Pitch Black-A forbidden love story last part page 15 - Page 6

Originally posted by: ankusanu

sry for reviewing late
my apologies

Sorry mat bol yaar..but thanks for your lovely comments. Priyanka you are sweet girl who gives me feedbacks often like other friends here. So a big hug to you 🤗

Originally posted by: honeybees22

first of all i am sorry for not commenting as i wasnt online for ages

coming to the story

omg this story is amazing

eveything happened so quick

i know raghu gave her his eyes or maby m thinking too much lol

now antu is better and will find raghu

can we have some manofying scenes please???

pls cont asap

You disappeared on me again! Thank God you are finally back! Missed you girl! One word for you..GENIUS! I can add some manofying scenes. .no problem but tell me who will manofy who?

Originally posted by: sanjinimala

You disappeared on me again! Thank God you are finally back! Missed you girl! One word for you..GENIUS! I can add some manofying scenes. .no problem but tell me who will manofy who?

sowie

Originally posted by: sanjinimala

Sorry mat bol yaar..but thanks for your lovely comments. Priyanka you are sweet girl who gives me feedbacks often like other friends here. So a big hug to you 🤗

awww..hw sweet of u dear...
hugss 👏

Sanjini,

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

Sanjini,

another masterpiece is here..

Pitch black manages to make me cry and smile..

This story is heart-touching..

I have a feeling Raghu donated his eyes.. I will cry on and on if that happens..
Wonderful writing !!!

-Prerna

Thanks prerna! Rohna mat yaar muhjey aanso pasandh nai..I hate tears pushpa..hehe...love you girl!

yaar story continue karo...kitne acche se sab shuru huwa...😳...lekin ab yeh Raghu k gayab hone ki mystery...🤔...aur Antu ka thik hona...mujhe bhi feeling aa rahi hai...k Raghu donated his eyes to her...n apna sabkuch uske naam kardiya...properties etc etc...mujhe toh sochkar hi rona aa raha hai...😭...hum RaNtara ko ek saath dekna chahthe hai...i kno aap unhe juda nahin rakhoge...😳...

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

yaar story continue karo...kitne acche se sab shuru huwa...😳...lekin ab yeh Raghu k gayab hone ki mystery...🤔...aur Antu ka thik hona...mujhe bhi feeling aa rahi hai...k Raghu donated his eyes to her...n apna sabkuch uske naam kardiya...properties etc etc...mujhe toh sochkar hi rona aa raha hai...😭...hum RaNtara ko ek saath dekna chahthe hai...i kno aap unhe juda nahin rakhoge...😳...

Hayla mujhey script change karna parega! Hehe just kidding. Dont shed your precious tears yaar. Rantara is forever.

I'm wordless!! Sanju such a marvelous, excellent, superab story👏👏 i'm big fan of ur writing skill my #writerqueen 😃😃 "wowww" 😳

Originally posted by: ayazzzpariii

I'm wordless!! Sanju such a marvelous, excellent, superab story👏👏i'm big fan of ur writing skill my #writerqueen😃😃"wowww"😳

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