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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Slient reader n twitter frend also..! I'm vinni from india 😊 big fan of ur stories n crazy fan of rantara😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 4 updated. Enjoy and dont forget to hit the like button and comment. Thank you.

Antara couldn't sleep that whole night. Even though she got a new pair of eyes to see..she felt without raghu her life was still in pitch black darkness. Antara held the rose in her hand that Raghu gave her. It was dried but still safe in Antara's book. She caressed his hanky and his black leather wrist band. "Kaha chaley gaye tum Raghu? With tears rolling down her cheeks Antara laid down on her bed. Closing her eyes she remembered when she became friends with Raghu.

"Will you be my angel..Angel by my side?
Antara had stretched her hands towards Raghu..and he had taken her soft hands into his..accepting her friendship. Today her Angel..her Raghu wasn't with her. And that was the fact. She buried her head in the pillow as realization struck her.

Next morning machmach came to pick her up. He was scared for her. "What will happen after she reads the letter?" How will she react? Mm said in his heart. Soon they were driving towards Raghu's house. "Mm bhaiya..Raghu ka kuch patah chala? Antara asked on the way. "Nai. He replied. Antara's face fell. Soon they arrived at Raghu's place. "Aaj may paheli baar aapkey ghar aai hu..lekin aap nai ho..Antara said while climbing the steps. Mm opened the doors as Antara entered his house for the very first time. The house was beautiful but Antara wasn't paying attention to anything right now..she just needed to read the letter. "Documents aur letter uskey bedroom me hai..come with me. Mm said. Antara followed him to Raghu's bedroom. The documents and letter were on his bed. Leaving Antara in the bedroom mm left ..he came out and paced the hallway. .he was really worried for Antara. With a clumsy hand..Antara opened the letter.

RAGHU'S LETTER TO ANTARA. ..

CONGRATULATIONS MISS KAUL! YOU GOT A NEW PAIR OF EYES! I TOLD YOU THAT YOU WILL SEE ONE DAY AUR DEKHO TUM DEKHNEY BHI LAGI HO. I PROMISED YOU NA AUR DEKHO MAY NEY APNA WAADA PURA KIYA. I LOVE YOU AND I WANT YOU TO BE HAPPY IN LIFE. I WILL BE WITH YOU ALWAYS MISS KAUL. I CAN SEE YOUR GORGEOUS FACE WITH THE EYES OF MY HEART...MY HEART BEATS OUT OF PACE...YOUR SHINING BLUE EYES GAZING AT ME WHEN I WALK BY...MY KNEES START TO SHAKE AND MY HEART STARTS TO ACHE...MY HEART CRIES...I LOVE YOU MORE THAN ANYTHING. THE TIMES WE SPENT TOGETHER I DID NOT WANT IT TO END..THEN ONE DAY YOU ASKED ME..WILL YOU BE MY ANGEL. .ANGEL BY MY SIDE? I COULDN'T BELIEVE IT BUT I HAD NO DOUBT..I SAID YES AND TOOK YOUR HANDS..THERE WE SAT HAND IN HAND. ..I NEVER FELT SO HAPPY BEFORE..I STARTED LOVING YOU MORE AND MORE..THEN FINALLY ONE DAY I SAID TO YOU..I LOVE YOU MISS KAUL...TOGETHER WE WILL ALWAYS BE. ..LOVING YOU IS BEYOND WORDS...THOSE WERE THE SWEETEST WORDS THAT I EVER SAID...YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH YOU MEAN TO ME..AND FOREVER IN MY HEART YOU WILL ALWAYS STAY.I WANT YOU TO MOVE ON IN LIFE..FIND A MAN..GET MARRIED AND HAVE BEAUTIFUL KIDS..I HAVE LEFT YOU MY EVERY THING. .MY HOUSE..MY PROPERTIES AND MY BANK BALANCE. YOU HAVE NOTHING TO WORRY ABOUT. .YOR FUTURE IS SAFE AND SECURED.FROM TODAY ONWARDS YOU WILL LIVE IN MY HOUSE AND MM WILL STAND BY YOU EVERY STEP OF THE WAY. MUJHEY BHOOL JANA MISS KAUL..YOU HAVE TO FORGET ME IN ORDER TO MOVE ON...I'M GONE FOREVER..PLEASE FORGIVE ME FOR LEAVING YOU LIKE THIS AND WITHOUT SAYING GOOD BYE..I DIDN'T HAVE A CHOICE MISS KAUL. ..I DID THIS FOR YOUR HAPPINESS ALONE...SO BE HAPPY ALL THE TIME..BECAUSE WHEN YOU'LL BE HAPPY I'LL BE HAPPY. AND NO TEARS..IF YOU CRY I WILL KNOW. ..I LOVE YOU AND I ALWAYS WILL..FOREVER AND EVER.

AUR HAN MISS KAUL..TAKE CARE OF MY EYES!
-- TUMARA RAGHU.

Antara fell down on her knees and screamed. ."Raghu!!!" Broken and shattered. .she hugged the letter and cried her heart out. Her world seemed to be moving around her..her head was spinning. .she felt sick to her stomach. .the floor seemed to be moving away from under her feet. "Kiyu kiya aapney aysa?" Antara cried." You gave me your eyes! Antara's forehead touched the floor as she cried. "Kiyu Raghu? "Kiyu kiya aapney aysa? "Mujhey andherey se nikaal kar khud andherey me kho gay? Antara wept. "Kiyu ki woh tujhsey behat pyaar karta hai antara. Machmach said from the doorway. "May..may kaysey jiungi..may nai jee sakti unkey bina..may..may mar jaaungi..woh..woh mera sabkuch hai..my Angel. .he...he cant leave me! "Humara dil ka rishta hai..hum..hum DO DIL EK JAAN HAI! "Hum alag nai ho saktey..kabhi nai..even death cant do us apart! "Fir usney merey saath aysa kiyu kiya? "I need you raghu!" I want you raghu! "Please waapas aa jaao..aajao na please! Antara was shattered. Mm helped her up. "Sambhalo apney aap ko antara. .bhaai said not to cry na..if you cry he will cry too. Mm said. He wiped her tears. Antara hugged him and cried. Mm couldn't withhold his tears...it just flowed down. "May hu na.. I will do anything to keep you safe and happy. Mm said. Broken and devastated antara sat down on the bed and opened the documents. His entire properties were on Antara's name. Still sobbing Antara ran his hands on his bed..."may kaysey jiungi aap ke bina raghu...Antara wept. Her eyes caught the closet..she weakly walked up to the closet. Her heart pierced as she opened his closet. His clothes were hanging nicely on the hangers. She embraced his clothes and cried. His manly scent along with his cologne were still on them. She buried herself in them..she will forget everything but not his aroma..his essence. .his rugged saltiness. .his smell will always remain with her. Grabbing some of his shirt Antara came and sat on the bed. Mm felt sorry when he saw her tear stained cheeks. "Kitna toot chuki hai ye..bhaai ke bina kaysey jii paayegi ye? Mm thought. "Mm bhaiya..humey raghu ko dhoondna parega. Antara said. "Hum kaha dhoondengey ussey..patah nai woh India mey hai bhi ki nai. Mm said. "Woh India me hii hai..I know woh yahi kahi hai. Antara said. That day Antara moved in Raghu's house with the help of mm. Ruksana who was mm's fiance was coming to stay with Antara for sometime. That night Antara just stared at her eyes in the mirror. Her eyes were dark brown..she gently closed her eyelids and touched it with her fingertips. "I love you raghu! She whispered. "Mera wada hai raghu...I'll find you and bring you back. Antara said. Mm stayed over at Raghu's place because Antara was alone. She asked for Raghu's pictures but mm said Raghu burned his pictures and the clothes that he left behind were for donating. Antara was wide awake that night. She tossed and turned on his bed. She was waiting ki kab subha hojaaye. Finally the sun came up spreading its sunlight everywhere. Antara got up feebly..mm was already in the kitchen when Antara came to the kitchen. "Aaj breakfast may bana raha hu kalsey tum aur ruksana sambhaal Lena. Mm said. Antara noded. She felt empty and incomplete without raghu. Her eyes were filling every now and then but she was suppressing her tears. Later in the day ruksana arrived. Antara and her became friends very quickly. Antara and ruksana planned to visit every blind society in Mumbai each day. "Raghu is here somewhere but I will find out. Antara said boldly. From that day onwards Antara and ruksana started visiting every blind society in search of raghu. Ruksana was tired and exhausted but Antara kept on going. .she never gave up. One day they came to a building like jyoti niwas..Antara went inside and looked around. Suddenly that familiar scent reached her nostrils. Her eyes widened. Excitement was running in her veins. "He's here ruksana! "He's somewhere here! Antara followed the scent that was in the thin air. The essence took her to a beautiful garden outside the building. A concert was going on. The blind people were performing. Antara's eyes searched for him. "Ruksana you know his face na? "So please merey saath chalo to where the scent leads us. Ruksana noded. The girls searched everywhere. Ruksana went the other side while antara sticked to her route. Antara's eyes caught a guy with sunglasses playing violin with others. Antara ripped through the crowd and finally reached the guys back. Antara sniffed in the familiar perfume on him. Her heart was thuding hard and she knew that this guy in front of her was raghu! Antara slowly reached out and touched his shoulder. The guy stopped playing and turned.

Precap: Antara finds Raghu. He is without eyes. Will he find a donor for his eyes? Stay tuned to find out. Love you..mwaah!


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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: ayazzzpariii

Slient reader n twitter frend also..! I'm vinni from india😊big fan of ur stories n crazy fan of rantara😳😳


Haila how couldn't I know it was you vinni!!!!! Thanks for joining IF..I love you for this pumkin! You just brightened my day girl! 😃
A big warm welcome to you 🥳
And a big bear hug 🤗
Love you sweety pie ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

What! Raghu gave his eyes to Antara & left her leaving his property, money everything

No one knows where he is

Antara took Ruksana with her to a concert where blind people are performing

She found familiar fragrance around her & she recognized it as Raghu

Rantara meet in the next update. Can't wait Sanju. Muwaah

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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
really touchy story...really emotion...true love yasa bi hota hai...raghu ka letter its really emotional...its really feel cry..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
thanku for updateing dear waiting for next...
ayazzzpariiiii thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#67
wowww my jaan what a emotional update😭 muje laga hi tha ki raghu kuch esa hi krega!! how sweetly u define jst fab yr👏👏#outstanding !!
Love U my Sweetipieee😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
omggg sooo emotional yaar
this was amazing
loved it sooo much
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
oh what a lovely update ...abh kya hoga ??? kya Raghu accept karega Antu ko ????
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
I guessed correct!..he gave his eyes..
heart wrenching update
update soon..
thanks

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