BICHDE THE KINAARE MILGAYE - Page 7

Originally posted by: jollygrl

Hww...
Di half update kal aayegi... 😛

Kinna pyara update hain bacha...... i so loved it...❤️
Riu nee apne raghu pappa koo pen gift ki... Shivi u know main bhi bachpan mein apne sare friends koo Pen hi gift karti thi...😆
aww i just loved raghu and ria's bonding... so cute they are...😳
this update was like a little sweet cad berry eclairs...
Cont soon..😛

CHAPTER - 3

PART II

Ria was sitting on the bench quietly and watching her father. But then her eyes fell on something. She noticed a doll in the trolley of toys. It was a beautiful doll of pink colour. She wanted to buy that so she looked for her father but he wasn't visible to her because of the crowd. Also she didn't want to lose the doll. She stood up from there and started following the man who was taking the trolley to somewhere. For few minutes she was following him but suddenly he disappeared. She rushed to find him but he wasn't seen.
That was the moment when she realised dat she was at some unknown place in the mall. She couldn't find out where she was. She gave a look to the mall. It was a huge building for her where she had LOST.

Raghu's POV

After 15 minutes, I somehow managed to get her fav dish and now I only wanted to reach her. I directly went towards the bench without looking anywhere.

Here it is...

But I was startled as she wasn't there.


Riuu...

I called her and sighed coz I know that playing hide and seek is her favourite game. And tab to aur bhi zyada when it comes to me. I again called her but no rply came from her side. I got slightly worried about that. I shouted her name few more times still she didn't give me a reply. I threw the stuffs there & shouted on the top of my lungs..

RIAAA...

(lines in red colour are the thoughts of Raghu)

God!!!Where has she gone??? Kahin Nahi dikh rahi..I ran to the children's area hoping that I might find her there but to my bad luck she wasn't there also. I searched each & every place in the mall while running here and there. People were watching me with confusion but I gave a damn about them & their thoughts. I just want my angel back to me. With each and every passing second my restlessness was increasing as I wasn't able to find her. I fell down on the bench with a thud. A fear of loosing her flickered in my eyes.

Where should I search for her now. How could she do that. Har jagah dekh liya par...
What if I lost her??
What would I do without her?? 😭
After she left me, RIU is my life & now she also...

NO...
I CAN'T...
God can't be that much rude to me.

KUCH BHI HO JAYE...
I'll FIND HER OUT
I CAN'T LET HER GO LIKE THIS...

This gave me some strength & I stood up. I said to myself with determination

I'll find my princess...

Then only a thought struck my mind which shook me. She is very little to know the ways of such a big mall. What if she would get into some WRONG hands. I prayed to the god silently

Just keep her safe until I find her...

I again started to search for her by showing her pic to the public. I was continuously cursing myself for showing such a carelessness.

Please god!! Just give me my daughter back, I promise I won't let her go away from me ever. PLEASE...


On the other hand Ria didn't know where she was. That doll surely lead her in a wrong direction. She was not able to find her papa... Dearest papa. She went here and there but no one was there to help her. Tired of running she sat on nearby stairs & began to cry. Not dat loud but she was sobbing. She was just uttering--

Papa.. Where are you?? Papa please come na... Your Riu is scared



Precap :
Why would I tell you my name?? Who are you?? I don't know you. Stay away from me or I will call my papa...




So!!! Finally I am done with another crap part. Please let me know if u guys like it or not.

Just loved it...hehehe...new entry kaun hai yaar kahi meri antara tohh nahi hain...update asap...

Originally posted by: Rasika9

Just loved it...hehehe...new entry kaun hai yaar kahi meri antara tohh nahi hain...update asap...

Di how can you say that she is your Antara/?

Meri riu darling kho gayi...😭😭😭
don't worry riu... ur pappa is on the way to search for u...😃
just loved raghu's emotion and concern for his daughter he was so sad to lose his princess but soon gathered his strength to search for her...😳
now who is in precap... kahin lil riu khatre mein too nahin...🤢
cont asap.. wonderful update😳

Shivi darling both chapters were fabulous 👏
Loved it 😃
Riu bacchey ne papa ko pen gift kiya,very sweet 😃
Arey ye kiya doll ko follow kartay kartay she lost her way! 😕
Don't worry princess riu,stay away from strangers,your papa
will soon find you 😃
New entry? Kaun hai bhai? 😉
Overall,it was a five star update ⭐️
Very well written shivi darling 👏
Continue soon,
Love and hugs
Sanju