BICHDE THE KINAARE MILGAYE

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello Yedi's I am here to present you a story. No no not mine. It is written by our Shivi darling. I am just posting it on her behalf. Guys Please read the story and comment. Thank u. - Nethra


Chapter 1

Raghu's POV

As I entered the room, I saw my cute little angel sleeping on the bed peacefully. I went up to her, brushed her silky hairs, kissed her forehead and whispered Good Morning ANGEL.. She frowned a bit and then feebly opened her eyes while rubbing them with the knuckles of her finger. As she found me standing near her, a beautiful smile crept on her lips. She got up from her bed, put her tiny arms around my neck and replied - Good Morning Papaa... She is RIA NAIK.. My Daughter, actually my everything. She is of 4 yrs and in JR. KG. She looks too innocent but only I know how mischievous she is. Only I know the intentions which are hidden behind her cutest smile. Too clever yet so lovable. "My Little fairy". I call her RIU. I have always tried not to let her feel the absence of her mother. Yeah Only I am raising her. Once she questioned me about her mom but the way I explained her made her understand that I am both for her. Her mom as well as dad. Yet she sometimes miss her mumma but then both of us would go to ice cream parlor. Then she would again become happy princess of mine.

Now I know that you all are eager to know about me.. Well!! How can I praise my self(wink) So Here is my Intro.. RAGHAV NAIK just for media and my staff. For my family and friends I am RAGHU.. (there is a secret behind me changing my name) So Raghav Naik, the Owner of one of the 7 star Hotel in London and a Special Restaurant is in the line. Right now working on that project. My day starts with my daughter's kiss and ends with doing masti with her. I can do anything for her one smile. I have been living in London from past 4 years. My Best Friend ADITYA, who is owning his Own Construction Company is working on My Dream Project of Special Resturant.

(Coming back to Present) My angel finally woke up. I scooped her up in my arms and planted a soft kiss on her rosy pink cheeks. I said - Come on Riu have shower, then we have to go na? And she replied with her cute innocence- Okiee Chalo Chalo.. After shower I helped her to get dressed for her school. I made her school bag ready and asked her to have her breakfast.

First chapter done.. tell me if u want me to continue - Shivi

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res ji..
Janeman..kya koi new ss make kar rahe hai..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RANTARA.akya

Res ji..
Janeman..kya koi new ss make kar rahe hai..

Thoda wait kar phir pata chal jaayega. Aur chal Do dil thread par waha baatein karenge yaha nahi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Thoda wait kar phir pata chal jaayega. Aur chal Do dil thread par waha baatein karenge yaha nahi


OK ji..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start shivi...keep writing... keep smiling...
Edited by Rasika9 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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finally it is here..😃 😃
Love u soo.. mch Nethra di for helping me and 4 posting my story here.. 😳 😳
muaaahhh!!! 😳 😳
Edited by jollygrl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for the story Shivi darling. 👏👏👏

I liked the concept very much. Great start. Riu darling ko tune Raghu ki beti banaadi🤣

Aww Raghu I love u yaar. Tu gunda ho ya businessmen mujhe toh koi farak hi nahi padta
Edited by Nethravathi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hmm shivi darling. The concept looks really different. I will enjoy reading this story i know cause i have a thing for such heart touching story and different concepts..😃... As for the first chapter.. Its awsome!!👏... we got a small glimps of raghu and his character..😛 waiting for surther to explore...😳... keep PMing me... cause i may not be regular commenter before june. due to my exam but after my exam i will run back to read this story...
But ek baat batao... Mujhe raghu ki beti bana diya tumne?!!😆 aur woo bhi KG class wali?🤣

PS: And HUGS to my Lady gaga for posting this...🤗
Edited by ifians - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hmm shivi darling. The concept looks really different. I will enjoy reading this story i know cause i have a thing for such heart touching story and different concepts..😃... As for the first chapter.. Its awsome!!👏
Thank u so mch
Rahi bat apke name ki to mje lag ra tha k ap ye zarur bologe 😆
dnt wry di i'l surely PM u.. 😳 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jollygrl


Thank u so mch
Rahi bat apke name ki to mje lag ra tha k ap ye zarur bologe 😆
dnt wry di i'l surely PM u.. 😳 😳


Ek baat bataoo kya tumne yee intentionally naam diya raghu ki beti kaa?😆

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