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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tonight Canada time..Saturday around midday india time.
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Originally posted by: sanjinimala


Tonight Canada time..Saturday around midday india time.

but i live in the UK #Britishbaby times as well please
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

but i live in the UK #Britishbaby times as well please


Oops! Uk time ka patah nai..sowie..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 5 updated. Read and comment please. Thank you! 😉

Before Antara could see his face..someone patted on her shoulder. She turned around to see. 'Sorry madam you cant come here..the people here are performing you cant disturb them. The manager of the group said. Antara was about to say something when Ruksana came running to her. "Arey Antara you are here..I was looking for you everywhere! Ruksana was almost out of breath. As soon as the name"Antara" hit the guys ears he disappeared in the crowd. "I think Raghu milgaya hai mujhey! Antara said while turning towards the guy but too bad the guy was gone! He was nowhere in sight! Antara's face fell. "Ye kaha chala gaya?"abhi toh yahi thaa! Antara said while looking here and there. "Please ladies you guyz have to leave. The manager said. "Sir please I need to talk to you about someone. .Antara said to the manager. "Theek hai you wait for me in the office. .i'll be right there. The manager said. Antara took a deep breath and headed towards the office with ruksana. As soon as they came inside Antara felt Raghu's presence around her. His essence. .was in the air once again. "Ruksana. ..he's here!" I can feel him! "His cologne ruksana! "I can never forget! Antara said with so much hope to find him. "Chal..we'll look for him! Ruksana said while taking Antara's hand running towards the elevator. As they approached the elevator. .Ruksana's eyes widened! "Antara thats him! "He's getting in the elevator! Ruksana said while pointing towards the guyz that were getting in the elevator. "Unn dono me se Raghu kaun hai Ruksana? Asked Antara. "The one with blue shirt. Ruksana replied. "Antara saw his back and screamed. "Raghu!!!! No luck again! The guys were already in the elevator and the door closed. "Ruksana. .we'll wait and see on which floor the elevator stops. Antara said. They kept their eyes rooted to the reading above the elevator. The elevator stopped on the sixth floor. Pushing the button they waited for the elevator to come down. "Please God help us..please! Antara prayed. "Ruksana..kuch bhi hojaaye i'll find Raghu. .Antara said with tears in her eyes. Ruksana squeezed her shoulder in assurance. "Definitely you'll find him..because he's here. .I just saw him. Ruksana said. The elevator opened as the girls entered inside. Antara's nervousness was increasing as the elevator went up towards sixth floor. They got off on the sixth floor. "Itney saarey room me se Raghu ka room kaun sa hoga? Antara thought. "Ruksana. .how will we find out ki uska room kaunsa hoga? Antara asked. "Manager se baath kartey hai. Ruksana said. The girl's came down and enquired. "We have no Raghunath Naik here. The manager said. "But we saw him! Ruksana said. "If you saw him then go find him! Manager said. The girl's again came up on sixth floor. "Ruksana. .I know Raghu has changed his name so that no one can recognize him. Antara said.

In the room 601. Raghu laid down on his bed. His caretaker handed him the buzzer. "If you need me just press the button I'll be here at your service. The caretaker said. Raghu noded as the caretaker left. Raghu quickly sat up on the bed. "Miss kaul aur Ruksana yaha? "That means they are looking for me! Raghu said. "Shayad ruksana mujhey dekh bhi chuki hai. Raghu thought. "I have to stay away from them. Raghu said. Raghu's caretaker was heading towards the elevator when Ruksana grabbed his neck from behind! "Abey ye Johnny walker! "Bol raghu kidhar hai? Ruksana Asked. The guys eyes widened. "K..k..kaun Raghu? " May kisi Raghu ko nai jaanta! The guys said while panicking. "K..k..karkey shahrukh banna bandh kar aur batah woh joh ladka terey saath thaa woh kidhar hai? Ruksana asked while tightening her grip. "Accha woh!" Uska naam RN hai Raghu nai. The guy said. "So he changed his name? "I was right! Antara said. "Puppet ki tarah muh mat khol..room number batah! Ruksana said. "601..mera gala..The guy winced in pain. Ruksana released him. Antara was already at room 601. Her heart raced as she turned the knob. Her tears rolled down when she saw him sitting on the bed with his pitch black glasses..he looked handsome. Antara thought. This was the first time Antara saw him. "Jis tarah mayney tumey kalpana kiya thaa tum bilkul waysey hii ho..the man of my dreams. .my Prince charming. Antara said in her heart. Raghu felt that familiar presence..his heart thuded hard. "Who's there? He asked. "May Antara hu Raghu! Antara said while crying. "Antara? "Tu..tum kiyu aaii ho yaha? He asked while trying to suppress his tears. Her soft voice were like music to his ears. "May aapko lejaaney aai hu Raghu. Antara said while nearing him. He got up from the bed. Antara ran and buried herself in his and cried. "Kiyu kiya aapney aysa?" Mujhey roshni me laakar khud anderey me jee raho ho!" You are my Angel na?" Fir kiyu akela chor diya mujhey? "May aap key bina aur jee nahi sakti..chalna hoga aapko merey saath..aaj balki abhi! Antara said while sobbing on his chest. "Antara I cant come with you..please try to understand. .yahi mera ghar hai. Raghu replied. "This is not your house Raghu. .this is not where you belong..aapka ghar woh hai jaha may rah rahi hu. Antara said. Raghu's arm's came around her. Antara lifted her head and her hands reached out and cupped his cheeks. "May aapko bahut miss kar rahi hu Raghu. .may..may aapsey shaadi karlungi. Antara said in between her sobs. Raghu's heart wrenched . "Miss kaul..may andha hu ..may tumey anderey ke siwa aur kuch nai dey sakta. Raghu replied as his eyes moistened. "Mujhey aur kuch chahiye bhi nahi..mujhey sirf aap chahiye..aapka pyaar! Antara said as her tears flowed. Raghu found her cheeks and cupped it."Miss kaul meri baath sun yaar..tu merey saath khush nai rahe paayegi..Antara silenced him by putting her finger on his lips. "Mujhey aur kuch nai sunna..you are coming with me and thats final. Antara said. Meanwhile pushing and shoving the guards. .ruksana entered raghu's room. She was happy that finally they found him. Her heart cried when she saw his glasses. "Raghu! Ruksana said. Raghu opened his arms as ruksana ran and hugged him. "Tumey kiya laga thaa ki hum tujhey dhoond nai paayengey? Asked ruksana. "Love will always find a way Raghu! Ruksana continued. "Ruksana now you don't start. .miss kaul ko ghar lekar jaah. Raghu said. "May kahi nai jaaney waali samjhey aap? "I'm staying right here with you! Antara replied while hugging him tight. Raghu kissed her maang. Antara felt like she had been made whole. "You have to go antara. Raghu said lovingly. "In your dreams! Antara replied. Raghu was stuck! He had no way out. Antara wasn't parting from him. She stayed there buried in his chest. "Antara choro..He said. "May nai chorungi! Replied antara. Ruksana quickly phoned machmach..and informed him about Raghu. He was glad that raghu was safe. "Tum dono udhar hi ruk may aatah hu. Mm said. Raghu sat on the bed with antara buried on his chest. Antara wasn't letting him go. He was her everything. .her life..she missed him when they were apart..now that she found him..she will not let him go at any cost. She was re-living the moment in his arms..his protecting arms around her..his warmth that made her blood run up and down her veins. "I wont let you go Raghu! "If I have to sacrifice my life..I will happily die in your arms but I will not let you go. Antara whispered. "Sshhh! Raghu quieted her." Aysi baatey nai kaytey Antara! Raghu caressed her head lovingly. "Bhagwan karey tujhey kabhi kuch na ho. Raghu said. "Fir chalye na humarey saath. Antara said. Raghu was speechless. Ruksana entered the room with mm. Mm cried seeing his bhaai. The trio won that day. They were able to convince Raghu to go home with them. Antara was on cloud nine! Everyone of them were smiling except Raghu. Something was cooking in his mind. "Accha sa ladka dhoond ke mujhey Antara ki shaadi karani hogee. Raghu thought. Antara was sitting at the back holding Raghu's hands as mm drove. Soon they arrived at Raghu's place. Antara helped Raghu out of the jeep and into the house. Raghu and mm talked while antara and ruksana made dinner. Antara fed Raghu with her hands. Raghu cried in his heart. After dinner mm helped Raghu to freshen up. Antara tucked him in. "May bagal waaley bedroom me hu..if you need me ..awaaz dedena may aajaaongi. Antara said. "I will. .abh tum jaao aur jaakey soh jaao. Raghu said. Bidding goodnight Antara left. Raghu didn't sleep whole night. He was planning to get antara married. He thought about his friend suraj who was also a undercover cop. They will make a good couple. Thought Raghu. "He will keep her happy. Raghu thought.

Time went by. Antara was taking good care of Raghu along with mm and ruksana. Antara was also looking for a donor for Raghu's eyes. On the other side Raghu talked to suraj about marrying Antara. Suraj said he was ready. So much was happening behind Antara's Back which she didn't know. One day Raghu asked mm to write a letter to antara on behalf of him. So mm wrote. The letter read:- Miss kaul I want you to get married. You have met suraj before and I know you'll make a good couple. We dont have a future together and being blind I cant give you anything. So please mana mat karna. I have sacrificed my eyes for you toh kiya tu meri ek baath nai maan sakti? "If you really love me toh suraj se shaadi karlo. He's coming home in the evening for the ring ceremony. There's a ring in this letter ..ussey pahena dena. -Raghu. Antara's eyes filled as she read the letter. "Theek hai if you want me to marry suraj I will marry him..you gave me your eyes for my happiness toh kiya may aapkey khushi ke liye itna bhi nai kar sakti? Antara thought. Packing her things Antara left to live with ruksana. Suraj was coming to ruksana's place for the ring ceremony. On the other side mm received a phone call that Raghu has a donor for his eyes! "Please bring him over to the hospital right away. The doctor said. "All this is possible because of Antara. .she tried her very best to find a donor and look she succeeded. Doctor added. Mm drove Raghu to the hospital. "Hum kaha jaa rahey yaar tu kuch batata kiyu nai? Raghu asked in slight frustration. Helping him out of the jeep he said. "We are at the hospital because they have found a donor. Raghu was stilled. He remembered Antara's engagement in the evening. "If I get eyes to see then why should she marry suraj? Raghu thought. "Operation ke baadh i'll go straight home and stop the engagement. Raghu thought. He wanted to tell mm to inform Antara but the doctors called him inside. Mm didn't tell nobody about his surgery. .he wanted to surprise both antara and ruksana. Raghu's surgery went on hours and hours. It was almost dark when Raghu came out and was discharged. He could see! Raghu was back with new pair of eyes! "Mm drive as fast as you can..I have to stop the engagement. Raghu said. They arrived home to find no one there. "Kaha hai sab? Raghu said. His heart started to race. Mm called ruksana. She told him that Antara was with her. Mm drove towards ruksana's place. As soon as Raghu entered ruksana's house..he saw the engagement was over..Antara and suraj were taking blessings from their elders. His eye caught the sparkling ring on Antara's finger. He took backsteps..his back hit the door..he stood there numb. The wedding date was announced by the pandit. Raghu's one mistake shattered his life. He rushed for Antara"s marriage. If only he could have waited another day. Even mm's eyes widened seeing the scenario inside. Raghu saw how beautiful antara was looking but she appeared to be sad. "Ye mayney kiya kardiya? Raghu cried while ruffling his hair. "I have ruined my own life! Raghu sobbed. He came and sat in the jeep. Mm told ruksana about raghu's new eyes. She was both happy and sad. "Abh kuch nai hosakta..it's too late..they are engaged aur in few weeks they are getting married. Ruksana said sadly. Raghu was devastated. "This is all my fault! Raghu said while banging on the steering wheel.

Precap:- Antara gets very happy when she finds out about Raghu's eyes. But she doesn't want to meet him. I'm engaged. .its over between us. Antara told ruksana. Guys dont panic..manoafying scenes and rantara romance starts now. Stay tuned. Will Raghu succeed in manaoing Antara? Stick around to blush. Love to all.



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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice intersting update...ek update maub kya kya dicka diya tumne...gud...anatara engagememnt...nahi...raghu ye tune kya kiya...but really nice update dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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raghu deck saktha hai...yepppy..but ab aage kya shadi kaisi cancal hogi...ab raghu apani galti kaise sudarega..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanku for updateing dear...plzzz contioune update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
very nice update ...but raghu ne yeh kya kar diya ??? abh kya hoga ???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wowww my darling vry outstanding superab update👏👏 ek hi update m bhut kuch ho gya but story going intersting!! ab dekhna raghu kasie antara ko manta h.. waiting for rantara cute romance😳😳
Love U sweetheart😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was a lovely update quite emotional one...
poor raghu he was devastated as he lives antara
so much and wants her happy always..
so sad antara got engaged to somebody else..
hope he gets back her soon..lovely work dear...

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