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@lohananivedita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ifians
Nivi please start it naa... it sounds so interesting...
waiting eagerly...😳

Riyu honey...

This chotu chappy is for you.

Sorry, if it's not upto mark.

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: lohananivedita

Sabar kar Suchi...😆

nhi ho rha hai..sabar..!!! 🤣

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Kaay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Congrats on the new story! Do continue soon!

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@lohananivedita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Rantara ff dark secrets

Running towards the horizon aimlessly, and in a split of seconds, he came to a halt. Standing in the middle of snow, his eyes were red and puffed due to continuous crying for her. Devastated totally, he has everything still his life is a waste.

Pov of Raghu.

Chali gayi...she left me...like everyone did...usne waada kiya tha ki na Apun ko chodegi na Apun ka saath...Tod diya usne, apna waada aur Apun ko bhi. I fell on my knees...broken, devastated, lifeless and totally shattered.

MISSCALLL

I screamed on the top of the voice.

Life has again cheated on me. Jis Se Apun sabse jyaada pyaar karta hai wahi Apun ko chod Chala jaata hai. Par Apun ko apni misscall par barosa hai...waada kiya tha usne, Woh Apun ko aise chod kar nahi jaa sakti hai...ek wahi toh hai joh iss gunde se pyaar karti hai...Agar bappa ne Apun se usse dur karne ki koshish ki toh Apun usse bhi ladne ko taiyaar hai...

Apun usse khud se kabhi alag nahi Hone dega, jise Apun apna kah sakta hai...she defined me...knowing me...what I'm...she accepted me and my imperfections whole heartily...her innocent eyes which are pure like water and reflected her innocent soul...those beautiful hazels, which looked at me with so much love and affection...Tears started brimming in my eyes remembering her sweet voice, her lively and bubbly nature, her salty fake anger, meri har baat par tomatar ban jaana...Naaraz hokar Woh pyaare se chehre banana...and every moment spend with her came infront of my eyes...

Sabhkuch...I muttered depressingly...apun ki jaan hai Woh...yedi. and a small sad smile came on my face.

And it faded away in a second making me realise that she's not with me, in my arms...where she belongs.

I again screamed, shouted...my eyes wandering around anticipated...just in a hope to get her look...

The temperature around decreased giving me goosebumps, I tried to stand and run in search of her but I again fell on the ground hard. And every thing was getting blur..my eyes were getting heavy . I felt dizziness Comming over my head. I tried my best to keep conscious but I couldn't...and the black darkness surrounded me like a blanket.

Edited by lohananivedita - 10 years ago

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BabyHimavari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

holy crowl...😲

for just a second the old memories flooded me... i felt like i am watching ddej's promo over again...⭐️

sabkuch... meri zindagi hain woo... hayla mera fav promo...

this stoy is gonna rock... ⭐️⭐️

what a powerful promo it was... bang on dude... 👏

now please start it soon... can't wait further...

Edited by ifians - 10 years ago

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@honeybees22

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

what where how when why who?

this chapter was like huh

i was amazing

i love ur use of words

amazing

hope we get some flashback scenes in this

confused a bit right now

pls cont asap

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@lohananivedita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ifians
holy crowl...😲
for just a second the old memories flooded me... i felt like i am watching ddej's promo over again...⭐️
sabkuch... meri zindagi hain woo... hayla mera fav promo...
this stoy is gonna rock... ⭐️⭐️
what a powerful promo it was... bang on dude... 👏
now please start it soon... can't wait further...

Teri story se inspired hui hun riyuu,

Woh Waali..

Sajda tere pyaar mein...Tera ff,

I was reading it again a listening banjaara...

And I got the idea.

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@lohananivedita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: honeybees22
what where how when why who?
this chapter was like huh
i was amazing
i love ur use of words
amazing
hope we get some flashback scenes in this
confused a bit right now
pls cont asap

Thanks hina, I'm not sure about it...I noe I suck in writing.

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: lohananivedita

Teri story se inspired hui hun riyuu,
Woh Waali..
Sajda tere pyaar mein...Tera ff,
I was reading it again a listening banjaara...
And I got the idea.

aww really??!!😳...so glad to know that...