how will I face her??
God!!! Why are you so much mad on me...
Kya bigaada hai Maine aapka??


While thinking all this I was also admiring her beauty and her smile. She moved towards a chocolate shop. I shoved away all thoughts when I heard Riu's voice

Papaa... 😃

Yaa... She noticed me and now I have to face that girl also
I noticed that she was startled to see me. I turned my face away from her immediately.




Precap: You have moved on in your life very well..
As if you don't..



Soye to Ni... 🤢
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
As usual a very cute update!!...
Riu darling and antu met...aww...
there conversation was just so cute...❤️
aftr raghu and riu bond i am defo gonna fall for riu and antu too...😃
and most heartfelt moment of the update when raghu finally noticed antara with ria...
how shocked he felt at the moment...so happy 😃and as well as so sad too..
they must have a painful past...
interested to read more and more cont asap..😳
Edited by ifians - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
mind blowing update
Edited by rima4ever - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
First of all love u for mentioning my name...rantara ke mamle main apna guess work bahut chalta hain...itna sweetly riu ko kaun pooch sakta hai..antara ke alava...
Superb update thaa...especially jab riu apne papa ke baarein main bata rahi thi...raghu u r reaally very beautiful... I love u...
I m just waiting ke do bichde kinare kab milenge...when rhey will come out of their dark past...uske liye update soon...
Edited by Rasika9 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: rima4ever

mind blowing update


Thank u so much
I like your signature very much
😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: ifians

As usual a very cute update!!...
Riu darling and antu met...aww...
there conversation was just so cute...❤️
aftr raghu and riu bond i am defo gonna fall for riu and antu too...😃
and most heartfelt moment of the update when raghu finally noticed antara with ria...
how shocked he felt at the moment...so happy 😃and as well as so sad too..
they must have a painful past...
interested to read more and more cont asap..😳


As usual BEAUTIFUL comment di...😆
Very happy di... 😃
apun KO Ni pta tha k ye Raghu and Riu ka bonding aap logon ko pasand aayega...
Somewhere when I decided to write this story tou mujhe yahi doubt tha k ye bonding main show kar paungi ya Ni...
But now I am thoda relieved 😊
Edited by jollygrl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: jollygrl


Strawberry " ice cream haan!!! 😛
Ok, mil jayega di...😆
Love your comment 😃
Thank you to allowed Ni h na????

Na!! Thnks allowed nahi hain par strawberry ice cream allowed hain😆😆😆

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