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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: jollygrl



Really very sorry di...
Jitnaa likha tha sab delete Ho gya galti se..
But kal pakka... 😭


No problem golu molu,merey saath aksar aysa hii hota hai 😕 take your time shivi darling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
CHAPTER - 5[/centre]


ANTARA'S POV

(light green coloured lines are Antara's thoughts)

When I was having chocolates with Ria, I felt a deep piercing gaze on myself. It made me to feel uncomfortable. I looked around to find that person. No one was there. Suddenly Ria jumped from my lap and ran in the direction opposite to which I was standing. She was shouting Papaa...
I felt relieved & turned to have a look of her dearest father. But seemed like fate had something else stored for me. As I turned, I got the biggest shock of my life. My eyes widened to find him in front of me. He looked at me for a second & then turned his face away from me instantly. Obviously how could he face me after what he did to me years back. Still other thoughts were also striking my mind

He got married??
How could he?? Ria is his daughter...
Uski wife kahan hai??


While thinking all this a smirk appeared on my face & I thought

So what Ms. Antara Kaul..
Why are you bothering??
It was JUST another lie told by him..
JUST one more promise broken by him..
It's good that he forget you... Isn't it??


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RAGHU'S POV

Riu came to me and I scooped her up in my arms. I kissed her cheeks & forehead. Only I know how much happy I was that time. I forgot the world around me. I thanked the god infinite times for bringing my princess back to me & that too safely. Now I won't let her go away from me ever. Antara was staring me continuously. Obviously with some...

Nooo... Actually with more hatred.

Papaa.. Why are you crying??

Riu brought me back to the reality by saying that.my angel noticed my tearful eyes. She wiped my tears with her tiny hands and gestured me not to cry. I just passed a smile to her & said

Hmm... I won't but first promise me that you will never do this to me in future.
You don't have an idea how much I got scared. And haan I am also sorry bcz mujhe bhi tumhe aisey chodkey Ni Jana chahiye tha.


No.. Don't be sorry. Bcz I got a new friend.

I raised a brow and askedFriend!!! And may I know who is that friend????

Antara Aunty...

So as expected she became her friend. She was explaining about Antara Aunty...
Ooopss... For me Antara only. 😉
But my mind was wandering somewhere else.

Come on!!! Papa meet her. She is so nice

I poorly nodded to what she said. She went towards her and I followed her like an obedient papa..
She was about to leave when Riu asked her to stop.

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ANTARA'S POV

I saw that he was kissing his daughter madly. His eyes were showing his deep concern for Ria. As if she was his only treasure. I saw that tears were streaming down on his cheeks. I don't know why but it hurted me. Wait Wait... Ria made him smile again. She started her blabbers. I came out of my train of thoughts.and decided to leave when I heard Ria shouting and running towards me. I didn't care and leaving. She shouted
Stop Aunty... Meet my papa
But I didn't turn until a husky voice hit my ears.
Excuse me
It was him. My heart skipped thousands of beats. I closed my eyes to compose myself to face him. I gathered some courage & turned. I forced a weak smile and said
Yesss...

Amm... I am her father. Thank you so much for saving my daughter.
And taking care of her.


I looked into his eyes and tried to find something there but he...
He was avoiding eye contact every then and now.

Mention not...
She is such a cutie ... You are lucky to have her in your life

I somehow said that to him. Only I know how much difficult it was for me to suppress my emotions. I thought why was he behaving like that we were strangers. Then I thought maybe he forgot me in these years. But his next set of words shook me completely

Itne saalon Mein kafi Badal gyi Ho..

He remembered me.

So!!! What's the big deal
Even I knew him


But this meeting was quite awkward.

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Edited by jollygrl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
RAGHU'S POV

She replied to me in a very cold manner as if she didn't know me. I noticed that she was trying to look into my eyes while talking but I was avoiding dat coz I know what she was trying to search in them. Actually she might be thinking that I forgot her in such a long period of time. I chuckled in my heart and gave her a Comment/Compliment (whatever you guys think)😉...

Itne saalon Mein kaafi Badal gayi Ho...

That's it. It worked. Her expressions were worth watching. She felt a shock in her system as she wasn't expecting that from me. She replied..

As if you don't change yourself Mr Raghu Naik...

Her voice was calm but hard.

Well, I was forced to change for the sake of my daughter's life, bu...

...and I was forced to change for the sake of my life

She instantly replied without letting me to complete my sentence with a angry voice. A lone tear escaped from the corner of her eyes which was noticed by me. She immediately wiped off that. I felt a deep pain in my heart I just can't bear her tears. Ria said to her

Aunty you know what today is my papa's birthday

She knows Riu.. She knows that very well I said in my heart. She wished me and I only smiled in return. She bid good bye to Ria and was about to go when she turned & said sarcastically

YOU HAVE MOVED ON IN YOUR LIFE VERY WELL MR. RAGHU NAIK

And she went away... AGAIN. I was numb for a moment. Her words pinched me to the innermost core of my heart. Riu shook my hand.

Papa I am hungry

I forgot about Antara and passed a smile to Riu. Ten minutes later we were heading towards our home with her favourite dinner. It was 9pm when me and Riu came to our bed. I told her a story so that she slept. Soon she felt asleep. I kissed her forehead and covered her well with a duvet. Then I came back to my room.


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Precap: Go Girl!!! You can do it... It's so simple yaar.


Okkkaayyss!!! Finally done with another crap chapter of my stupid story. Please for god sake comment krna as I wrote this second portion of chapter while suffering from 102 degree fever. Aur next update may be you will get after PATA NAHI kitney months. As I will be busy in my tests kind of stuffs. Tab tak is kahani par ek chota Sa ALPVIRAAM.. 😉 😆
Edited by jollygrl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
Shivu...tu pehle apna khayal rakh...bahut jyaada shani mat ban samjhi na...
Btw bahut cute update tha...emotional bhi...
Take care n prepare well for u exams...
All the very best level of luck...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95

Ye kab unress hoga??? 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Bacha pahele mujhe yee batao ki 102 degree ki fever mein uodate karne ki kya zarurat thi?! Arey baba we all can wait to read your story... samjhey?! pahele apna khayal rakho... aur fir se aisa kiya naa too main raghu pappa se complain kar doongi..😆

And now come to the chapter... as usual so sweet and emotional... loved rantara's confrantation and convo yaar... you wonderfully wrote up the scene.. both were avoiding each other.. pretending to be careless but deep inside there heart they still have feelings...

so ria nee raghu koo ek aur b'day gift de di... ussey uss ki antara se mila diya...😃

love u bacha.. aur haan apna khayal rakha karo,... thik time pe medicine loo.. aur healthy khana khao... aap ki fever jald thik ho jayega.,..😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Golu molu this isn't a stupid story 😕
This story is beautiful,sweet and cute because there's a little girl in it
And I love kids,as you know they are my life! 😃
Anyway coming to the update,it was five star update ⭐️
Feelings,emotions,everything was in this chapter 😃
Very beautiful! Love it very much 👏
And take care of yourself darling,fever was that high and you wrote a chapter? Shivi darling never do that again. Updates are not important,you are! Dhyaan rakhna ji
A big round of applause and standing ovation for this update 👏
All the best for your exams,I know u did well in the previous ones and you will do it once again
Lots of love and hugs,
Sanju
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Very nice update dear..
loved it..
Riu kiski beti hai..kya hai rantara ka past..aur kaisey durr hogi dono k bich ki misunderstandings..yeh dekhna aagey interesting hoga.
Tnx for pm..
Tumhari tabiyat kharab hai na..to rest karna..update baad may detey rehna..
Get well soon..😃N all the best for yr exams..😃
🤗 take care dear
Edited by Ajju15s - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: jollygrl



Di I really wanna know that aap itna sundar wala comment kaisey likhtey Ho..
Mele shey to hota ich Ni...
Bs colouring sholouring Kr leti Hu theek thaak..

Love u too di...
Comment is very SUNDAR, Boley to FEAUTIBUL... 😆

Solly!!! I mean BEAUTIFUL 😳
And yeah LOVE YOU TOO... 😳 😳

Sundar wala comment kaise likti hoon ye toh secret hain😉😉😉 Love u darling🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hum aagaye behna aapki update ki comment karne. Cutie cutie update🤗

Antu itna galat sochrahi hain Raghu ke baarein main? What had he done to her ki vo itna nafrat karti hain Raghu se?😲😲😲 Kuch bhi ho par jab usne Raghu ko Riu ke saath kush dekha toh even she smiled😊😊😊

Riu toh Riu hain vo kiski baat sunti hain😆😆😆 Do log jo ek doosre se bhaag rahe hain unhe ek saath laaya. Aur ye dono na chahkar bhi ek doosre se baat karne lage hain

Some misunderstanding is there between these two par kya?😲😲

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